love will find its way

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Posted: 2013-07-23T10:49:29Z
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~~~~Love will find its way~~~~
My very first OS about TaarRay on request of ma very dear friend shanya8 as she is a huge fan of TaaRay...i knw am swaron fan but how does it matter coz we are all D3 fans. So guys enjoy, if its enjoyable lol...plz do comment hiw do u like it. Okai i'll just shut ma gob now, u guys read...

After taani farewell...Ray is lying down in his bed...room windows are all open...its raining and lightening very badly outside...as if even the weather is also missing taani just like Ray is...& in the background the following song is playing and making ray even more sad and he cnt control his tears...
(Song)" nahi...ye ho nahi sakta..k teri yaad na aaye...tujy bhoolny se pehly meri jaan chali jay...o meri jaaan chali jaye...o meri jaan chali jayeee ( :'( )...
Ray is crying his heart out"taaani...aaah...taaani i love u...suna tumne i love u...plz muj itna bada punishment mat do k mein seh b na paon...aik baar mujy samjha tu hota...k ye sab meine tumhaty liye hi tu kiya tha...aur tum hi mujy chor k chali gai...aisa koi karta hai kya bhala..."
Ray is out of his senses & rip off the curtains,,break the dressing table...he feel like destroying every thing and set the whole world on fire...
"Aaah (looking out the window to the sky...pointing to God)
" tumy bohot maza ata hai na mjy pain mein dek kar...tum meri help q nahi karty...y cnt u see ma pain...its unbearable plz help me(break down and sit on the floor...after a while he calls swayam)
Swayam:"haan ray?
Ray: huh huh...huh huh(wheeping)
Swayam(worried):"ray kya hoa...tum ro q rahy ho...yaar u r very strong my frnd control urself"
Ray:"wo chali gai"(with painful tone)
Swayam:"ussy tu jana tha naa so chali gayi"
Ray (looks at the roof ...takes deep breath & tears roll down his face)"swayam yaar mein bohot akela feel kar raha hun..jesy sab kuch khatam hogya...jese k mein khali ho gya hun...uss ne aisa q kiya...ussy nahi jana chayie tha"(background song changes to)tu ne saat jo mera chora...deewana tera mar jaye ga... :'(
Swayam(tears in eyes) "ray mein tere ghar aa raha hun"
Ray:"haan yaar sab ko le k aaja aakhri baar sab frndz ko dekna chahta hun"
Swayam:"aakhri baar? Ray ...ray bewakuf mat ban ...koi aisa wesa kaam na karna mein abi sab ko le k aata hun sab teek.honjaye ga...plz ray tumy kasam hai tum kuch aisa wesa nahi karo gy"
Ray: " yaar bas ab sab kasmon vadon se azaad hona chahta hun...thak gya hun dard seh seh kar...ab tu dil b saat dene ko ready nahi hai...(crying) bas tum taani se jab kabi milo tu usy sorry kehna k mein uski last promise tor raha hun...aur kehna k mein usy be-intiha pyar karta hun..itna pyar k us k bina jeena saza hogya hai...shayad meri death usy ye baat proof kar dy"
Swayam(starts the car in hurry)"i m just comming tujy kuch nahi hoga or... or mein taani ko laonga...i promise launga bt tum plz cool down ho jao"
Ray cut the phone and get sleeping pills frm his bed side table and shove all of them at once into his mouth
Swayam text every one"come to ray's house now its very very urgent" and speed up to rays house
Every ones r at rays house and as thy opend his room door...find him on floor with half open eyes in tears and pain
Swayam run to him first and scream "ray! Ye kya kia tu ne"
Sharon quickly put rays head on her laps and shout for embulance...everyone is shaking and scared as thy look at ray...simmi call the ambulance

At hospital...
ray is in emergency ward...gang biting their nails and moving from one to other directing crying and praying for ray
Swayam trying calm them down and says" kuch nahi hoga hamary ray ko he is a fighter he always survive...(tears in swayam eyes)... Sharon come and hug swayam and weeping...looking at swaron every else come and do group hug...
After a while sharon tell swayam:" swayam ring taani she must be on her way i think she shud knw"
Swayam:"haan par plz tum call kar lo muj se nahi hoga"
Sharon:" sab ko himmat de rahe ho or khud itny weak (tap his shoulder) mein karti hun"
"Ting ting...ting ting...tani:hello
Sharon:"taani plz carefully meri baat suno"
Taani:"jee boliye...sab teek hai naa"
Sharon"ray ne sucide commit karny ki koshish ki hai"
Taani"kya? Sucide...ye aap kya bol rahy ho...plz aisa mazak mat kary mere saat...q k mein rukny wali nahi hun"
Sharon:" taani ye maza nahi hai ...hum sab hospital main hai ...ray is in emrgency ward in very criticle condition...tum aajao"
Taani:"kya? nahi plz aisa mat kahiye ray ko kuch nahi ho sakta...mein...mein abi arahi hun...mjy dek k bilkul teek ho jayengy wo"
After an hour an half taani enters crying and hug swayam and ask him about ray..they all gather around taani
Vikkie:"ray ne ye sab tumhari waja se kiya hai taani...warna hamara dost itna weak nahi tha k aisi bewakufi karta"
Bharat:"aby agar ussy kuch hogya na tu hum tujy nahi choren gy"
Sharon:'guys ye sab karny ka time nahi hai"
Mean while doctor come outand saY"patiant ab khatry se bahir hai but bohot weekness hai iss liye aik maheena lagy ga recover karny mein"
Everybody faces brights up with the news and swayam tell taani to go and see ray
Taani entrs the room and look at rayz pale and week face
"Ye aap ne kya kiya ray...agar aap ko kuch ho jata tu mein jee nahi paati..."
Ray open up his eyes and look at taani and thn look around the room" q bachaya mjy...q? nahi jeena mjy...or dard sehny ki himmat nahi hai muj mein"
Taani hold ray face"shuuush bas...bas...aap ko araam karna chahiye...so jaye"
Ray:"sona hi tu chahta tha hamesh k..."taani quicky put her hand on rays lips and stop him frm completing his words.
"Plz aisa mat kahiye...ray...mein ab kahi nahi jaongi...hamesa aap k paas rahungi aap ke saath saath...i m sorry...mjy maaf kar dy...meine aap ko bohot chot pohunchaiye hai" tani bend down on rayz face and kiss his forehead
Ray hold her hand and gaz at her with lots of tears in eyes"taani i love u...i really really love u"
Taani sit on the bed and put her arm around him and half lying with him"mjy pata hai aap muj se bohot pyar karty hein"
Ray:"taani mein ye sab kush karna nahi chahta tha...pata nahi kese ho gya...shayad dard itna bad gya k dil seh nahi paya or mein majboor hogya..."
Taani:" bas ab mein aagai hun naa...ab aap bikul teek ho jayengy...mein ab aap se aik pal k liye b juda nahi hungi" (hug him tightly while saying this)
Ray:" tum nahi jaogi naa(kiss her hands like obsessive lover) kabi nahi jaogi na mjy chor k"
Taani:" aik baar chor k dek liya ab kabi aisa risk nahi lungi...aap meri zindagi ho ray...agar aap ko kuch hogya tu mein apny apko maar dalungi"
Ray:"nahi plz aisa mat kaho...mein aisa kuch nahi karunga ab...tumhari kasam...bas tum mere saat hogi tu mein death se b lar lunga...mein tumse bohot pyar karta hun taani..dnt ever think of leaving me again"
Taani:(kiss ray on his lips for quite long time)"mein b aap se bohot pyar karti hun ray...bohot bohot zyada"
Ray:"tu phir aik or kiss do naa"(naughty smile on face and grab taani towards himself and kiss her erotically)"ummmah"
Right when thy kiss...the whole gang enters and see thm both so close and smile on rayz face...thy all feel happy that their rockstar ray is back...swayam get a lil uncomferable as always when see taani sitting so close to ray and arm around him...sharon pokes him tell him to be mormal"
Ray open his arms and say"come on guys group hug time"gang jumps on the bed and taani says"guys dehaan se...ussy lag jaye gi"
All the boys expt swayam" o ho ho ho lag jaye gi(copy taani)..."
Vikkie:"tani ye typical gf wala attitude ban kar okai dost hai hamara"
Ray:" A vikkie mind it haan...gf hai meri...tu gf wala atitude raky gi na, haq hai ussy"taani get all shy pink
All the boys together"ary gf k liye dosto ko bhool jaye ga"
Ray:ary is k liye tu mein dunya chor sakta hun...maang k tu deky"
Nell:" guys ray mein swayam ki aatma ghuss gai hai...romantic and alll haaan"
Every one on the room laughs...ray hold taani close to him and kiss her forehead...tani.put her head on rays shoulder and feel very complete after long long time.
Indeed love found its way in Taaray's hearta.


:   Edited by Swaron.maniac - 2013-07-23T10:51:18Z
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Posted: 2013-07-23T11:08:44Z
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OMG this OS was heart touching Cry
I had a huge smile plastered on my face while reading this OS Smile  Smile
awesome Clap
I have no words to describe Clap 
amazing Clap
Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 2013-07-23T11:16:17Z
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Posted: 2013-07-23T12:36:52Z
Glad u like it...thnx...being swaron fan iam proud i broght.smile.on taaray fan.as its criticle time for thm.due to vrinda is no more part of d3...
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Posted: 2013-07-23T15:31:24Z
Ammie!!! Ammie!! Ammie!!!
Love you so much for this OS...
Thanks a lot, dear for writing an OS on TaaRey being a SwaRon fan...
I really really appreciate this gesture and kindness of yours..

Coming to the update, I am speechless...
I really dont know what to say..
This was the continuation of the track where Taarey ended..
And you have continued it brilliantly..
loved it a lot..
Rey was in so much pain..
He had no desire to live anymore..
He loves Taani so much..
I was crying so much while reading that part where you described Rey's condition, his pain..
Gosh!!! that was really painful..
You wrote it really very beautifully..
And Loved Swayam and the gang's care for him..
Thank God!! They took him to hospital on the correct time..
And Taani..
Thank God!! She came..
And Rey was so relieved..Infact I was relieved to see them...
From that part, I was smiling like a maniac..
Loved the TaaRey reunion a lot..

Thank you so much, Ammie..
I really loved every bit of this OS..
Thanks a lot..
Love you!!!Hug
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Posted: 2013-07-23T16:30:38Z
OMG!! I can even express how I feel after reading your OS !! It was wonderful and Painful !! Super Amazing Work !! Really Enjoyed every bit of this OS !! Thank You So Much Fpr Writing this wonderful piece of work !!
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Posted: 2013-07-23T16:32:06Z
God aysh thnx sweetheart... Am so glad u.liked it...i lnw how upset u r since taani left but this shud heal u a lil if nt alot...thnx once again for such amazing comments...u always encourage me. I love u so sooo much for that
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Posted: 2013-07-23T17:47:24Z
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Pehle to u being a swaron fan wrote a taarey os...uske liye sooo much thankuuu!!! Hug
Coming to d os...it really made me cry...d way u described rey's pain Cry Cry...
N den he tried to committ suicide Shocked...i was really crying Cry...he was so broken
Bt luckily swayam n d gang reached on tym...n took him to d hospital!
N den wen taani entered rey's ward...little emotional talks...n den their chotasa romance...n taani kissing rey Shocked Embarrassed Embarrassed
Den d gang entered n telling rey me swayam ki aatma ghus gayi hai LOL LOL ...it was soo sweet of rey to say dat gf hai to gf ka saara haq hai taani ko Day Dreaming Embarrassed
Lovely os...n one thing i hav to say dat ur hindi is exceptionally gud Clap Clap ...which u showed in ur dialouges!!
Thanku soo much...ur an amazing writer Big smile Big smile Big smile
Edited by shikha1997 - 2013-07-23T19:33:56Z
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Posted: 2013-07-23T19:25:23Z
Amazing os
awesome luvd it ;-)
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