FF: Tum Mile- Chapter 18 on Page 16, Very Important Note on Page 19!

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Posted: 2013-07-22T22:21:50Z
Hey guys,

I post this FF on RKR (RamKapoorRocks) and even on the Sakshi Tanwar fan website, so a lot of you might be reading it ove there. I will post the first update and will continue if you guys let me. Please comment!


CHAPTER 1 (Part 1)

In Kapoor Industries:

The very rich businessman Ram Kapoor, was sitting in his office in his cabin, with his hands on his forehead. He was just too stressed and shocked to work with his business work. His thoughts got interrupted when Jenny, Ram's assistant, knocked on the door.

Jenny: 'May I come in sir?'
Ram (impatiently): 'Kya hai?'
Jenny: 'Sir, aapko yaad hai na ki aaj aapne ek meeting rakhe hai. Voh meeting pandra minute mein shuru honevaala hai, aap jaldi se aa jaayiyega. Saare employees apne presentations dikhane ke liye tayyar hai'.
Ram: 'Meine tumhe remind karne ke liye kaha kya?'
Jenny: 'Haan sir, kal subah aapne mujhe remind karne ke liye kaha'.
Ram: 'Teek hai, ab mein jo keh raha hoon, vahi karna. Tum voh meeting cancel kar do, aur mujhe akhela chod do. Mujhe kissi se baat nahi karni hai, got that? Aur phone calls bhi nahi chahiye, aur jitna bhi important hai, mujhe kuch farak nahi padnevaala. I just wanna be alone, aur Vikram ko yahan bhulao please, aur hume disturb bhi mat karna. Teek hai?'
Jenny: 'Lekin sir, everybody's ready with their presentations. Aaj ka meeting bohot important hai, aapko miss nahi karni chahiye'.
Ram: 'Boss kaun hai yahan? Tum ya mein? Aur sunayi nahi diya tumhe? I said go and get Vikram, Jenny. Kya hua tumhe? What is wrong with you? Tum teek tho ho na?'
Jenny: 'Sorry sir, mein voh meeting cancel kar dungi aur Vikram sir ko yahan bhej dungi. Aapko paani chahiye tablets ke liye?'
Ram (angrily): 'Arre yaar, what do you want? Tum baar-baar itna sawal kyun poochti ho? Meine jo bhi kaha, tum chup chaap se kar nahi sakthi? Aur meine kab kaha ki mujhe tablets ke liye paani chahiye? Please leave Jenny varna mein apna gussa nahi control kar paaoonga, just LEAVE! And for the 100th time, please, for god's sake, meine jo kaha, vahi karo, please! I don't want you here'.
Jenny leaves the room in disappointment and mutters to herself how angry Ram Kapoor can get. She closes the door behind her and Ram also bangs himself on the head.
Ram (getting more angry): 'Arre yaar, ab meine uss par kyun chilaaya? What is wrong with me? Uski galati kya thi? Lekin voh bhi mujhe akhela chod sakthi hai, baar-baar sawal poochke aur gussa bana diya uss ne'.

In Sharma House:

Priya Sharma, putting kajal on under her beautiful, caring eyes, was still worried about the situation. Now that her closest family member...passed away, she was still in depression deep down inside, but never expressed it to her other family members. She immediately faked up a loving smile as soon as she saw her mother, Shipra Sharma, standing and looking at her helplessly but lovingly.
Shipra (walking towards Priya): 'Aaj lectures dene ki kya zaroorat hai beta? Tu aaj chutti kyun nahi leti? Maa hoon teri, mujhe pata chalta ki kya tere man mein kya guzzar rahi hai. Tu chinta mat kar beta, sab kuch teek ho jaayega, sab kuch vaisa hi hoga jaise ki tu chaathi hai'.
Priya: 'Nahi maa, it's okay. Ab ghar mein bethe-bethe kya karungi? Aur agar mein uske baare men sochungi tho mere man ke andar shaanti nahi milega, aur mujhe vahi chahiye, shaanti. And I don't wanna think about it, lekin baar-baar, vahi mere khayalon mein aati hai. Iss liye mein classes jaaoongi. Aur last minute mein aise drop thodi kar sakthi, accha nahi lagega. Mujhe 2 din ka notice dena padega, aadhe ghante ki nahi!'
Shipra: 'Chal chod, zaroori nahi hai ki hum baar-baar uske baare mein sochein. Naashta kiya kya?'
Priya: 'Arre nahi, aur karungi bhi kaise? Pett tho bhar gayi hai maa, aur nahi kha paaoongi mein. Chalo, mein chalti hoon, bohot der ho rahi hai'.
Just then, as Priya was about to leave, someone clutched her wrist. She immediately recognized who it was, she got irritated and didn't want to get frustrated.
Priya (irritably): 'Neha, ghar jaao. Please, mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai yaar, just go na'.
Neha: 'Tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho tab tak tum mujhe nahi batati ho ki hua kya hai. Bata rahi ho ya nahi?'
Neha Shergill was Priya's best friend. They met in a college where they both are lecturers who give lectures to students in college but Neha left the college and she's now a dance teacher.
Shipra: 'Priya, tu Neha par mat chilla beta. Meine hi usse yahan bhulaayi, tere liye. Tu har baat Neha ko batati hai aur yeh bhi batayegi tu. Dekh beta, mujhe pata hai ki kya hua hai yahan aur yeh baat tu bhi jaanti hai. Lekin mujhe yeh nahi pata hai ki tere dil mein kya beeth rahi hai! Mujhe sirf yeh pata hai ki tu pareshaan hai aur iss liye meine Neha ko kahan bhulaayi'.
Neha: 'And, you're classes start only at 1:00. Pata hai kya time hai ab Priya? It's only 10:00, aur tum apne maa jo jhut kyun bholne lagi ho?'
Priya: 'Tumhe kaise pata ki mere shift dus bhaje se hi shuru hoti hai?'
Neha: 'Kal humare ek plan thi ki hum dono dinner ke liye bahar jaayenge, aur tumne khud kaha ki tumhare classes ek bhaje se shuru hoti hai. Tum please betho, aur batao ki tumhe kya pareshaani hai'.

In Kapoor Industries:

In Ram's cabin, Vikram Shergill, Ram's best friend who he had known for a very long time, was sitting in front of him and trying to calm him down. They have known each other since they met in college and they are very best friends since then.
Vikram: 'Tho, yeh baat hai? Tu fikar mat kar Ram, please. Tere sehat ke liye teek nahi hai yeh pareshaani. Aur fikar karne ki zaroorat bhi kya hai? Sirf pyaar ho gaya hai, aur kya ho gaya? Kuch chori ho gayi hai kya? Nahi na! Baat bhi itni badi nahi hai, aur agar tu aise hi stressed rahega tho baat aur bighad ho jaayegi. Tu samajhta kyun nahi?'
Ram: 'Kyunki mein samajh nahi saktha! Mein faisla nahi le paaoonga Vikram, it's just horrible. Uski khushi ke liye mein apne jaan bhi dene ke liye tayyar hoon lekin mein usse udaas bhi nahi dekh sakthi. Aur mujhe faisla lena hi padega, mein kya kahunga? Haan ya naa? Yeh kya ho raha hai mere saath?'
Vikram: 'Vahi jo sab parivaar se hota hai. It happens in all houses, aur aaj tere saath bhi ho raha hai. Tu ek baar baat sun kyun nahi saktha tha uski?'
Ram: 'Kyunki mein itni hairani mein thi ki mein aage ka baat nahi sun paata kyunki aage ka baat tho sunke mein mar jaata. Mein sirf yeh keh saktha hoon ki usne galat kiya'.
Vikram: 'Kyun? Pyaar karna galat baat hoti hai kya?'
Ram: 'Nahi lekin chuppana bhi teek nahi hai! Voh mujhe pehle kyun nahi bata sakthi thi? Things would have been much more easier!'
Vikram: 'Lekin jo ho gaya voh ho gaya! Ab tu yeh soch ki aage kya karna chahiye. Aur ab tu sab kuch teek bhi kar saktha hai, right?'
Ram: 'WRONG! Mein kuch nahi kar saktha ab yaar, seriously kuch bhi nahi! And you know what? Meine socha ki mein mana kar doon iss shaadi ke liye, matlab, mere se nahi hoga'.
Vikram: 'Arre of course hoga! Dekh Ram, I know what is in your mind right now. Mujhe pata hai ki tere dil mein kya beeth rahi hai. Aur agar tu apne choti ko khush dekhna chaatha hai, tho kam se kam mil tho le uss parivaar se! What's wrong in meeting them? Aise thodi hai ki voh ladka ek criminal hai! Come on yaar Ram, be sensible, Nutz itni bhi stupid nahi hai ki voh ek criminal se pagalon ki tarah pyaar karein. Vaise, uss ladka ka naam kya hai?'

In Sharma House:

Neha: 'Arre tum chinta kyun kar rahi ho Priya? Sab kuch teek hi hoga, I promise you! Tumhe apne aapko sambhalna padega, aise kaise chalega? Agar tum himmat nahi rakhti ho tho baaki sab apne aapko kaise sambhalenge?'
Priya: 'Papa ke jaane ke baad, sab kuch alag raasthe par chal rahi hai Neha. Sab kuch badal gaya hai, iss ghar mein ek din bhi ke liye shaanti nahi hai. Sab itne pareshaan hai ki mein bhi soch nahi paa rahi hoon ki mein kya karoon? Kartik bada ho gaya hai, aur meine kitna bharosa kiya uss par. Aur meine kabhi bhi socha nahi ki voh mere se baat chuppayega aise. Pehle kyun nahi bata saktha tha? Aur jis tarah se mujhe pata chala, voh teek nahi tha. Can you imagine? Mein chai dene ke liye gayi thi, aur darvaza band tha, so I just opened the door aur Kartik uss ladki se aise baat kar raha tha ki voh sach mein usse pyaar karta hai, it was just so very obvious! Phir sab kuch badal gaya Neha, sab kuch. Ab mein kya karoon, tum hi bata do mujhe, what do I do?'
Neha: 'Naam kya hai uss ladki ka?'

In Kapoor Industries:

Vikram: 'What? Phir se bata ki naam kya hai?'
Ram: 'Tere kaan ko kuch hua hai kya? Doctor ko bhula doon? KARTIK!'
Vikram: 'Arre tu bhi na Ram. Vaise, tujhe hi tez bholna padega varna mujhe sunayi nahi deta. In fact, kissi ko sunayi nahi deta. Come on yaar Ram, cheer up! Pyaar karna bilkul ek galat baat nahi hoti, really'.
Ram: 'Lekin meine kab kaha ki pyaar karna ek galat baat hai? Tujhe pata hai ki jab se voh aurat humare zindagi mein nikal chuki hai, choti itni badal gayi hai! She was so spoilt then, usse sab kuch milta tha, aur usse cheezon ki value kabhi nahi samajh mein aaya! Aur mujhe laga tha ki choti ab aur sensible ho gayi hai and all that lekin voh mujhse baat chuppane lagi hai, jaise ki mein nahi samajhta ki voh kya situation mein bethi hai! I'm her brother yaar, bhai hoon uski. Mera hak banta hai yeh sab jaane ki, agar voh mujhe nahi batati, tho voh mujhe bhai kaise bhula sakthi hai? Kya voh mujh par bharosa nahi karti?'
Vikram: 'Of course karti hai, khud se zyaada bhi karti hai! Lekin usse pata tha ki tu aisa hi react karega, ki tere reaction aisa hi hoga, aur voh yeh nahi chaathi hai kyunki voh Kartik ke bina jee nahi paayegi. First love can never be forgotten Ram, really, voh dard hamesha rehta hai. And voh dono saccha pyaar karte hai ek doosre ki, aur mein yeh baat acchi tarah se jaanta hoon kyunki Nutz is smart, voh apne choices bohot carefully leti hai. Aur agar usse pyaar hua hai, tho trust me Ram, it's complete true love. Ab kya karna hai, aur kaise karna hai, aur kab karna hai and all that, tere haath par hai. She left it all up to you. Agar tu Nutz ko khush dekhna chahega, tho tujhe koshish karna padega iss situation mein himmat rakhne ki'.

In Sharma House:

Neha: 'Wait, batao na ki ladki ka naam kya hai'.
Priya: 'Tum pagal ho jaaogi Neha, agar tumhe pata chalta hai ki voh ladka kaunsi ladki ko pyaar karti hai. Really, it's just atrocious. Mein bhi iss shock se bahar nahi nikli hoon'.
Neha: 'Arre lekin kaun hai?'
Priya: 'Natasha. The Natasha Kapoor'.
Neha: 'What? You mean the famous fashion designer? Voh vaali Natasha Kapoor?'
Priya: 'Haan, voh vaali. Ab tum mujhe bata do ki iss ladka ka kya karoon mein?'
Neha didn't say anything. She didn't even react, or do anything. Priya shook her and a smile spread across Neha's face.
Priya (surprised): 'Kya hua? Aise kya dekh rahi ho?'
Neha: 'Natasha Kapoor! Mein jaanti hoon usse, voh...voh, I know her so well!'
Priya: 'Shut up Neha, even I know her. Sab log usse jaante hai, what nonsense you're talking about'.
Neha: 'Arre lekin mein usse bohot acchi tarah se jaanti hoon! Arre just hear me out! Jab mein aur Vikram college mein the, hum dono the Ram Kapoor se mile the aur hum theeno dost ban gaye the, and then slowly our bond became so strong that we all are very, very, very best friends. Meine tumhe bataaya nahi, lekin kabhi zaroori nahi samjhi mein. Tho mein Nutz ko bhi jaanti hoon bohot acchi tarah se, and ab tumhare paas ek aur raastha aa gayi hai. Mein aur Vikram tum dono ka meeting ka arrangements karenge, tum fikar mat karna, teek hai?'
Priya: 'Lekin uska kya faida hoga yaar? Vahan kya karungi mein?'
Neha: 'Arre, tum samajhti kyun nahi? Dekho, mein Vikram se baat karungi, aur phir tum dono Nutz aur Kartik ke rishtedar ke baare mein baat karenge, aur phir jo bhi hoga, usse hone dete hai. Simple!'
Priya: 'Nahi Neha, that's just not done. Tumhe kaise pata ki yeh work karega? Nahi, I don't think so'.
Neha: 'Arre mein Ram ko bohot acchi tarah se jaanti hoon, really. Tum dono ka mulakat hona chahiye apne bhai-behen ke liye. Please yaar, this is the only easy way out. Kitna stress logi tum?'
Priya: 'I'm not so sure about it Neha, mujhe nahi lagta ki yeh sahi hai. Kuch aur sochte hai na yaar, iski kya zaroorat hai?'
Neha: 'Arre kya farak padta hai? After all, tum vahi land up karogi. You'll end up meeting him! Tho why don't we make it simpler and just finish it off now? Kitna aur stress logi yaar tum? Tum dono ek doosre ko milo, aur phir uske baad, hum betkar sochenge ki aage badhna chahiye ya phir baat ko vahin chodna chahiye. Milne mein kya problem hai?'
Priya: 'Arre aisi baat nahi hai, lekin mein the Ram Kapoor se kaise mil sakthi hoon? That's just awkward yaar Neha, please. Dekho, aise thodi hai ki yahi solution hai, kuch aur bhi soch sakthe hai hum. Please, why this yaar?'
Neha: 'Chalo, I can understand but yeh khushi ke baat hai. Awkwardness aur khushi ko compare karke, definitely it's khushi yaar. I can understand ki tumhe shayad teek nahi lag raha hoga lekin mein tumhare saath rahungi, poori conversation mein, I'll be there with you. Agar kuch ho jaata hai, tho mein aur Vikram sambhal lenge, tumhe tension lene ki koi zaroorat nahi padega'.
Priya: 'Yeh baat bhi hai. Chalo, tum sahi keh rahi ho lekin voh dar mein bahar nahi nikal paaoongi. Mein sochti hoon iss baare mein. Anyways, tum thodi der ke liye aur rukh sakthi ho ya phir ghar mein kaam hai?'
Neha: 'Arre nahi nahi, I can stay for longer. Chalo mein tumhare liye juice lekar aati hoon, just relax. Sab kuch teek ho jaayega'.
Priya gave a hesitant nod to Neha and shut her eyes. She had to think about this. This was also one of the toughest phases of her life.

PRECAP: VIKRAM SHOWS RAM A PICTURE OF PRIYA AND RAM IS SHOCKED. PRIYA AGREES TO MEET RAM BUT STILL FEELS AWKWARD. WILL SHE CANCEL THE MEETING AT THE LAST MOMENT?

Sorry for any spelling mistakes or anything like that. :) Thanks once again!!



Edited by SanjanaS. - 2013-11-26T19:38:02Z
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Posted: 2013-07-22T23:47:29Z
please continue. and next time please PM me if possible.Smile
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Posted: 2013-07-23T00:07:01Z
Already read it very nice story thx 4 posting here, pls continue 
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Posted: 2013-07-23T00:13:39Z
Super..

Mujhe precap bahut interesting lag raha hai ,shaadi fix karaani hai Nutz aur Karthik, Rambabu ko photo dikhaya jaa raha hai PRIYA kiWinkWink accha hai. continue..LOLLOL
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Posted: 2013-07-23T03:21:09Z
Nice start..
Cont soon..
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Posted: 2013-07-23T05:57:56Z
Nice part...contn soon...
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Posted: 2013-07-23T06:19:07Z
Originally posted by shamavi


continue
Thank you!
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Posted: 2013-07-23T06:20:17Z
nice one, do continue, just want to suggest u one thing that do give gaps between the conversations, otherwise all gets jumbled up, if possible then PM me next timeSmile 
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