SS**Dard ka Rishta** updated part-8 PG-64

Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Guys 😊
This is my first work on Raya. Earlier I have written on Sinal (Parichay)..
Just a concept came to my mind.. 😉

     *Dard ka Rishta*

Kuch Dard zindgi cheen lete hai...

Kuch Dard zindgi de jate hai...

Kuch aise hi Dard Ram r Priya ki zindgi mein aaye...
Yein vo Dard tha jisne unhe hamesha ke liye ek kar diya..
Dard se gehra koi rishta nahi hota...
Kaun jaane ki ek Dard sab kuch cheen leta hai.. To vahi Dard samay ke sath sab kuch de jata hai...

Ram closed his dairy.. With a smile..
Soon he hears the Priya's voice..
Priya-Ram where r u..?? Dinner ir ready..!! Plz cm soon m feeling hungry..
Ram-Coming Priya...
Soon they did their dinner with each others hand... & Priya after dinner gives him sweet..
Ram-Priya iz this my dessert.. Dont u knw wats my dessert..showing his cheek to her..
Priya- with a blush on her face.. Ramm.. & kisses on his cheek.. Left for leanning kitchen & all..

Ram too leaves for his room.. In the room he again takes his dairy & opens the page 9th feb 2013..
Exact 6months back...
Stort in fb..

Ram-Aaj maine usse hamesha ke liye kho diya...
Why me only..hv to suffer everything..


Its my first attempt on Raya..
If u feel i should continue it..

Do hit LIKE button..
And do leave ur comments with suggesstion..

for pm kindly add me to ur buddy list..😊

Part-1 pg-1
Part-2 pg-5
Part-3 pg-11
Part-4 pg-20
Part-5 pg-31
Part-6 pg-44
Part-7 pg-51
Part-8 pg-64
Sagar..


Edited by sinalbest - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome start
plz cont

its sounds interesting
Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice and interesting too...
Do cont soon
Posted: 10 years ago
glad k u hv started writing on Raya ðŸ˜Š
it was good start par itna chota
continue soon ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 10 years ago
Hey sagar..
Nice start nd story with ram's dairy entries looks interesting.. 👍🏌
Beautifull lines at starting on dard.. 👏
Do cont soon nd plz pm me next time u update..Edited by vironikajain - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by .sangs123.


awesome start
plz cont

its sounds interesting

thank u.. will continue soon..😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by 123fiza1


Very nice and interesting too...
Do cont soon

Thank u..😊 will continue soon..
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by peeyara


glad k u hv started writing on Raya ðŸ˜Š-- yes,,😉😆
it was good start par itna chota-- short is always sweet.. actuly i update from office..😆
continue soon ðŸ˜Š- sure
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by vironikajain


Hey sagar..- hello VJ😊.. hope u dint mind calling u as VJ
Nice start nd story with ram's dairy entries looks interesting.. 👍🏌 -- thank u..😊
Beautifull lines at starting on dard.. 👏 -- basicly i am poet.. but a long back started ff's.. u can see more lines in my writing..😉
Do cont soon nd plz pm me next time u update..
-- sure.. add me to ur pm list..
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by lpsakshi


continue its good
thanku ðŸ˜Š

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