New SS: Tere Ishq Mai, last part updated on 142

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Posted: 2013-07-08T04:28:20Z

HEY EVERYONE! AS I SAID I DO HAVE ONE STORY IN MY MIND, SO I THOUGHT I WOULD GIVE U A PROLOGUE AND THEN AFTER SEEING THE RESPONSE I WILL THINK ABOUT THE FURTHER PLOT.

SO HERE U GO:

Shipra to niharika: Priya ek bar Ram se aur sudhir se baat karna chahti hai

Niharika: aap neeche jayie mai baat karti hu Priya se

Inside room: priya was continuosly calling Ram on his cell but he was not picking her call. She murmurs, "Ram please pick  up the phone, I neeed to talk to you, please'its important". There ram switched off his cell n thinks, "ye Priya bhi na, aaj meri shhaadi hai  still mujhe tang kar rahi hai"

Niharika enters the room.

Priya: aap ne papa  aur Ram se kaha k mujhe unse baat karni hai

Niharika: nahi

Priya: par kyu?

Niharika: Priya is waqt tumhare papa is halat mai nahi hai k tumse kuch keh sake

Priya pleadingly: par aunty aap janti hai k meri lyf k saare decisions sirf papa hi lete hai aur phir ye toh itna bada decision hai aur Ram, kya wo iss shaadi ke liye tayyar hoga, aap jante ho wo  kabhi haan nhi kahega

Niharika: janti hu Priya k wo kabhi haan nahi kahega isiliye  usey abhi tak nhi bataya, tumhari ek haan se Ram ki aur tumhare papa ki dono ki izzat  bach jayegi, please Priya'.shayad tumhare papa bhi yehi chahte hai

Priya: par Ram ko jhoot aur dhoke se sakt nafrat hai, jab usey pata chalega ki uski shaadi mujhse hui hai wo bhi usey bataye bagair aur di apne boyfriend k saath bhag gayi hai toh aap janti ho kya anjam hoga?

Niharika: tum Ram se bahot pyar karti ho na, hamesha se

Priya stood dumfounded. She stammers: aap'.apko kaise pata?

Niharika: sawal ye nhi hai, tum pyar karti ho usse?

Priya with tears flowing  from her eyes says yes.

Niharika: kya tum chahogi k uski badnaami ho, wo abhi business world mai apni image bana raha hai aur agar aaj uski shaadi nhi hui toh uski kitni badnaami hogi tum ye jaanti ho

Priya cryingly: haan mai hamesha se chahti thi k meri shaadi Ram se ho par is tarha usey andhere mai rakh kar nahi

Niharika: Priya ye tym emotional hone ka nahi hai, zara khidki ke bahar dekho tumhare ma papa ki kya halat hai, mujhe jo kehna tha wo maine keh diya, ab aage tumhari marzi

With that Niharika left the room. Priya stand near the window n looks at her parents. They were completely shattered after her sister has eloped from the marriage and she glances at Ram too, who was so happy n smile was not leaving his face. He was so excited that he was going to marry the girl to whom he loves.

Priya had to decide her fate.  Though she always dreamt of marrying Ram but not under this circumstances''..without informing Ram'.. she knew Ram's anger n also how much he hate people who deceives him or cheat him. She don't want to marry him thinking what if after marriage if she loses his friendhip too. But Niharika was also right, it will bring him bad name n there are many rivals who can bring him much defame. He is very near to be the number one businessman of country and also her father reputation is also at stake.

She is totally caught between her heart n mind. She don't know to whom to follow: mind or Heart? She has never thought that her life will take her to the point where she has to take such a drastic decision.

So what will Priya do? Will she marry Ram or not?

What do u guys think should be her decision? Should she marry him or not?

Do leave your comment.

I have posted this prologue just to know ur opinion. If u people thinks it's a good story then I will continue it otherwise  I'll not write this story.  I have not even decided the name of the story, if u ppl want me to continue then pls do suggest names too. I don't promise but I will definitely try to give update if I get some free tym.


character sketch: page-11

ch-1:page-15

ch-2:page-20

ch-3:page-25

ch-4:page-31

ch-5:page-39

ch-6:page-48

ch-7:page-57

ch-8:page-65

ch-9:page-69

ch-10:page-81

ch-11:page-87

ch-12:page-96

ch-13:page-106

ch-14:page-112

ch-15:page-119

ch-16:page-129

ch-17:page-142

Edited by peeyara - 2013-10-03T10:19:07Z
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Posted: 2013-07-08T04:33:34Z
me first Party

nice concept dear Tongue
but ram priya se nahi karthe pyaar Ouch
koi baat nahi shayad future main karengey Wink
aur ye nihi itna achii kaise ban gayi LOL
looking forward to it
a small question
how many parts is this ss Confused Edited by .sangs123. - 2013-07-08T04:43:19Z
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Posted: 2013-07-08T04:41:38Z
i have seen such concept some where don't rememberConfused
but looking forwardConfused
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Posted: 2013-07-08T05:25:12Z
interesting story
with different concept
pls continue this ff
waiting for first part
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Posted: 2013-07-08T05:30:07Z
nice one update karo jaldi
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Posted: 2013-07-08T06:18:08Z
nice and interesting start...pls continue.
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Posted: 2013-07-08T06:43:09Z
like 
kS 

 looking forward to see
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Posted: 2013-07-08T06:49:55Z
Hi hi 
Yeh tum Ayesha ko Didi kyon bana rahi ho apne har  SS mein, aur bhaga deti ho usse shaadi ke din Ram se. LOLLOL
Kahi na kahi hum sab yahi chahte hai ki Ram -Priya mile.
Hope it is not the same as ur other FF 'HUm dono alag alag '

Ussi concept ko alag angle se dikhana chah rahi ho to chalta hai..
Edited by bpatil3 - 2013-07-08T06:51:57Z
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