New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7) - Page 27

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BadtameezBrat @BadtameezBrat IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

wow awesome update dear...
umm m really luving ur ths ff... its so balanced... spl m luving bg of d story...
n d way u describing abhay n pia's life... is amazing... we can relate with abhay... n also luved abhay's bonding with misha... would luv to read more abt thm...
n d emo end was very touchy... smtimes u need nearone to jst be with u... n pia trying to be with him.. superb... .. very well written... tanzie... 👏...

btw y u said ths is ur most neglected ff 🤔... from ur side or from readers side 🤔😛... jst would say.. m luving ur ff... plz update soon... 😊

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Himanshu singh chauhan @himanshu1990 Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome storyline. Very different and intersting.

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Mrs.mohit sehgal @.Chashmish. IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Comment upd on pg 34 Edited by Mohit-deewani - 10 years ago

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Ramona @PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Amazing update Tanzie :)

feeling sad for Abhay. Liked the Abhiya moment.

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megha sharma @MS-meghasharma IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

superduper hit update tanzie.

everything in this ff is just too interesting and with every update it leaves me wanting to read more of it.

abhay and pia though they both live in different world altogether they are both very much alike . the convo b/w hasini and pia was nice and i really felt sad for hasini...poor women almost sacrificed her life and her daughter doesn't even wanna see her. that's tragic.

i do feel that pia might keep herself away from abhay later on due to the kind of treatment meted out to hasini by her bf.

both abhay and pia are the occupants of the lonely corners.

that party that pia attended was so ugh..but still she had to and i lvd how abhay also did something out of his routine and made tme for his friends. liked how he was warning her to be careful in the party ...it seems he had started caring for her.

that men was pathetic who hit pia...disgusting and it's sad also that even though pia hate it there's nothing she can do. no one deserves this kind of abuse .

lvd how pia went to abhay and took care of him.i lvd the emotional quotient in the chapter.

simply amazing and fab update.

loved loved loved it!!!

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bellaaa @bellaaa IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

fantastic update tanzie !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved the abhiya conversation on cell phne ... i wish abhay locate the house of piya ...
ohhh shit why haseena did such a shameful act ... poor abhay
last scene was heart broken 😒

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Trishna @trishnawaliya IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

i am wordless after reading this update... they both find gud company in each other... a way to get out of lonely corners... lovely work

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bhamiti @-Monayaholic- Groupbie

Posted: 10 years ago

awesome update its simply lovely...

😊

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Nikvi29 @Nikvi29 IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow tanzie beautifully written

I just read the last three chapters

And each chapter gets better than the last one

I love how u write so beautifully

I think there is more to the story then abhay sees about his mom

I think maybe she might be hiding something

I felt really bad for abhay but I am glad piya came for him

Piya I feel bad for her poor girl got bruised Whats her story? I know you will not tell us so soon

She is an enigma

I wonder will piya ever open up to abhay

Thanks for the pms

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rhtkumar672 @rhtkumar672 Newbie

Posted: 10 years ago

It has been a long time. Please update this awesome FF. Edited by rhtkumar672 - 10 years ago

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New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7) - Page 27

BadtameezBrat @BadtameezBrat IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Himanshu singh chauhan @himanshu1990 Senior Member

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Mrs.mohit sehgal @.Chashmish. IF-Sizzlerz

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