New AbhIya FF:The Toxic Affair(pg68,Chpt10,Nov7)(Page 27)

Posted: 2013-11-08T00:29:55Z
another amazing update .To say that the story gets more interesting with every update would be an understatement tanzie.
lvd how pia literally told him on his face that he is too lonely and i can understand why abhay is like this after everything he has endured. actually there's no one to care for him and everyone he trusted has betrayed him.
i hate men who treat women like garbage and pia's client was a terrible men.feel bad for her too as even though she hated these things still she has to bear all of this . the restaurant scene was was good and light hearted.
i hate farzia!!!
Posted: 2013-11-08T01:55:33Z
Amazing update..!!
Story is so interesting both Abhiya are so diff and mysterious loving it..!!
Posted: 2013-11-08T03:45:15Z
Tanzie soo lovely update dearHug...Abhiya moment soo sweet...waiting for next Abhiya meeting with a toxic affairWink...continue soon
Posted: 2013-11-08T04:19:47Z
tanz i didnt read this story except the first chappy.Smile...and i didnt read the chappys which u recently updated of other stories!! the reason is i am extremly busy with my studies and i dont get time enough to come online and read!!Cry i am sorry but dont stop pming me...i will surely read when i get time!! u know that i love ur storiesEmbarrassedsorry againOuch
Posted: 2013-11-08T05:22:12Z
Beautiful update...res..
Posted: 2013-11-08T05:27:39Z
Awesome Chapter so Pia knows Abhay is lonely and he is not accepting it but I think both has started liking each other's company. Waiting for the next update eagerly.
Posted: 2013-11-08T09:34:39Z
Amazing update Thumbs Up
ohh!!poor abhayUnhappykitna akela hai!!!felt bad for him..Disapprove
love all abhiya scenes..Big smile
oh god!!Farzia is too much..hating her.
Posted: 2013-11-08T10:20:59Z
superb update
liked it very much
it is very close to have shown the reality, power games, tricks, emptiness of glamour world aptly. when you mentioned about farzia i could easily imagine that kind of women working in a corporate house...your writing, the plot of the story...characterization  of abhiya...everything is very believable.
liked the abhiya date n convo...both are lonely ...hope they find some solace in each others company.

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