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Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15* - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
loved the concept. I wish serial me aisa kuch dekh ne ko milta. I'm a sucker for angst and dark stories. 3rd part tomorrow i guess?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey!
This was heart touching both the parts...
U knw this is the thing which actually happens with people...
Whenever a wife questions her husnband..he gave her tag of insecure..and weak woman...
But our khushi isn't weak..she will fight i knw...and will make that ASR repent for his words and for his deed...
I know helee...the next part is gonna awsome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh sad,loved your work ,please do pm me.😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it H very touchy...
I am feeling sad for khushi for all that he said to her, but truth to be told, seriously her antics sometimes use to blow me up i myself use to feel so embrace, she was too much at times.
But still i didn't expect Arnav to go so harsh on her he could have handle it bit softly.
Lets see further, you must have planned something good for them.
waiting thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: vinu.sr

holy cow!!! that is as realistic as any fight between husband and wife would be if it was over a third person in the relationship...


the lyrics of Beyonce's song suits this so well:

If I were a boy, I think I could understand
How it feels to love a girl
I swear I'd be a better man.
I'd listen to her 
Cause I know how it hurts
when you lose the one you wanted
Cause he's taken you for granted
And everything you had got destroyed
...
"why are you so jealous, its not like I am sleeping with the girl"
...
But you're just a boy
You don't understand


Hey this is me again  can you please include me in your pm list? Or let me know if I should buddy you?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey...

U r gonna make it a three shot???!!!! Yay...

Feel so sad for Khushi...Why is only she hurt everytime...

Did Arnav just say that he will marry Sheetal?????I hate u...For now...

Lets hope everything is back in place...

Do continue soon !!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing, yet very emotional, painful and heart breaking update.

Written exceptionally well and a brilliant read,

So glad Arnav actually realised something was wrong with Khushi and actually asked her.

Wow there confrontation was really intense and heartbreaking, I can't believe how cruel Arnav was and Khushi is suppose to be the woman he loves. 

I can't believe Arnav is letting his ego get the better of him and he actually said he should have married sheetal. 

I don't even know if they can even resolve this problem, as Arnav said some really hurtful things to Khushi and he left her distraught and heart broken.

I honestly would not mind if Khushi actually left Arnav and then he could happily spend his time with sheetal.

Loved the update, amazing writing.

Eager to read more, hopefully this will be turned into a short story.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG! I hope you continue this. You just cant stop here!
It was so heart-wrenching to read about Khushi's pain.  You wrote this quite well and I can't believe Arnav said that! What a jerk..
I felt sad all over again!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update! Im so happy Khushi made an effort to communicate. Thank you for not butchering her character like the creatives did during the end of the show. 

I want to see Arnav repent, beg and grovel if possible to get his Khushi back. He deserves it. 

Continue soon please. I will be stalking this thread. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
gosh i am so upset with Arnav right now... How can he so blind and stupid, I hope Khushi doesnt forgive him and gives him back big time... God I am too upset to even comment properly