Fan Fictions

Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15* - Page 14

Created

Last reply

Replies

193

Views

77640

Users

95

Likes

1263

Frequent Posters

Anarocksick thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 10 years ago
Res.


Will read and comment soon :)
BubblySanaya thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!!!
I just read all the parts together.
It was beautiful...
I just loved the way you wrote Arnav and Khushi's feelings.
I literally had tears in my eyes reading all the hurt that Khushi was going through.
And the end was simply awesome...
This is a very different genre of writing, and i loved it.

You must write more, and pm me if possible.
BubblySanaya thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Oh and yeah... How cud i miss the NK part.
Im so glad that NK confessed his feelings for Khushi !!!
And he did an amazing job in putting some sense into Arnav's head, to not ignore his loving wife.

Keep up the good work... :)Edited by Arshi1985 - 10 years ago
blackdove thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Wohoo..

Awesome update...

Beautiful ending to a beautiful SS..

Thnx for the PM and do continue soon !!!!!
ASR6262 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
I read all 3 parts in one go amazing os
I love NK he's do sweet and understanding
Thank u for pm me
Jyo.Arshi.IPK thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 10 years ago
Hellee 🤗  ❤️  that was a beautoful job well done and standing ovation to u !! 😊

am glad I read it all in one go coz if I had to read it in parts... I would have bothered u till u update it all.

beautiful updates... its human to err but its divine to forgive . 

a lot of ppl might say tht khushi shudnt have forgiven him so easily but i see it in a diffrnt way.

life is too short ... then y spend it playing games and seeking out repentances and make ups.

if u know the person despite all his flaws ... loves only u from his heart... then y make him pay, forgive him coz u knw he wud never hurt u intentionally.

its this truth that makes Khushi forgive Arnav so fast.

I loved NK, as much as I hate anyone else staking claims on Arnav or Khushi, I loved NK for each word he gave Arnav. truly NK is Khushi's best frnd. Period.

Sheetal tracks ws one of the worst of IPK and something I hated and this is the end I wanted to see in the show !! 

thanku so much for giving it to me and thanku for remembering my request to PM me !! 

love u hun and all the best for all ur works !!! 

love 
Jyo
hello87_11 thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
awww loved  the update! :) 
cheesemad thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 10 years ago
hey helee glad ur back with a story...
ryt now m busy with exams...will read complete story after 4th july:D
P4rveen12 thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
A perfect and amazing ending, loved the update.

Wow, that was a awesome and brilliant update, yet so emotional and heart breaking. 

Awww the part where Khushi was left heart broken after Arnav left her was so sad, she was completely broken down and distraught. 

I hate sheetal, she is a Bi**h, Period.

Awww love the fact Arnav actually came just in time to put sheetal in her place and wow loved the way he sorted out sheetal and his family was superb and brilliant.

Loved the way Khushi finally let out her anger at Arnav explaining how she is feeling, it was spot on.

Arnav finally apologising and realising his mistake was fantastic, it was quite sad when he requested Khushi to be angry with him but not to leave him. 

Awww the ending was beautiful, finally a beautiful smile on khushi's face and Arnav making a effort and showing her so much affection and attention was so sweet. 

Loved the story from khushi's point of view, you wrote down her feelings, emotions and anguish so well. 

The story was Written exceptionally well and a fantastic read and all the updates were brilliant. 

Thanks for the PM xx 
PhoenixTears thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
You are so right Helee, there is no Arnav without Khushi and vice-versa. We all know "To err is human, to forgive divine". Beautiful finish to a wonderful TS, loved it. You are super duper awesome 🤗