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Posted: 2013-10-09T07:15:34Z
Embarrassed preview..
yaad kiya...aur janab hajir...!!!

contn soon...

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Posted: 2013-10-09T07:32:31Z
Originally posted by chillpc


Embarrassed preview..
yaad kiya...aur janab hajir...!!!

contn soon...



hehe thank u choti Tongue
ill cont soonSmile
romance ke liye ram ji hamesha thayyar LOL
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Posted: 2013-10-09T07:33:49Z
Originally posted by .sangs123.


Originally posted by chillpc


Embarrassed preview..
yaad kiya...aur janab hajir...!!!

contn soon...



hehe thank u choti Tongue
ill cont soonSmile
romance ke liye ram ji hamesha thayyar LOL

waiting fr ur updates...
its been long tym nw...
jldi se dedo pls...Smile
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Posted: 2013-10-09T07:34:45Z
Originally posted by chillpc


Originally posted by .sangs123.


Originally posted by chillpc


Embarrassed preview..
yaad kiya...aur janab hajir...!!!

contn soon...



hehe thank u choti Tongue
ill cont soonSmile
romance ke liye ram ji hamesha thayyar LOL

waiting fr ur updates...
its been long tym nw...
jldi se dedo pls...Smile


hm dedungi yaar
by this weekendWink
thank u for waiting Big smile
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Posted: 2013-10-09T07:37:54Z
Originally posted by .sangs123.


Originally posted by chillpc


Originally posted by .sangs123.


Originally posted by chillpc


Embarrassed preview..
yaad kiya...aur janab hajir...!!!

contn soon...



hehe thank u choti Tongue
ill cont soonSmile
romance ke liye ram ji hamesha thayyar LOL

waiting fr ur updates...
its been long tym nw...
jldi se dedo pls...Smile


hm dedungi yaar
by this weekendWink
thank u for waiting Big smile

thnku...SmileSmile
will be waiting..Tongue
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Posted: 2013-10-09T07:41:26Z
Originally posted by chillpc


Originally posted by .sangs123.


Originally posted by chillpc


Originally posted by .sangs123.


Originally posted by chillpc


Embarrassed preview..
yaad kiya...aur janab hajir...!!!

contn soon...



hehe thank u choti Tongue
ill cont soonSmile
romance ke liye ram ji hamesha thayyar LOL

waiting fr ur updates...
its been long tym nw...
jldi se dedo pls...Smile


hm dedungi yaar
by this weekendWink
thank u for waiting Big smile

thnku...SmileSmile
will be waiting..Tongue


my pleasure yaar
ill cont soonBig smile
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Posted: 2013-10-09T13:39:39Z
Originally posted by .sangs123.


Originally posted by vironikajain


Nice preview..chalo Priya ne yaad kiya or Ram ji padhaar gye.. Wink LOL


thank u viru dear Tongue
hm priya yaad kiya aur ram ji agaye romance karnee Wink
hehe pyaar hai yaar isaa hi hotha hainTongue


Wo toh humesha ready rehte hai uske liye Wink LOL tujhe kaise pata aisa hota hai Wink
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Posted: 2013-10-21T08:20:33Z

Part 25:

                                     Raya narration

The phone was ringing and i slowly winced my eyes and got up from sleeping position to pick up the call but ram stopped me

Ram:Common jaanu i wanna enjoy sleeping in cuddling position with u

Priya: ram plz am getting a call once i receive it ill and u know what its early in the morning now plz common u also wake up

Ram gave a jerk with his right hand and again i ended up landing on his chest

Priya:ram plz chodiye naa plz

Ram:ok on 1 condition

Priya:what with a grin

Ram showed me his lips and asked me to give a peck

I slowly got up and pretended to give him a peck but i got up and ran away

Ram got so much naughtiness

Ram:priya yaar ye chitting hain

Ram also started running back of me but i some how managed to escape from him holding my phone from the desk near my cot

I slowly bolted the door of the changing room

Ram:priya yaar this is not done ok fine now u closed the door ok in night ill see u how u will escape from me

I was laughing naughtily standing placing my back to the changing room door

But continuosly my phone was ringing and i picked it up

Priya:hello

Rajat:priya main rajat

Priya:ji bhaiya happy to hear words from u

Rajat:priya even am happy but plz come to xyz hospital fastly

Priya:what happened

I said out of panic

Rajat:priya i don't have time to explain all that in phone come fast

Priya:ok bhaiya am coming soon

I just hung up the call and rushed to freshen up and changed myself  and just left the room  holding my hand bag my clg books when i was leaving ram was was peaceful in his slumber i did not go near him

I started speaking to my heart

Ram am sorry i never shared anything with u about my brother but trust me i am gonna share this with u soon till that plz forgive me for not sharing this with u

I just took an auto and left a message to ram that i had some emergency work and i had to leave

I was sitting in auto and requested auto driver to race the auto and i was thinking to myself

I was scared i did not know what could have happened wrong with bhaiya . Rajat i and karthick are siblings jyothi was my class mate and bhaiya fell in love with her but as jyothi was from a lower caste my father denied for their marriage and jyothi attempted for suicide and my brother married her in a register office

And they both left to Australia before 1 yr to my marriage and my father broke all his relations with bhaiya and told all of us that who ever will talk to bhaiya he will not spare them and from that time onwards i feed the number of  bhaiya as ranjani in my phone

i reached hospital and entered it to b ward as my bhaiya told me to come there

i was sprinting to reach the ward and i entered it i was almost panting out of panic

finally my brother and jyothi were sitting on the tables in front of  mr.dr. abc

i slowly paced towards them and i was panting badly but my brother was so relaxed and i was panic but his face was happy in deed

my brother hugged me and i reciprocated and i gave jyothi also a side hug

priya:bhaiya kyaa hua aap mujhey yaha kyu bolayee

rajat:priya ye baat jyothi tujhey batayegi

priya:bhaiya main tho yaha tension se pagal hojari hoo aur aap hoki jyothi ko bolne ki baat kaare plz batao kisiko ko kuch hua kyaa sab teek tho haina

rajat:relax yaar kuch nahi

my bro was blushing and

rajat:arey jyothi tum bolo naa

priya:koi tho mujhey bolo naa

rajat and jyothi in unison told so soon some one will come to call u bua

i was astonished and i did not know how to react

i hugged jyothi out of happiness and congratulated my bhaiya and babhi

mansion:

ram:

i just woke up from sleep and shouted priya...

priya...

i did not get any response from her and bansi kaka told me priya left mansion in jiffy

i was rubbing my hair contemplating what could be the matter

priya what could have happened to her why she left in hurry ye ladkii bhi naa afaath machayegi

paar itna jaldi kaha chali gaayi...

 

                                      Narrator  version:


Priya slowly winced her eyes and got up slowly from ram's chest and went near the desk to pick her phone and ram jerked her from back and she again fell on ram's chest

Ram:Common jaanu i wanna enjoy sleeping in cuddling position with u

Priya: ram plz am getting a call once i receive it ill and u know what its early in the morning now plz common u also wake up

Ram gave a jerk with his right hand and again i ended up landing on his chest

Priya:ram plz chodiye naa plz

Ram:ok on 1 condition

Priya:what with a grin

Ram showed me his lips and asked me to give a peck but priya pretended as if she is gonaa kiss him on lips but pushed ram and started running towards the changing room holding her phone and ram ran back of  her

But unfortunately priya bolted the door from inside and was laughing naughtily placing her back to the changing room door.

Ram:priya yaar this is not done ok fine now u closed the door ok in night ill see u how u will escape from me

Priya was laughing naughtily inside the changing room and phone suddenly started ringing

Priya pick up the phone it was

Priya:hello

Rajat:priya main rajat

Priya:ji bhaiya happy to hear words from u

Rajat:priya even am happy but plz come to xyz hospital fastly

Priya:what happened

I said out of panic

Rajat:priya i don't have time to explain all that in phone come fast

Priya:ok bhaiya am coming soon

Priya rushed to bathroom to freshen up and changed herself when priya was leaving the room ram was still in deep slumber

Priya was talking to her self in heart

Ram am sorry i never shared anything with u about my brother but trust me i am gonna share this with u soon till that plz forgive me for not sharing this with u

I skipped my breakfast and rushed to catch an auto

I got into it and i requested the auto

Priya:bhaiya plz thoda jaldi karona plz teezi se chalayiye naa auto

Auto man just noded his head

He was racing his accelerator

Priya was conspiring badly in auto she was just rubbing her hands out of panic

And thinking to herself

What could have happened to rajat why did he ask her to come to hospital is anyone sick or what else should have happened

Rajat priya and karthick are all siblings but rajat married jyothi who was priya classmate they both fell in love but sudhir objected the marriage becoz jyothi was from lower caste and jyothi tried to commit suicide rajat wanted to wait till his father agrees but nope as the situation was worse he married jyothi without sudhir and shipra consent and sudhir broke all his relations with rajat on the day he married jyothi

Although sudhir is angry but shipra she is a mother she was in contact with his son how can a mother just break the umbilical cord relation if her son or girl do a mistake

So shipra priya and karthick were in contact with rajat but sudhir was unaware of all this and karthick and priya storred rajat number as rajani in priya cell and ranjeet in karthick cell

Priya reached the hospital and sprinted towards the ward b

Where rajat and jyothi were sitting on the chairs in front of doctor cabin

Priya was panting badly and slowly paced towards  rajat and jyothi

Priya went to rajat but both were relaxed and happiness was reflected in their face

Priya was panic and spoke to her brother

priya:bhaiya kyaa hua aap mujhey yaha kyu bolayee

rajat:priya ye baat jyothi tujhey batayegi

priya:bhaiya main tho yaha tension se pagal hojari hoo aur aap hoki jyothi ko bolne ki baat kaare plz batao kisiko ko kuch hua kyaa sab teek tho haina

rajat:relax yaar kuch nahi

rajat was blushing

rajat:arey jyothi tum bolo naa

priya:koi tho mujhey bolo naa

rajat and jyothi in unison told so soon some one will come to call u bua

priya was overjoyed listening this sweet news from her brother and sister in law

priya excitement had no boundaries

she hugged jyothi and congratulated her and priya even congratulated rajat for the happy news

 

mansion:

ram was in his deep slumber he slowly got up from his slumber and shouted priya ...

priya...

priya was not there so no one responded but bansi kaka came to ram

ram:good morning kaka

ram told this by sitting on his cot

bansikaka:gd mng sir

priya madam left in jiffy but instructed me to take care of all the things which u need till u leave to office

saying this bansi kaka left

ram was wondering and talking to himself

oh so sweet of my wify i feel like kissing u for the concern u show on me

but where did u go priya that too with out informing me

what could be that important work that u  left in so hurry

ram was rubbing his hair and left to bathroom to freshen up

Edited by .sangs123. - 2013-11-11T07:16:18Z
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