aaahhh
how can you say it hasn't turned out good?
I loved it!
Love your such a brilliant approach of writing dialogues only..
and all other things are left to reader's imagination.
but but but.. the awesomely humorous way you make us imagine whole situation just by dialogues.
I love this style of yours!
I felt the whole scene played out in front of me.
and Raizadas style of flirting is.. π³
Greek God's history... that was very very interesting to know.
These 2 lines were outbound fantabulous..
'...Because while Hades might have ruled the underworld, abduction isn't really my style.'
'...I see...so you prefer the subtle approach?'
and this one was cherry on cake..
'what's to say Persephone didn't already know what she was doing when she ate those seeds?''
ππ You are so very amazing. Love your OSs.. and if time permits.. I will visit your other work too.π