OS:HATRED LOVE

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Posted: 2013-06-12T09:07:47Z
                                                                                                                                  OS-HATRED LOVE

                        Krishna ji ne aj thanliya tha ki jo bhi ho aj wo apne bete ke jindegi ko sudharne ke liye pehli step jarur lengi ar koibhi chij aj unhe roknahi sakta.She wants to remove black cloud of her pastlife which changed her son from a soft chhuby joyfull boy to rude,rough as rock man,she wants to see her that 15 year old boy whome she lost 20 years ago.Today she determined that nothing can stop her to make a step to take back her son.Sam ko wo intezar karti rahi apne bete ke ane ki taki wo usse bat karsake,ram samko ghar lotte hi sofe pe bethi apne ma ki ankho ko dekh kar samjhgaya tha ki aj ma ne kuchh thanli he to wo bina kuchh reaction diye normal behave karte hue sofe pe betha aur banshi kaka ko chai ke liye bola ar table pe rakhe magazine ko padne laga.

Krishna ji-Ram, mujhe tumse kuchh jaruri bat karni he to carefully listen to me,i dont want any arguement over this matter and u have to agree what i will say.

Ram-Ma,whether i will agree or not will depend upon ur wish so plz say strately,if that is in my hand i will fullfill.

Krishna ji- Wo sirf tumhari hi haton me he,agar tum itna hi seedha sunna chahte ho to bat ye he ki me chahti hun tum jald se jald sadi karo,mujhe meri bahu chahiye me marne se pehle tumhe apni life me settle dekhna chahta hun,tumhe khus dekhna chahta hun.Ar mene ladki bhi dekhli he,kal tum apne office se ek din ke liye chhuti lelo hume kal Sharma ji ke ghar jana he mene unki badi beti priya ko tumhareliye chuna he wo harmaine se tumhare liye kabil he jo tumhe samvalsake tumhare jindegi me khusiyan hi khusiyan lasake,but me chahta hun ki tum khud use ek bar mil lo.

Ram-What are u saying ma apne sabkuchh decide karliya ar mujhe bataya tak nahi,mene pehle bhi bahat bar kaha he mujhe sadi pe bharosha nahi na khud pe na kisi ar pe ye meri life he ar me apne life me kisi ki mahjudgi nahi chahta,i want to live alone and free,apne sab thik ki he to ap ko hi sab todna padega i will never go to meet that girl and sadi ki bat to dur ki he.Itna bolke ram wohn se janewala hota he.

Krishna ji-Ram but ye yad rakho tumhari life se meri life bhi judi he ar agar tum meri bat nahi manoge to it will be the last day of my life,after that u will be free for ur hole life no one will stop u.There is hurt and anguish in her voice which reflects in her tears that made ram week,he can not see his mother like this.

Ram-Ma ap mujhe imotional blackmail karrahe hain,agar apki yahi marji he to sahi me kal jaunga but me us ladki se bat karna chahunga.

Krishna ji-Wiping her tear happily she said that ,ye to me chati thi tum usse milo i know u will like her.

                                                                   Next day ram ar krishna ji sharma ji ke ghar vikram ar neha ke sath jate hain,Due to krishna ji ram behaved politely but he determined something in his mind to break this marriage.Kuchh der bad shipra ji priya ko lekar ati hen.White embrodoried salwar pehnti hui apne kale kale curly balo ko ek side pe pinup karti hui priya looked like an angel,She came and took blessings of krishna ji,and krishna ji made her seat near her.Priya ko dekh kar ram ki determination ar bhi badh jati he,now he is conformed that priya jesi ladki ki jindegi kharab karne ka koi haq nahi he use aj use ye sadi jese bhi karke todna hi he.Priya ram ki taraf dekhti he tabhi ek pal ke liye dono ka eye contact hojata he,usipal hi priya ko ye ehsas hojata he ki uske ma papa ne uske liye uski sapno ka rajkumar hi dhunda he,she remains quite.

Ram-Excuse me everyone i want to talk to priya.

Sharma ji-Han han beta tum priya se bat karsakte ho,priya tum ram ko apne kamre me le jao ar jo bhi bat karna he karlo.

Ram-No,uncle ji mujhe priya se jo bhi bat karni he sabke samne karni he khas kar aplogo ke samne.Tab tak krishna ji samjh jate hen ki ram kuchh gadbad karnewala he wo pray karti hen ki esa kuchh na ho taki ye sadi tut jaye.Ram bolne lagta he.Priya u are a girl like others who may be dreamed a groom who will love her hole life,make her life beautifull,give the strenghth and all the happiness in ur life.But am not like that,am son of that man who btrayed my mother leave us alone when we need him most.Raste pe chod diya hume jab me 15 sal ka tha ar bhag gaye kisi ar ladki ke sath,unhone mere ma ka biswas toda,mere ma ke pyar ko thukra diya.Me usi admi ka ganda khoon hun samjhe tum, to how can u trust me ??? How can u marry me when i can not guarenty that meri ganda khoon kab tumhe dhoka desakta he,tumhari trust ke worthy nahi hun me,mujhe khud par bharosha nahi to tum ar tumhare parivar wale mujhe kese trust karsakte hain.Dont marry me,it will hurt u more and more in ur life,isse achha he abhi tum ye sadi tod do.That is what i want to say,so dicission is urs.Itna kehke wo wohan se chalajata he,priya bas usko jate hue dekhti rehti he.Krishna ji bahat guilty feel karte hue sharma ji se mafi mangti he ar vik ar neha ke sath bapas ajate hen.Sharma house me to jese sanata chajta he,sab shocked the ki ye sab kya hogaya.

Sharma ji-Achha hua ki bat age badnese pehle hi sab pata chalgaya,humari beti ki jindegi barbad honese pehle bachgayi.Jis insan ko khud par varosa nahi ar jo khud ko nahi samval sakta jo sadi se pehle hi dhoka ki bat kare wo sadi jese pavitra riste ko kese nivayega.

Priya-Nahi papa,ram hi mere liye sahi insan he sayad sabse achhe.Me unhise hi sadi karungi.

Sudhher ji-What,priya tu pagal to nahi hogayi sab kuchh apne ankho ke samne dekh ke bhi tu anjan banrahi he teri jindegi barbad hojayegi uske sath.

Priya-Nahi papa,agar wo ese insan hote to agar wo meri jindegi barbad karna chahte to wo yesab pehle nahi batate hn wo baharse khud ko rough dikhane ki kosis karte hen but mene unke ankho me masumiyat sachhai dekha he.Unki ankho me dard he papa ar mujhe us dard se pyar hogaya he mujhe unki dard dur karna he,Papa plz gour se unko samjhne ki koshis kijiye tab apko pata chalega ki ram hi mere liye sahi he.Sudheer ji kuchh der chup rehte hen ar shipra ki taraf dekhte hen,shipra bhi hn bharti he.Sudheerji priya ko gale laga ke bolte hen ki unki beti ab badi hogayi he.Wo turant phone karke krishna ji ko riste ki manjuri dedete hen.

                                     Kapoor manssion me krishna ji sofe me bethirehti hen vikram ar neha bhi bethe the,sab shocked the ram ki behaviour se,krishna ji hope chod chuke the sadi ka but jab sudheer ji ka phone aya to wo khusi se jorse rone lagi,tabhi ram ko andar ate hue dekh apni ankho se anshu pochte hue krishna ji bole-Ram me galat nahi thi priya hi wo ladki he jo tumhe samjhegi,aj usne tumhari roughness ko nahi tumhari andar ki softness ko chuna he pehchana he ar sadi ke liye hn bhara he.Ab tum peeche nahi mudsakte ye sadi hokar raghegi mujhe priya par bharosha he wo mujhe meri purana ram lotasakti he.Ye bolke wo pamndit ji se bat karne chali jati hen,ram gusse me chilata hua sofe pe bethta he ar hat me drink lete hue bolta he.

Ram-How can she do that ??Khud ko samajhti kya he bo,mujhe pehchanlia mujhe ar mujhe change karegi,wo samajhti he ki wo mujhe jeet gayi he bat samajh nahi ati use mujhse sadi karegi agar apne jindegi ko hell banane ka itna hi sauk he to thik he go to hell priya sharma.

Vikram- Ram tu kya karnewala he dekh ram priya bahat achhi ladki he uske sath kuchh galat mat karna wo tumhari jindegi me khusiyan hi layegi to us khusion ko kyon accept nahi karleta.Dont do anything to hurt her.

Ram-Usne khud chuna he hurt hona mene use option diya tha agar wo samjhti he ki ram kapoor ko jeet liya to galat she will never succeed.Ye bolke wo wohn se chalajata he.Uski bat sunke vikram ar neha tenssed hojate hen ki kahin ram ka gussa un dono ka jindegi na kharab karde.Days passed,finally the day came when ram and priya became husband and wife,that day krishna ji was so happy.Bidai ke bakt sudhher ji priya ko gale lagate hue bolti hen-Beta mujhe tum pe pura bharosha he ekdin tum ram ko apna bana paoge mera ashirwad humesha tumhare sath he humesa khus raho beti jindegi ki har khusi tum dono ko mile.Hole day ram remained silent,they came to km grahaprabesh was done,all rasam was done well ram remain silent as he dont want to hurt his mother.At night neha took priya to ram's room which was decorated with flowers and candles,before leaving her she said-Priya i know tum samjhdar ho humare dost ko ar apne riste ko samval lena,tc.Priya muskura deti he ar neha ke jane ke bad gulab ke pankhudi se saje bed pe beth ke ram ka intezar karne lagti he.About 2am in night ram entered his room seeing priya on his bed his anger grew no bounds but he controlled himself and stubbornly said-Move out from my bed.Ram ke bbolte hi priya chupchap bedse utarti he ar ek corner me khade hojati he,ram turant apne bed pe pade rose petals ko saf karta he ar apne wardrobe se nightdress nikalte hue fresh hone chalejata he ar kuchh der bad ake bina priya ko dekhe bed pe sone chalajata he ye dekh ke priya gussa hone ke bajaye muskurate hue dheerese bolti he-Thank u ram it was so uncomfortable to sleep on rose petals now ican sleep soundly,wo apne heavy gehno ko utarti he ar fresh hoke night gown pehnke apne side pe sojati he.Ye sab dekh ke ram ko ar gussa ajata he.Ese hi char panch din bit jate hen ram jitna priya ko hurt karne ki kosis karti he wo hurt hone ki bajaye ar comfortable behave karti he which makes him more angry.Sadi ke bad ese hi 12mahina ese hi bit jata he priya humesa ram ki kareeb jane ki koshis karti rehti he ar ram usse dur,one day shipra ji came to meet priya ,they are talking.Ram was passing and heard their convo.

Shipra-Priya tu khus to he na ram ke sath unhone tumhe accept to kia he na.

Priya-Nahi ma unhone mujhe accept nahi kia he, but me khus hun me apne sadi se khus hun,ek na ek din wo bhi mujhe accept karenge ye mujhe biswas he.

Shipra ji-Priya tune esa kyon kia,kabtak tu unke pyar ke ass se jeeti rahegi.

Priya-I will wait,because i love him a i love my husband i love him.Ye sunne ke bad ram wohn se nikal jata he,wo teji se gadi chalate hue wohn se chalajata he ar samandar ke kinare beth ke sochta rehta he,how can she love him so much trust him so much she does not desorve him one day he will hurt her why she dont realise it why why why ?????????He cried a lot that day and determined that enough of those cold trys now he will hurt her so hard that she will leav him.He determined and left for home.Next day,it is anniversery of raya.Priya is so happy she bought a matching coat for ram and waiting for ram to come from bathroom so that she can wish him and give him his gift.Ram came out and wear the sirt and standing infront of mirror,when priya came from backside and start to make ram wear the coat she bought saying happy anniversery,suddenly ram threw the coat out of her hand and angrily said-What the hell are u doing ??How dare u to touch me,u married me that does not mean u won me,i did not accept u nor will accept in future,u married me on ur won choice and so dont expect anything from me.Remain in ur limits.Agar nahi rehna to ajad kardo mujhe bhi ar khud bhi ajad hojao,ye pyar ka ar patbrata hone ka dhong chodo,i know ki tumne sirf paise ke liye sadi ki he,fine give me divorce and i will give u plenty of allumony but plz leave me free.Go away of my life forever.His every word pinning sharply priya's heart as thorn but remain silent only tears flows from her eyes.Ram stormed out of his room and drove out of km but he dont go office he cant he drove to sea shore and cried hard becuase of hurting priya whole day he cried its evening ram came home his eyes were swollen,It was raining hard outside,he asked banshi kaka about priya.Banshi kaka said that priya memsab terace pe thi abhi barish horahi he to sayad apne kamre me honge.Ram went to his room,there is no trace of priya,he searched her everywhere in house,banshi kaka left for marketing,krishnaji went for seven day trip to haridwar,he was worried,Suddenly something struck to his mind.Wo bhagte hue tarece pe gaya ar wohn pe shocked hoke khadaraha.Priya is standing all drenched,though it is raining he can recognise the tears flowing from her eyes,he can not control himself,he cant see his wife like this,his wife that sruck to his mind yes his wife who love him to the eternity whome he constantly hurting but she did not complain even once but on the other hand gave him all the love she has,yes she is his wife,all the anger of his life all thought which provoke him to hurt her vanished,he did not realise when he came so near to her,he took priy's face in his hand priya look straight to his eyes in longingness like she is begging for his acceptance his love,that one look made ram forgate everything.He slowly finish the distance between them,he softly kissed her forehead then eyes and look at her eyes one more time as he is waitning for permission.Priya for the first time saw the love she wanted for herself in his eyes the acceptance,she blinks her eyes and ram made his way and softly kissed her lips which became passionate one.That night was heavenly for both of them they became true man and wife in body mind and soul.Next day priya wokeup first and found herself on the bare chest of ram,flashes of last night came in front of her,she blushed and looked at her love and burried her head on his chest.Her happiness did not last for more time,after some time when ram woke and found priya so close to him last incident came to his mind,He suddenly came out of bed,that made priya shocked.IT WAS A MISTAKE was the last line which ram said to priya before leaving for us for one month.That day priya remain silent as rock shocked and hurt,but then she made her mind that sayad ram ko kuchh time lagega, jo pyar usne ram ke ankho me dekha tha wo kabhi galat nahi hosakta,she will wait she have to keep faith on her love.Krishna ji came and life is passing normaly,priya kabhi bhi ye nahi jatayi ki itna kuchh bitgaya he.Ram ne jane ke bad ek bar bhi call nahi kiya tha.one month gone ram jis din anewala tha wo din delay hogaya ar 5 din bad ka date bana,usdin priya apne kamre ko saf karte bakt ajeeb sa mehsoos karne lagi,kuchh dino se vomiting horahi thi sayad us bajese,ye soch ke wo ignore karti rahi but tabhi use chakar aya ar wo girpadi krishnaji usdin bahat tensed the ar priya ko hospital lejane ke liye bole but priya ne unhe promise kia ke next day wo chalijayegi ar uske liye unko amritsar trip cancel nahi karna chahiye uske samjhane se krishna ji amritsar chalegaye.Nextday priya check up ke liye gayi sare check ups hogaye.

Priya-Doctor kya hua he is everything fine ???

Doctor-Yes priya ur all fine balki tumhare liye ek khuskhabri he,u r pregnant priya one month pregnant.Ab se tumhe apna ar apne baby ka pura khayal rakhna padega.

Priya apne kano pe biswas nahi karparahi thi,wo ma banne bali he ram ke bachhe ki unke pyar ki nisani ab uske sath he,ye uski umid ki kiran banega wo undono ki bich ki duriya kam karega wo desperate horahi thi ki ye news kese ram ko bataye.Wo jaldi se km bapas loti khusi se wo pagal horahi thi wo ram ki ane ki intezar karrahi thi.Tin din ke bad ram bapas aya ghar ane ke baje wo seedha office chalagaya vikram ne phone karke priya ko informe kardiya tha to priya to besabr horahi thi ramse milne.
Sam ko ram ghar lot te hi seedha apne room me gaya,priya use dekh ke uske taraf ate hue bichh me rukjati he.

Priya-Ram bo bo mujhe apse bat karni thi.Before she can tell anything ram inturupted her..

Ram-Priya dont say that usdin jo bbhi hua wo hamare pyar ke bajese hua,wo ek mistake tha usdin hum dono imotionally weak the agar usdin tumhare jagh koi ar bhi hota to sayad me uske sath bhi wohi karta.Am sorry but i told u before am not trustworthy but u did not listen me.But ab me ar dohri jindegi nahi jisakti mene bahat sochne ke bad ye dicission liya he ki hume divorce le lena chahiye so that we both can live freely,ye raha divorce papers tum sign kardo to coart me case jayega ar within 3 to 6 months we will be free.Priya remained still,what can she tell all her hope dream was gone in one moment,she lost everything.Ram left the room silently,priyaleft all hope for her marriage,she determined not to tell ram about her pregnancy,she knew that  nothing will happen it will be better to keep quite till her divorce,she now dont wont to force ram anymore.Three months passed,both of them remain silent priya signed the papers.One day ram went to hospital to meet his bisiness client who is admited there,he saw priya,and thought why she is here.Wo turant priya ko phone lagata he ar puchhta he ki kahn he but priya use jhut bolti heki wo market me he.Ram priya ko pichhese dekhraha tha ar use jhut bolte sunke sak ar bhi badgaya,wo chup raha ar priya ko follow kia.Priya apne daily check up ke liye doctor se bat karrahi thi ar ram chupke unki bate sunraha tha.

Priya-Doctor how is my baby,is my baby fine ??

Doctor-Han priya ur baby is fine now u r three month pregnant and ur babys growth is quite visible he.Next week check up me tum uski heart beat sunpaogi.Mene kuchh dabai likh di he use continue karo ar stress bilkul  nahi lena.

                                                                      Ram stand there stunned,he is going to be father,his baby is coming and he is ignorant, why priya did not tell him that she is pregnant ???Kese batati ram,tune use batane diya kabhi tu to ye bhi accept nahi karta ki wo tumhari biwi he ar usdin jo hua wo tumhari mistake nahi tha tumhara pyar tha ,inner ram told him.A loan pair of tear flowed from his eyes.He cant tell priya because wo uski layak nahi he,wo khus rehne ki haqdar nahi he.use is bachhe ko bhi priya se alag karna hoga nahi to priya kabhi khus nahi rehpayegi wo ar ek krishna ko nahi dekhna chahta.Sam ko ram apne room me enter karta he,priya apne bed pe leti rehti he ek hat apne pet ke upar rakhte hue jese kuchh gehri sochh me dubi hui.Ram priya ki taraf dekhta he ar apne bachhe ke taraf jo uski kok me he sayad ye last time wo dekhega.

Ram-(ANGRILY)Priya why did not u tell me that u r pregnant why its been three months ar tumne mujhe bataya nahi.priya stand up and look at ram softly said- I want to say tried a lot but u did not gave me chance u dont want this life u want freeness so i will not force u.What mean force ye sab natak chodo,ar chalo mere sath mene appointment li he abortion ki,u r going to abort it.

Priya was stunned,anger grew in her,how can he tell that.Who are u to tell me to abort my child and why ???

Ram-Because it will hurt u in future it is not result of love which u thought it is symbol of my hatred for u dammit.

Priya-So, what ram why u bothered for me u want to hurt me right to ab kyon fikar horahi he ar ye meri body he mera fesla he me abort nahi karungi

Ram-Me kan hota hun hn,ye mera bachha he godammit mujhe pura haq he ye fesla lene ki.

Priya-Apka bachha!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sirf apka ans hojanese ye apka bachha nahi hojata,apne to use mistake kaha tha na apne mujhe accept nahi kiya mere pyar ko accept kia mujhe jo pyar diya use accept nahi kia to ye apka bachha kese hua boliya kese hua ???She is crying loudly.In her sob she continue.U say that it will hurt me hn it will not hurt me in future as my love for u will be with me as my child samjhe my childe hosakta wo apke liye hatred ho but wo mera pyar he chahe ap accept kare ya na kare ye meri pyar ki nisani he ar me ise kisi ke liye bhi apne se dur nahi karungi chahe mujhe duniya se bhi dur jana kyon na pade.It will not hurt me ram it IS HURTING me now,ur nonacceptance of our love,ur calling our child as symbol of hatred love hurting me.U won ram u won,i was wrong that oneday i will be a part of ur life we will lenjoy OUR LIFE i can find ur love but i was so wrong,u won i am hurt ok.But it is fine u want to be free na so i am making u free now.i will go so far from u dont worry my child will not trouble you.U will not see me any more.enjoy ur life ram enjoy.Saying this she started to go from room,when ram stoped her by hugging her from backside.

Ram-No priya,i cant enjoy my life without my wife my love my child,Yes today i confess u that I LOVE U and our child is not the symbol of my hatred love he/she is symbol of our pure love which change my hatred for life to love which i lost 20 yrs back.I love u priya am sorry that i hurt u so much am affraid that my blood will betray u but i was so duffer i did not get that in doing this i am hurting u already,plz maf kardo mujhe agar tumne mujhe sudhara he to mere sudharti jindegi me tumhari ar hamare bachhe ki jarurat he mujhe.He kneeled down infront of her.

Ram-Priya kya tum mere pyar banke mere jindegi ke naye safar me mere sath chalogi ????Kya tum mujhe ar mere pyar accept karogi.
                     With tears folloing her eyes priya said-Jab apke hatred love ko mene suru se accept kia he to ab apke unconditional love ko accept nahi karsakti kya ???Ram stood up and hugged priya.They now knew that it is the begining of new life with full of love and end of hatred love..

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Posted: 2013-06-12T10:05:59Z
WOW!!!SUPERBLY WRITTEN...HATS OFF TO U
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Posted: 2013-06-12T13:30:32Z
Wow beautiful os...
Loved itEdited by 123fiza1 - 2013-06-12T23:40:21Z
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Posted: 2013-06-12T18:47:21Z
wow, fantastic OS !!
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Posted: 2013-06-12T22:09:34Z
Nice one, good concept, keep up the good work
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Posted: 2013-06-13T01:03:29Z
Woww beautifull OS nd nice story..
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 2013-06-13T01:54:06Z
very emotional update CryCryCry
appne mujhe rula diya 
u written very well
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Posted: 2013-06-13T06:42:37Z
WOW another nice OS.I love it yaar ,nice concept.plz write more dear..plz   
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