Bade Acche Laggte Hai

OS : Time To Say Good Bye update 21.8.13

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"<font size="2">that's it" ram s voice echo in the room
" how could you say this ram that's it" her beautiful eyes cover with tears
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look priya i dont want to continue this relationship anymore, i m fed
up priya, i m fed up with your behavior i want freedom... ram
irritatingly says
priya grabs his collar tightly and jerk him " no u
cant do this with me, you promise me u will spend your whole life with
me than how could you said all this..
ram is looking in the floor, priya cups his face and force him to look at her eyes...
"look
at my eyes ram and say that u don't love me say that u don't want to
spend your life with me.tear rolling both corner of her eyes" ram don't
be quite like this, priya hits the floor with her leg and pushes
ram... she cover her face with her hand and start to sobbing..
"why r
u punshing me like this ram, why r u doing all this, u know it very
well that a cant live a single moment without you than how can a live
without you... dont do this with me ram.. i will be die if you left me"
between her sobbing priya mumble...
ram takes a steps and stand in front of her he holds her shoulder and says
"priya
i know this is not so easy to forget each other but trust me priya time
will heal all the wounds... ram controls his tears and says all
this...
priya steps back and looks at his eyes... "i don't know ram
time will able to heal this wound or not... but yes time will show you
what u lost"she takes a steps raises her hand he caresses his cheeks you
remember ram that i always told you that i can do anything for your
happiness... today i will keep my promise to go away from your life...
ram i loved u, i love u and i will always love you... priya cups his
face and kiss on his forehead... whenever u need someone just turn back
i will always waits for you... closing her eyes priya takes deep
breath her eyes become red... opens her eyes she looks at him for the
last time and leaves the place...

ram breaks down on his keen….he is crying like a small baby….who lost
his precious toys…. life does not take a minute to snatch all the
happiness…… life takes his soul from his life only left his body….a body
where is no feeling no pain only loneliness….. priya aimlessly walking
along the road side… her heart shattered into pieces….. she lost her
life her happiness her dreams… there is nothing left in her life… she
feeling a strange pain in her heart anytime her heart will be come out
from her body… every inch of her body paining like hell.. she does not
pay any attention to her pain.. she is still walking..she does not know
where she is going… she just know that she wants to run from every
memory of him…..between her walks she wipes her nose with her
knuckles….. the sun set and slowly slowly darkness cover all the are….
priya does not realize when she reaches near her apartment…..she steps
inside her apartment and locks herself in her room… she throws herself
on the bed… hugging her keen tightly she starts to sobs loudly…life
snatch her happiness from her life….. she lost..she lost her love… she
lost him… she lost her ram…. she lost her life…her everything…." why ram
why r u doing all this. how could you forget your promise ram….why all
those month you play with my emotion why ram??? ram you give me all the
happiness that i never imagine but in a blink of eyes you snatch all the
happiness…. please ram come back to me and says that you r joking with
me, u cant live without me.. tell me ram that you need me tell me ram
you really love me…. ram right now i want to lost in your arms.. raam i
want to feel your hot skin…please hold me tightly ram before it too
late… plz ram come back… come back ram… mumbling all this priya fall
into a deep sleep…
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Edited by aiyathasan - 10 years ago

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jineejiggs thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is sad, but interesting so I think u should continue this
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oh ... what happened now.?   waiting for the next update is isha the cause of this separation? 

please continue. 

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Posted: 10 years ago
Very sad nd emotional but interesting story..
Cont soon
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Jaanuuu continuee plsss ...jaldii
Tooo damn good
Itna sad...😭
Continue soon jaan
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow..!! it's so beautiful and damn interesting yaar.. thanks for writing it, now continue it soon.. ur sad strys are always awesome . waiting for the update..
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so sad yet beautifully written... 😭 😭 😭
update soon...
waiting sweetoo


Edited by 123fiza1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
please continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
 n love the story
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Nice start...continue soon jaanu