OS:RAIN the season of love

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Posted: 2013-05-25T13:49:20Z
                                                                          RAIN-THE SEASON OF LOVE
        

                                              Ek hat me phone pakadte hue ar dusri hato se gas pe chai bithate hue priya chilate hue bolti he-Natu(natasha) this is not fair,do din hogaye tum peehu ko leke gayi ho uparse tumhare bhaiya confferance ke liye delhi gaye hen.Ma bhi dadi ko leke baishnodevi chaligayi,me akela hun flat me,chhuti he ar bore horahi hun kabhi peehu ke bager itna din nahi raha.

Natu-Bhabi chill,me aj peehu ko leke ajaungi apki beti sahi salamat ghar pahanch jayegi ok.

Priya-Kab,kaha tha lunch se pehle dono yhn hoge ar abhi tin bajrahe hen uparse itni jorse barish suru hogayi he,abhi bilkul mat ao.Peehu ko thand lagjayegi,barish kam hojaye fir dono ajana.Ok darbaje pe koi he bell marraha he me dekhti hun tum phone rakho,yad rahe aj meri beti meri pass hona chahiye.

Natu-Ok bhabi,rakhti hun.Priya jhat se phone table pe rakh ke darbaja kholti he,samne ram pura barish me bheega hua khada rehta he ,uske kalle balose barish ki bunde tapak tapak ke girrahe hote hen,pura suit panise latpat hua tha to floor me rakha mattres ko gilla hota rehta he but fir bhi hoto me ek lambi si smile rehti he.Use dekh ke priya ke to khusi ke mare hosh hi udjate hen.

Priya-Are ram ap to kl anewale the to achhanakse aj kese,ar ye kya pure bheege hue ho agar thand laggayi to.Ruko me abhi towel leke ayi ese andar aoge to ghar ganda hojayega,wo doud ke jake towel lake ati he ar jhat se ram ke sar ko ponchh ne lagti he.Ese bhi koi barish me bheegta he bhala sal ki pehli barish he sab bolte hen ismhe jo bheegta he use hand pakad leti he,ab jaldi se jake change karlo me chai leke ati hun.

Ram-Are koi thand bhand nahi lagti,mere hisabse to sabko bheegna chahiye pehli barish me pehli chijj ka maja humesha pehle uthana chahiye.Ar patni ji chai ke sath agar garam garam pakoda hojaye to maja kuchh ar he.Priya haste hue bolti he ok ok kuchh jada romantic hone ki jarurat nahi me abhi banake lati hun.Washroom jate hue ram puchhta he,meri gudiya kahan he papa ke awaj sunke abhitak daud ke nahi ayi meri pari.

Priya-Apki pyari behen dodinse use apne sath rakha he me kitna bore horahi hun uske bina,abhi phone kia tha sam ko barish kam hote hi use leke ajayegi.

                                                                   Change karne ke bad ram apne apartment ki balcony me ake jhule me beth jata he,wohn rakhe hue paudho ko dekh ke usko bada sukun lagta he.Ghar ye jagah undono miya biwi ki fvrt jagh he,jahn beth najane kitni baten kihgi dono ne,chahe bo khusi ke hasi ho ya dukh ke ashun sab yahi pe share kia he dono ne,khuli hawayen nature ki tajgi,subhe ugti hui suraj ki kiran to rat me chand ki thandak bhari roshni sab kuchh dono ne sath milke share ki he yahn.Tray me do cup chaai ke sath sath pakode se bhare hue plate ko late hue priya bolti he-pehli barish ki bajh se mitti ki smell bahat achhi hoti he na.Ek hat me chai ke cup lete hue ar dusre hatose priya ko kareeb lake apne pas bithate hue ram bolta he-Han pehli barish ki har chijj khubsurathoti he,dekho kese garmi ke bajese bejanhogayi paudhen kheel uthi hen jese sadiyon se is barish ki intezar karrahi hon,sabhee ke jindegiwon me khusi le ati he barish.Iss barish ne hume bhi to milaya tha.Aj bhee wo din yad ati he to me has has ke pagal hojata hun,tumne mujhe ek gunda ar rapist samjha how yar me sachh me esa dikhta kya ???

Priya-Hahaha so funny,isme meri kya galti thi,ayesha ne itni horror story sunarakhi thi mujhe ar us roj news me rape cases ki itni cases dekhrakhi thi ki tumhare chehre ko dekhke me dargayi thi.Ar ap,ap to ek lafenge ki tarh sirt pehen rakhe the jese barsho se dhoya hua nahi hoga uparse dadhi rakhi hui thi jo bhi dekhta wo mere tarh hi sochhta.

FLASHBACK

                               Agust ka mahina pehli sawan ki ane ki tayari me sab lage hue the.But priya ki kuchh ar hi uljhan thi ,college ki pehla din wo bhi uske dream college jahan uske papa sudhir sharma proffeser he,wo bahat khus thi sath hi bahat dar bhi rahi thi.Naye naye college me kya kya hoga ar raging bagera kuchh hua to ar koi badmas pichhe padgaya to kya karegi wo.Yahi sochhte sochhte wo apni kareebi dost ayesha ke sath college  ke liye rabana hogayi.College pahanchte hi ayesha ki bak bak chalu.

Ayesha-Pata he priya mene suna he colleges me bahat raging hote hen,ar jadatar gunde typ ke ladke ladkion se kya kya karbati hen,agar koi bhi ladki na mane to gharjate bakt raste pe unhe bahat tadpate hen ar recent news to tumne suna hoga ki ek college ki ladki sam ko ghar lotrahi thi ar uski college ki ladke ne uski rape kardi thi raste pe.

Priya-Stop it ayu,dont scare me.Chalo class karne chalte hen.Dono class ke liye chalejate hen,break me dono college canteen me jake apne liye kuchh order karti he ar ek side table pe bethjati he.wohn dusre corner me kuchh lafange typ ke ladke bethe hue hote hen ar lafangagiri karrahe hote hen,ar ek ladka white sirt jo ki mittise dhula hui dikhne wali pehnte hue unko serve karraha hoga ar bar bar priya ki taraf ghurraha hoga.

Ayesha-Priya mujhe lagta he wo ladka tujhe ghur raha he.Priya ye bat sunke pura hadbadajati he,uske manme jis dar ko wo chuupane ki kosiss karrahi thi uske muu par jhalak jata he.
Priya-Kan ??Ayesha us ladke ki taraf ishara karta he,priya mudke dekhti he us white sirt wale ladke ko uske dadhi jo ki save nahi hue the ar sirt ko dekhke koi bhi gunda samjhega,ar priya ne bhi wohi kia.But uski brown eyes,priya ko janipehchanisi lagti he,par wo jistarh se ghurrahatha wo dekh ke proiya bakisab bhuljati he.Dheere dheere wo ladka priya ki taraf badta he,ar use apne aur badhte dekh ke priya ki heart beat badhnelagti he ar wo ayesha ke hat pakad ke wohn se bhagne hi bali hoti he ki pichhese wo ladka bolta he,suniye .Bina mudde hi priya wohn se bhagjati he.Baki sare classes jesetese karke jab samko priya wapas ghar anewali hoti he tab college gate ke pas us ladke ko firse dekhti he Ayesha ko kuchh kam tha to wo ek class pehle hi gharchaligayoi hoti he,priya ko ab ghar akele ana tha uparse ye dar.Kya kare wo bina kisi ke aur dekhe seedhee ghar ke liye rawana hoti he.Kuchh der chalne ke bad use lagta he ki koi uska peechha karraha he to wo apna speed badhadeti he ar corner se peeche dekhne lagti he.Uske to hosh udjate hen,ye to wohi ladka he jo use ghurraha tha ye uska peecha kyonb karraha he,kahin ayesha ki bat sachh to nahi hegi na,ye sab sochh ke priya ko rona araha hota he.Wo bas pray karrahi hoti he ki koi farista ajaye ar use bachha le,tabhi jorse barish honelagti he,meeti ki khoosbu jo priya ko itni pasand he wo bhi tab use mehsoos nahi horahi thi.Tab peechese wo ladke ne firse pukara,suniye.Priya bina kuchh kahe daudnelagti he ar peechhe peeche wo ladka,tabhi side se ek scooter ake priya ke pas rukti he,priya mudke dekhti he to uske papa raincoat pehne bethe hue hote hen,wo jhatse scooter pe bethti he ar ankhe band karleti he.

Sudhher ji-Priya itni jorse kyon bhagrahi thi ??Ar raincoat kyon nahi laya pata tha na barish kabhi bhi hosakta he ??Tu theek to he na ??

Priya-Papa me theek hun bas thoda sa dar gayi thi.

                                                                         Usrat priya bilkul uncomffotable rahi,barbar wo chehra uske samne araha tha,specially wo ankhe wo use bechen karrahi thi.Agle din bhi wesa hi hua wo ladka jab bhi priya ko dekhta kuchh bolne ki kosis karta ar priya wohn se bhagjati,ese charpanch din chaltaraha ar ek din samko priya gharpe hoti he,sudhher ji sofe me beth ke news dekhrahe hote hen tabhi bell bajti he ar priya darbaja khol ke chokjati he.

Priya-Tum ??Tum yahn kya karrahe ho,yhn tak mera peechha karrahe ho,samajh kya rakha he apne apko hn??Lafanga kahinka papa papa plz yhn ao dekho is lafange k.
Sudhher ji-Beta kya hua kan he ??Wo us ladke ko dekhke bolte hen,beta tum ao ao andar ao priya kya tareeka he mehmano ko ese bolne ki,mene ise yahn bulaya he
Priya-Papa ap nahi jante ye ek nmbr ka lafanga he jbse college me gayi hun tabse peecha karraha he meri,usdin me isi ki bjh se bhagrahi thi.
Sudheer ji-Beta tumhe galatfemi hui he,ye koi lafanga nahi he bahat achhi ghar ka ladka he tum bhi mile ho isse.Ye ram he amarnath kapoor ki beta,yad aya jab tum tenth me padti thi me tum sabko leke unke ghargaya tha unke behen ki sadi me.Ram yhn kuchh pandra dino se ake rehraha he actually use research ke liye america jana he but amar ko ye pasand nahi to bap bete me argue hui ar amar ne bola ke agar ram america jayega to apne paise se.Isliye ram college canteen me kam karta he plus library me padta he,califernia university ki exam agle sal hogi tab tak wo yhn padhai ar part time job karega,aj mene use apne yhn bulaya tumse mulakat karbane but tum log to mpehle milchuke ho ar galatfemi bhi hochuki he.

Priya-Felling sorry said,am sorry mene apko galat samjha,

Ram-Its ok. 
Sudheer-Priya, ram ko apna kamra dikhao ar kuchh nasta basta bhi karbao.Pria use apne kamre me lejati he.

Priya-Ummm,ap wohi hona jo sadi me bahat chup chup rehte the,ar chup chup ke kissi ladki ko dekhrahe hote the.Usdin jab hum bapas arahe the tab kuchh bolna  chahrahe the ar chuprehgaye the.
Ram-Hn me hi tha.Ar me apko dekhta tha.
Priya-What ??Mujhe ?? But kyon ??
Ram-Pata nahi ap mujhe bahat achhi lagi thi ??
Priya-Ar ab nahi lagti ??
Ram-Umm,han abhi bhi lagti ho.Dono kuchh der chup rehte hen,actually kya bole pata hi nahi rehta fir naste ke bad ram chalajata he.Usdin ke bad dono ke bichh dosti hojati he,college me ek dusre se milte hen ,library me ek dusre ko padhai me help karte hen,kabhi kabhi canteene me sath milke chai bhi peelete hen,priya ram se ar ram priya se bahat kuchh share bhi karne lagte hen.Dono ko kahin na kahin ye jarur pata tha ki ye rista ab sirf dosti nahi rehta but dono hi ye accept nahi kia tha.But jab garmion ki chhuti hui ar college band hogaya tab dono ko ehasas hua ki dono ekdusre ke liye kya maine rakhte hen.

Ayesha-Priya tujhe ho kya gaya he pehle to tu kabhi college jane ke liye itna bekarar nahi hoti thi,hua kya he mujhe nahi batayegi ?
Priya-Ayu mujhe pyar hogaya he hn hn mujhe ram se pyar hogaya he.
Ayesha-Wow to kb batarahi he jaldi batade kahin hat se na niakal jaye banda.
Priya-Kl college me batadungi,pata nahi wo kya sochhtehonge but me apni dil ki bat jarur batake rahungi.

                                                                        Ram,usdin bag pack karte hue sochhraha hota he,'kl mujhe america ke liye rawana hona he,aj tak use ye bhi nahi batapaya ki me usse kitna pyar karta hun but kal me use batadungi but kya wo meri intezar karegi agar wo mere jane ki khabar se react karegi to me use sachh batadunga nahi to nahin.Agledin canteen me priya ram ka intezar karrahi hoti he ki kab wo ayega ar wo apne dil ki bat batayegi.Ram kuchh der bad aya ar priya ke samne beth gaya,ekdusre ko dekhte he dono ek sath bolbethe,mujhe kuchh kehna he .
Priya-Pehle ram ap boliye ?Ram-Priya wo wowo aj me america jaraha hun 5 sal ke liye,mujhe wohn research ke liye offer milgaya he ab me apne peron pe khada hosakunga,successfull engineer banke dikhaunga.Ye sunke priya ko laga jese uski dil ki dhadkan band hogayi he,uske muu se sare sabd kahin gayab hogaye the,Ram-Tum chup kyon ho,khus nahi ho kya ?Priya apne anshu ko chupate hue jorse hasti he ar bolti he ki wo bahat khus he ki uski dost ko kamiyabi mila.Dost,abhi bhi priya use dost hi samajhti he to kya fayada use dil ki bat batane ki wese bhi kyon bo uske liye intezar karegi.Usdin ram jate bakat ek bar mudke priya ko dekha tha kuchh der ke liye dono ekdusre ko dekhte rahe ar bad me apne apne raste chaldiye.

PRESENT

Priya-Pata he ram usdin jorse barish hui thi ar mere sare anshu us barish ke sath milke behgaye the,apni pehli pyar ko mehsoos karne ki khoosi ko binajahir kiye gawadene ki gum me mene asman ke sath bahat roya.
Ram-Tumhe kya lagta he,mene nain roya ?Ye bolte hue ram balcony me jhula hua pinjre ke pas jata he ar ek pakoda blue(parrot) ko deta he ar usko sehlata he.Yad he priya ye bhi hume barish me mila tha,usdin hum peehu ko leke hospital se arahe the ar ye hamari gadi ke front glass ke upar jakhmi halat me milatha ar tum use apne sath ghar le ayi.
Priya-Hn yad he,ram ek bat puchhu ?Jab blue thik hogaya tha ar humne use pinjre se ajad kardiya tha ar wo nikalgaya tha ajad tha fir bhi samko bapas kyon agaya tha pinjre me hn ???
Ram-Kyon ki usne humare ankho me uske liye pyar dekhliye tha ar humse wada karliya tha ki wo wapas ayega.
Priya-Jese apne kia tha.

FLASHBACK

Sudheer-Priya 5 sal hogaye hen jitne bhi riste ayen he tune sab thukra diya he,chahe ladka kitna achha kyon na ho.Me tujhse puchh puchh ke thakgayi hun kya bat he beta,agar tujhe koi ladka pasand he to bolna me khusi khusi karwadungi.
Priya-Nahi papa esi koi bat nahi muyjhe abhi sadi nahi karni.Har din ki tarh usdin bhi yhi bate horahi thi tabhi bell bajta he,sudhher ji darbaja kholne jate hen ar priya apne kamre me.Priya apne diery kholrahi hoti he ki sudheerji ka awaj ata he,priya dekho to sahi kan aya he ?Priya-Ksn papa ayu ayi hogi use andar vejona.Pichhe se jo awaj ati he priya ko choka ke rakhdeti he.

Ram-Abhi bhi wesi ki wesi ho bina dekhe hi sochh leti ho nahi.

Priya-Ram,ap.Kab aye india wapas,ar achhanak yahn me yad tha apko,itne dino me koi khabar nahi ar...Bolte hue priya ki galese wo dard saf jhalakrahi thi jo ram mehsoos karparaha tha.
Ram-Actually ma ayi he mere sath unhe kuchh kam tha uncle ji se.
Priya-Kya aunty ayi he ar tum abhi batarahe ho.Wo ram ke sath bahar ati he ar krishna ji ke per chuke ashirwad leti he.
Krishna-Jetti raho beti.Darasal sudhherji me apke pas ayi thi ap se kuchh mangna tha.Sudheerji ar priya kuchh samjh nahi pate.
Krishna-Mujhe apne bete ke liye apki beti ka hat chahiye,priya kya tum mere bete ki jeeban sathhe banna chahogi ??Priya dang rehjati he,jo sapna 5 sal se dekhti ayi  he wo uske samne hote hue bhi wo jakin nahi karparahi hoti he ar roti hui apne kamre me chalijati he,ram bhi uske pichhe chaljata he.
Ram-Priya dont cry,agar tumhe bura laga to koi bat nahi me yahn se chala jaunga,mujhe laga tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho.But trust mne i will not force u,par hn aj me tumhe apne dil ki bat batana chahungi jo 5 sal se dabake rakha tha I LOVE U priya i realy love u ar tumhe khus dekhne ke liye me kuchh bhi karsakti hun.Priya ar nahi rokpati ar ram ke sinne se lag ke rone lagti he ar rote rote hi bolti he I LOVE U TOO RAM..kuchhder dono wese hi rehte hen
Priya-Ram,apne to usdin kuchh nahi kaha tha na mene fir ap wapas kyon aye ??
Ram-Usdin jab me mudke tumhe dekha tumhari ankho me me mene apne liye besumar pyar paya tha ar usidin mene wada kiua tha ek din me tumhareliye wapas aunga.Ar tumne abtak intezar kyon kia jb ki tumhe pata nahi tha ki me tumhe chahta hun ya nahi.
Priya-Kyon ki mene bhi apki ankho me intezar karne ki guhar dekhi thi,meri dil ne mujhe biswas dilaya tha ki kahin na kahin ap bhi mujhse pyar karte ho.
Ram-To ab kya hum dono ar ek wada len ?
Priya-Kansi ?
Ram-Jindegi bhar ek dusre ki sath nibhane ki ar ek dusre ko pura karne ki ?priya nodded in yes and hugged ram.

PRESENT

Priya-Ram,wo bhi barish ka mahina tha,august 9 jab hum dono ne kasam khayi thi sath nibhane ki.
Ram-Ar aj bhi barish horahi he ar aj bhi hum sath he ,priya ye barish humari pyar ki gawah he har khusi layi he ye barish humari jindegi me.Mujhe aj bhi yad he wo barish ki rat hospital ki sannate ko chirti hui barishh ki tip tip awaj ke sweetness ke sath humari peehu isduniya me kadam rakhi thi.Dher sari khusiyan leke humari jindegi indra dhanush ki sari rang bhar di thi usne.
Priya-Hn ye barish he isliye to ise pyar ka mausam bolte hen
                                                      Dono ek dusre ko dekhte hue ankho me kho jate hen,ram priya ko apne kareeb lake mathe pe kiss karta he dono hug karnewale hote hen bell bajne lagti he,priya haste hue bolti he lo agayi apkiladli pari.Drbaja kholte hi  pyari si pari peehu daud ke ati he ar papa papa kehke ram ke gale lag jati he.

                     


9Guys ye mera chhota sa creation he barish ke upar,abhi garmi bahat horahi he na isliye thoda barish ke story ke sath enjoy karo) 
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Posted: 2013-05-25T14:25:35Z
Emotional creation and very very nice,pl continue,Awesome writing.I cant control  myself,i am crying ,"Na bole tum na bole hum".great piece of love.
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Posted: 2013-05-25T22:20:13Z
I can't believe ke RaYa ke upar itni sweet love story bhi ho sakti hain aur woh bhi baarish as backdrop, its a treat to read such OS, u should continue writing such write ups more, it's indeed a delight, thank u Clap
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Posted: 2013-05-26T00:34:48Z
Woww its so beautifull story with barish as backdrop..indeed it is a great piece of work Clap Heart thank u..Edited by vironikajain - 2013-05-26T00:35:15Z
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Posted: 2013-05-26T02:59:12Z
Originally posted by mahumita_mitra


Emotional creation and very very nice,pl continue,Awesome writing.I cant control  myself,i am crying ,"Na bole tum na bole hum".great piece of love.
Thank u thank u are dost is story pe ro padoge to meri fast ff "best gift of my life" padke to tum sure badh ladogeLOL
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Posted: 2013-05-26T03:01:36Z
Originally posted by jineejiggs


I can't believe ke RaYa ke upar itni sweet love story bhi ho sakti hain aur woh bhi baarish as backdrop, its a treat to read such OS, u should continue writing such write ups more, it's indeed a delight, thank u Clap
Hn hn likhungi bahat sare storys hen dimag me bas script likhne ke liye time chahiye achhi labj bhi chahiye na bas ese feedback dete raho.
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Posted: 2013-05-26T03:14:23Z
Originally posted by vironikajain


Woww its so beautifull story with barish as backdrop..indeed it is a great piece of work Clap Heart thank u..
Thank u dear.
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Posted: 2013-05-26T06:41:38Z
so beautiful story
dear
i liked ur relation of a beautiful love birds
with rain
keep it up
good work dear
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