OS:Best Gift Of My Life

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Posted: 2013-05-20T07:48:30Z
                                                           Hello all beautifull buddys,is OS ko mene lagvag ek sal pehle sochha tha but post nhi kia tha.Aj bethe bethe dimag me aya k kyon na ise thoda renovate karke pes kia jae,after all raya ke memory humesha taji rehni chahiye kyon ????


                    After dadi's wish of her parpota ram ar priya did not talk about that matter because both of them felt that other would feel bad about the idea.

Priya(in her thought)-Sayad ram ko bachha nahi chaiye, isliye dadi k bolne k bad bo usbare me kuchh bhi jigarnhi karte kabhi bhi.Unko bachhe nhi pasand ye unhone kitni bar bola he but tab lagta tha ki wo riste se khus nhi he isliye ese bolrahe honge but ab to hum dono ek dusre se pyar karte hen jindegi bharsath rehne k liye fesla kia he to ab kyon nhi ?Agar hum pyar karte hen to humari bachha humari pyar ki nisani hogi jo hume humesa humari pyar ki yad dilaegi.Ar ek aurat tabhi puri hoti he jab bo ma banti he.Ram i want to give a life ram,yehi meri wish thi mene apko bataya tha,kya apko wo wish samajh me nhi aya tha ya ap samajh k bhi nhi samajh na chahte hen ?Austrelia me to apne bola tha apke bauji k sapne k bare me,tab mene apke ankho me bachhe k liye chah dekhi thi wo tadap ab kyon nhi dikhrahi mujhe ram ?Kyon chup he ram kyon ?

Ram(in his thought)-Priya me tumhe kese bolun ki me humare pyar ko ek ar step age lena chahta hun,us pyar ko ek jindegi dena chahta hun.Kahin tumhe bura na lagjay,sayad is umra me tum ma banna nahi chahogi,sayad tum dar rahe hoge ki mujhe itna age hogaya he to me bachhe k liye apni responsibility nahi le paunga wo har jarurat nhi pura karpaunga jo ek bap deta he.Isliye sayad tum chup ho,kya tum nhi chahti ki humare pyar ko strong karnewala bond is duniya me aye.Tumhare wish sun ne k bad mujhe yehi laga tha k tum humare bachhe k bat karrahi hogi but tab hum dono ne humari pyar ka confess nhi kia tha but ab to hum ek hen na to ab kyon chup ho priya ?/ kyon nhi puchhti apne wish k bare me ??Ek bar to mang k dekho ab ye wish sirf tumhari nhi meri bhi he ??? But jabtak tum nhi bologi me tumhe force nhi karunga,agar humari bachha is duniya me ayega to wo hum dono ki marji se ayega kisi k dawaw me nhi.

                                      
                                                   Har bar ram ar priya yehi sochh ke chup rehjate hen.Ek din vikram ar neha km aye hue hote hen sam ko hang out k liye.Sab raya k room me beth k bat karrahe honge ki banshi kaka ake bolenge ki nichhe ram se milne unki koi dost aya he.


Vikram-Ram kansa dost yar,mujhe to esi koi dost yad nhi jo hum dono ka na hoke sirf tera dost ho.
Ram-Chal nichhe chalke dekhte hen.Chalo na priya,neha tum bhi chalo.Sab nichhe ate hen.

                    Ram-Banshi kaka kahan he yahn to koi najar nhi araha ????
Isha-Hyyy ram am here in your study.Hei vikram and neha tum bhi yhn ho.Tum log to mujhe bhul hi gaye college k bad koi bhi contact nhi.
Ram-Isha,what a plesant surprise,tum yhn pe kese ??Mera matlab itne sal hogaye tumhari koi pata nhi thi kahan the tum ??/
Vikram-Hyyy isha,itne dino k bad milrahe ho btw tumne ram k pata kese liya ???
Isha-Aree india k itne bade business tycoon ka pata jan ne me kansi badi bat he ???Wese me college ke bad dubai chaligayi thi,wohn ke ek magazine ka editor hun ar mere pati bhi wohn ke businessman hen to me wohn rehti thi. Actually hum chution me india aye hen yhn rajat ki ek farm house he wohn ruke hue hen .
Ram-Tumne sadi karli ?Kisse ar kab ??Hume bataya bhi nhi.
Isha-Han sadi bhi karli ar humari ek beta bhi he do sal ka "Rishi".Tumne bhi to sadi karli,ar mujhe nhi bulaya ar to ar abhi introduce bhi nhi karbarahe.Vikram tumne pakka neha se sadi ki hogi.
Neha-Bilkul sahi pakda isha.is vikram ko ar kan sadi karta mere siwa ar agar koi milta bhi to me use mardalti.Mere baby pe koi najar dalega to uski ankhe nochh lungi me.

                                Sab jorse hasne lagte he.Ek priya thi jo kuchh samajh nhi parahi thi.

Ram-Priya,ye he vikram ar mere college ki friend isha.Humari gang ki ek pagli member,ar isha ye meri pyari biwi priya jis se mebahat pyar karti hun.Tumne kaha tha na ek din ki ram tumhe ek esi ladki milegi jo tumhhare motape ko nhi tumhari dil dekhegi,wo ladki meri gudiya priya mujhe milgayi.Priya's eyes get moist.
Isha-Woho ram u are very lucky and priya u are also very lucky ke ram jesa pyar karne wala insan tumhe mila he
Priya-I know isha tumhare dost mujhse bahat pyar karte hen ar sayad hi kabhi me us pyar k mukable unko kuchh de paun.Come na beth ke bate karte hen, me snacks ar drinks lati hun ?Wese tumhare pati ar beta kahn hen ?Unko bhi sath leke ati.
Isha-Wo rajat rishi ko park me leke gaye hen.Dono bap bete ki bahat jamti he,rajat ko time nhi milta na to wo rishi ko full time denachahte hen.Me bahat khus hun ki rishi ko janam deke mene rajat ko duniya k sabse badi khusi di he.

                                Both ram and priya felt a sharp pain in their heart but did not express it.
Isha-Mera yhn ane ka ek maksad bhi he guys.Kal mere bete ka janam din he ar me ar mere pati farm house me chota sa party rakha he,party bhi nhi bas kuchh mere kareebi dost jo ki tum log ho ar kuchh rajat ke.Please tum log ana jarur bahat din bad milke maje karenge ar tum log rajat ar rishi se bhi mil lena.
Priya-Sure isha hum jarur jayenge.Agar party k liye kuchh jarurat hogi to hume bolna,neha ar me help kardenge.


                                          Dusre din sam ko ram,priya,vikram ar neha ke sath isha k farm house me pahanch te hen.Rajat ar isha raya ar nevik se milte he introduction bagera hota he.sab bethe hue hote hen.Tabhi isha apne godh me rishi ko leke nichhe ati he ar sabse milati he.Rishi ko dekh ke priya ke andar jo dard tha wo nikal ata he ashun banke.But wo chupa deti he ar rishi ko apne godh me leti he.Rishi priya k sath pura ghul miljata he uske earing k sath balo k sath khelta rehta he,uske galo me kissi deta rehta he ar jab priya use kiss karrahi hoti he to jorse hasne lagta he.

Isha-Wow priya rishi kisi anjan admi se kabhi itni freely nahi milta,but tumhare pas esa bethe he jese tumhe salo se janta ho.Tum ek achhi mom banogi yar.Hearing this priya's heart got a pain,so not wanting to express it infront of ram she went to kitchen with isha and neha to help them.

                                    After priya went to the kitchen ram took rishi in his hand.

Ram-Hei champ come to ram uncle and give me a kissi.pehle to rishi ram k pas nhi jaraha hota he but ram k ankho me ek fatherly chamak thi jisko sayad rishi ne mehsoos kia k achanak se ram k gale me lag gaya.ram use apne god me lete hue kiss karne laga.
Rajat-He ram pata he rishi istarah sirf mere gale lagta he isha k gale bhi ese nhi lagta,ar is bajese isha ko bahat jalan hoti thi.Tum to lucky ho yar k kuchh ghanto me tumhe rishi k priceless huggi milgaya.Wese tum kab papa banne wale ho ??Its a great feeling yar,jab pehlibar isha ne mujhe rishhi k ane ki khabar di wo din me indegi bhar nhi bhulsakta ar jisdin rishi pehlibar meri godh me aya wo feeling me tumhe bata nhi sakta.Tum jab bap banoge dekhana meri bat yad ayegi tumhe.
Ram-Sabko jindegi me sari khusi nhi milti yar,agar mujhe papa banna hota to me kabka banchuka hota,sayad mere jindegi me bo khusi nahi he.

                                           Priya jo kitchen k door k pas khadi hui hoti he ye sari convo sun leti he ar rishi k sath ram ka bond bhi.Ram ke ankho me wo tadap ar dard bhi use mehsoos ho jata he.Uske man me ab koi galatfemi nhi rehti k ram ke man me kya he.Wo ab mentaly clear hogayi he ki use ab kya karna he.

Priya(in her thought)-Ram jindegi ne apke liye wo har khusi rakhi he jiske liye ap desorve karte ho.Apne mujhe beintaha pyar diya he uske badle me apko duniya ki sabse best gift dungi.


                                  After two months,its evening time.Priya apne bed room me teher rahi hoti he ,ajeeb si becheni horahi hoti he,bar bar apne phone ko dekhrahi hoti he jese kiski call ka intezar karrahi horahi he.Tabhi ek call ata he,
Pria-Hello,result agayi he kya ?Kya he usme ??(there was a desperation in her voice)
                                    After some second there was a huge smile on priya's lip,some magical glow on her face.Wo control nhi karparahi thi but use control karna tha.Wo sochhti he ki achha hua ram do din k liye delhi gaye hen me parso ka din unkeliye yadgar bana sakungi.Jaldi ao ram i can not control.Priya turant phone karke do din k liye apni classes post pond kar deti he ar banshi kaka ko bulake kuchh instruction deti he.
Agle din sam ko ram delhi se bapas ata he ar dadi se milne ke bad upar apne kamre me jata he.Jab darbaja kholta he to room ko dekh ke surprised ho jata he ,pura room white colour ka paint se chamak raha hota he,sath me white bed sheet ,white lilies in vace all are dazzling like stars.A huge smile created on his face.Use pata he ye sab priya ne kyon kia he .

Priya-Kesa laga mera surprise ?
Ram-Extremely beautifull like my wife.He came near priya and tokk her in a warm hugand gave kisses.
Priya-Go and change karlo ar fresh hojao me khana lati hun ar uske bad bate karna.OK.
                                                                     Ram followed her.Priya thought herself that,"Ram ab to surprise suru hua he mujhe pata he akhi gift apkeliye duniya k sabse kimti tofa hoga."Rat ko dono bate karne ke bad ek dusre ke bahon me so jate hen.Priya to sone ki pretend karrahi hoti he taki uski excitement ka pata ram ko na chale.Wo bar bar ghadi ko dekhrahi hoti he ke kab subha ho ar wo ram ko apna gift depaye,use ram ki ankho me wo chamak dekhni thi.To jese hi 6 baja priya dheere se ram ke bahon se nikalti he ar thoda upar uthke bethti he ar ramko dekh ke uske chehre pe muskan ajati he.Wo dheere se jake ram ke lip me kiss deti he ar whisper karte hue ram ke kanome bolti he,"Happy Annivesery Ram".Ram ko pata tha priya ke dimag me kuchh to he but wo bhi chup tha kyon ke wo priya k mood ko kharab nhi karna chahti thi tha.Ram ke chehre pe halki smile ajati he ar wo dheere se ankhe kholte hue priya ki aur dekhta he ar priya ko apne ar kareeb late hue ekbar ar kiss karta he ar use wish karta he.Ram bed pe beth te hue apne side draw se ek box nikal ta he.

Priya-Kya he ye hn ?

Ram-Meri pyari biwi k liye ek pyara sa gift dekhna nhi chahogi ??Wo box me se ek chain nikalta he jisme heart shape ka ek locket laga hua hota he,wo us locket ko kholta he jisme ram ar priya ke phto hoti he.Ram use priya ke gale me pehna deti he.priya use dekhte hue ram ke gale lagjati he ar ram bhi use ar kareeb late hue bolta he,"Kyon he na ye best gift for my best wife ?"


Priya-Hn best to he but duniya ki best nhi,me jo gift denewali hun wo gift duniya ki best gift hogi.

Ram-Woho esa kya he ?Kain tum second honymoon ki to planing nhi karrahi agar wesa he to wo to best hoga hi.Priya hits his soulder and both of hem laughed together.
        
                                             Priya kuchh der chup rehti he ar ankhe band karti he.Ram use dekh ke thoda confuse hojata he.Fir priya ankhen khole elk lambi sans leti he ar ram ko bolti he,"Are u ready for the gift ?"

Ram-Eagerly wiating for that ?

                    Fir priya ram ke left hat ko leke apne lower abdomen me rakhti he,ram ko kuchh samajh me nhi araha hota he to wo priya ki taraf dekhta he.

Priya-Ram mujhe pata he ap mujhe beintaha pyar karte he,jiski koi mol nahi mujhe nahi pata me apko utna pyar kabhi karpaunga ya bhi nahi.Apne jindegi me mujhe har bo khusi di he jo ek ladki chahti he,har wo sapna puara kia he jo me bhulgayi thi ki kabhi puara hoga,mene kabhi nhi sochha tha jindegi ka ye safar apke sath itni meethi hojayegi ke har mod ek yadgar lamha banjayega.Thank u for coming into my life.Ap bo har khusi desorve karte hen ram,apki har sapna me pura karna chata hun,apki ankho me me duniya ki sare rango ki chamak dekhna chahta hun,me janti hun me jo gift apko denejarahi hun uske bina apki ankho me wo chamak me nhi dekhpaungi.Ram can u feel the life we both created,our love which is bundle of all happiness of our future a part of u and a part of me.Ram am pregnent ram,a part of u is now inside me breathing safely waiting to come to this beautifull world to make our world full of joy and happiness.

                   Ram who is listening all this can not believe all this.Wo apne hat ko dekhta he jo k priya k pet k upar hota he ar upar dekhte hue priya ko ankhose puchhta he.Priya sar hilate hue han bolti he to ram ke ankho se anshu nikal ate he.Wo priya ko sine se laga ke bachho k tarah rone lagta he.Priya samajhnhi pati to wo ram se puchhti he-Ram ap ro kyon rahe hen ??Kya ap khus nhi he ???

Ram-Priya tumhe pata he tumne aj mujhe kya diya he ???Jindegi me wo khusi jiske liye mene itne sal intezar kia,jis family k liye me itna tadpa hun,jis sapne ko me kabhi akela puara nhi karpata us sapne ko us family ko tumne aj pura kia he.Mujhe aj tumne complete man banaya he priya.Tum sahi thi priya ye gift duniya ki nhi meri life ki best gift he.Ar age bhi hogi,is nanhi si jan ki pehli kick.pehli rona,pehla smile,pehli pukar,pehli step sabkuchh mereliye best gift hoga.Thank u my jan,mere jindegi me ek nayi kiran lane ke liye .I promise hum dono is khusi ko sath sath enjoy karenge ar hum dono ke sapno ko sath sath pura bhi karenge.

                                Ram bent down and kissed priya's stomach.Priya ke ankho se khusi ke ashun nikal ate hen,she caresses ram's hair.Both hugged one more time and enjoyed the feeling of completeness in togetherness,together waiting for a new life the symbol of their love which is pure and only pure

                                 
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Posted: 2013-05-20T08:03:54Z
so cutee
wonderfull

good one

continue soonEmbarrassed
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Posted: 2013-05-20T08:36:02Z
its beautiful and u have chosen the perfect time to post this OS, very touchy but very gud, RaYa ke emotions dil ko chhuu gaye, well done Clap
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Posted: 2013-05-20T08:54:18Z
Its so beautifull os..every emotion is perfectly described.. Clap loved it.. Heart
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Posted: 2013-05-20T12:12:48Z
Originally posted by shamavi


so cutee
wonderfull

good one

continue soonEmbarrassed
Thank u shama for liking this ff.Am glad u like it,mujhe sachh me nahi pata k jis imotion me ye anachahiye tha uss hisabse aya bhi ya nhi but meri pehli post he is forum me nhi to mob pe sirf aplogo ki ffs padta tha,fir sochha ke join karun forum ar apko credit dun likhne ki.it feels good when u got ur appretiation.Ilike ur ffs too,but abhitak comment nhi diya he kisibhi thread me time nikal ke dunga.Ar ek nayi os bhi post karunga.
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Posted: 2013-05-20T12:15:04Z
Originally posted by jineejiggs


its beautiful and u have chosen the perfect time to post this OS, very touchy but very gud, RaYa ke emotions dil ko chhuu gaye, well done Clap
Thank u jeeni,am a new writer.It feels good to read such good complements for kachha writing.
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Posted: 2013-05-20T12:17:12Z
Originally posted by vironikajain


Its so beautifull os..every emotion is perfectly described.. Clap loved it.. Heart
Thank uvery much,but am still not satishfied that the necessery imotions are all executed well.
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Posted: 2013-05-20T12:22:21Z
Originally posted by jeena1993


Originally posted by vironikajain


Its so beautifull os..every emotion is perfectly described.. Clap loved it.. Heart

Thank uvery much,but am still not satishfied that the necessery imotions are all executed well.

May be..but as a reader i can feel emotions in it so for me it was very good..nd as u said u re a new writer so for that.Clap
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