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ArHi FF! The Cult [Completed] - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
RBji, tussi great ho.
I love your thrillers.
The reader hangs by a thread waiting with bated breath for the next part.
This one is another interesting one from you.
The murderer seems part of a cult. 
I can imagine Arnav as a police officer in a trench coat.
Wht ill Khushi do in this story?
I was sure she was the journalist but that was a man.
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ahha interesting. I'm not a fan of thrillers but i just read them because you write them. 
The start seems great. Good luck with this new project.

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Posted: 10 years ago
This has all the making of a kickass at the edge of your seat thriller.  I do love the sarcastic Arnav.  So it seems like they have seen this before which means a serial killer is on the loose.  Why is Arjun scared though, was it that gruesome or did they come across similar scene before?  I can't wait to read more.  You are a genius RB.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav, more guts and gore, more of Shukla.

And a sacrifice.

What is not to love when I know it's penned by you? Another one I am really looking forward to. πŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow, we got a new story from you, so excited.

The start was brilliant and amazing, written perfectly for a murder/thriller. 

Loving Arnav as a sarcastic and temperamental ACP.

So Arnav has realised that there are certain symbols drawn on the wall, which look quite similar.

Can't wait to read this story further, which I'm sure will be filled with intensity, suspense, mystery and murders.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx 



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Posted: 10 years ago
horrifying but interesting...great start...keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ooh.. Another one from RB! This summer's not going to be that boring after all! :D

ACP Arnav? Man in a uniform.. I'm taken. Shukla and Arjun are RB regulars, right? I have that feeling I had when I watched the first episode of 'Castle'. Blew my mind away.. It somehow doesn't amaze all that much anymore. 

But I'm sure this will. Interesting! Sacrifice? Hmm.. 

Waiting. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow RB another one with ACP Arnav... need to say that i'm in already??? u are so good in thrillers...
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Posted: 10 years ago
congrats loads on this new ff:)

another one staring arnav as an ACP! thats just too good! he perfectly suits him and gives him a special appeal!

another mystery to be solved and cant wait to see wat the role khushi is going to play:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
I adore your writing! And this one just took my breath away! Keep it coming!😊