Flight of the sparrows ~ ArHi OS (NOTE Pg10) - Page 2

This content was originally posted by: gata

I have cried as I read this , as I think about the 5 year old girl who didnt even know what was happening to her

I hope that the judgement passed in this case will set a precedent and will help prevent this kind of horrific  crime

You made me cry, dammit!

Thank u for writing this👏. And may no child go through what that infant went through.

Lots of love,

Smita

This content was originally posted by: nnhk

I can so relate to this. Been through such hell just like Khushi.

beautifully written

I can't pass any comment on what happened to the 5yr old child recently. I am too ashamed of my fellow Indian who dare to do such things with an innocent life.
This Os was an emotional one. Truly like someone else said i didn't see any fictional characters in this story but two parents who lost their child in some way and trying to cope up the loss with help of each other..
I never thought Arnav will be the one to come and share their past with Sama but it again made us realize that Khusi can't be always strong and will have her moments of weakness . And Arnav will always be her strength..
I always loved the close knitted family like this one.. The hurt will always remain but life moves on...
Thank you so much for this masterpiece..

Oh so poignant...my heart is just aching right now & I can't stop tearing up! Losing a child is the worst punishment a parent can face. My nani lost her oldest born when he was about 16 & although she went about life with a fair amount of courage & humour, I think a part of her just left with that child. She would never again wear new clothes - always getting her daughters or daughters-in-law to wear them first, wouldn't eat some dishes that my mom remembers to be her favourites... Edited by bablubli - 11 years ago

I cried my eyes out Rae, it was so emotional and fabulously written... Being a mother myself I can't even explain it in words the pain and agony a mother goes through if something happens to her child... I didn't read anything abt that 5 year old girl bcz call me selfish or a coward but being a mother of 3 girls and the youngest being 6 year old I can't read any news regarding kids vesting raped bcz it makes me paranoid abt the safety of my daughters and it just makes me mental with worry... I feel so sorry for the parents of the little girl and all my prayers r with them and the little baby and hope and pray that all the beasts who done this to her should be severely punished and should be treated the way they have treated this little angel.

Coming to your story, Arnav and sama connected to each other on a level that only a father a d a daughter could and she needed that, it wouldn't have been the same if Khushi would have come instead of him... Only time can heal the pain and agony of the accident which has befallen sama but knowing that somebody else has gone through the same pain and still moved on in life makes the pain more bearable, knowing that somebody else knows what it feels like makes the sharing of that pain with somebody else easy and when that somebody is your father in law then it makes it more soothing that u know that he will guide u like a father and love u like a father and in time of grief dads r the pillar of strength that u lean on.

Thank you Rae for sharing such an amazing and extremely beautiful yet gut wrenching story with us and secondly could u plz write a two shot or three on the incident of that stillbirth that Arnav and Khushi went through, starting with the news of Khushi getting pregnant again then their wait finally culminating into the biggest tragedy of their lives and its after affect.

Angel I am truly speechless. This story moved me completely. 

Oh, Rae! This is heartbreaking..  Edited by appy_12 - 11 years ago

Beautiful. Loved the way you wrote it, full of emotions. 

Losing a family member is to difficult and specially if its a daughter of the house or son.

Arnav supported samaya so well. Ayaan breaking down and sama helping him out. 

Very heartbreaking. 

This content was originally posted by: AngelTeen

I am very sorry for your loss...