FF: Dil Ki Awaaz.. Tumko Dekha Toh.. :) - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
Hum SaraswathiEshwar ek safar shru karrahe hai.. Aapke saath apne andaaz mein.. Yeh zaroor bataayiyega ki iss safar ki shruvaath aapko kaisi lagi.. Aasha karthe hai ki apko pasand aaya..

Aapki,
SaraswathiEshwar.

Ram Kapoor.. The most renowned industrialist of the country stood in his future bedroom and looked outside the french window..
Raath bohoth hochuki thi.. aaj aasmaan khaali tha.. Na chaand tha na chandni.. Ek ajeeb sa soonapan tha..
His blazer rested majestically on his shoulders.. He had just entered the rather empty bedroom and opened the window.. He stepped out to his beautiful balcony with a wooden floor.. 
Thandi hawa unki chehere ko chugayi.. He smiled.. Zindagi mein sab kuch thi.. Naam shaan sharath thakath..
Aur ek pyaara sa parivaar.. He put his palms on the beautiful white railing of his balcony.. And looked at the empty sky..
He drifted into a thought process.. Aaj itna soona pan kyu hai.. Itni tanhaayi kyu hai.. A rush of the wind made him close his eyes..He looked at the stairs that led him down from his balcony to the garden.. He walked down one step at a time holding the railing.. It was cold.. He smiled.. 
He sighed.. He walked on the lush mexican grass.. The garden seemed endless.. How well this place was designed he thought.. As he walked on the stone pathway leading him to his Audi with his hands in his pocket he thought to himself.. Aaj raastha jaha leke jaai chaltha hu.. Kya pata isi bahaane iss intezaar ki koi disha miljaaye.. 
He smiled.. And walked to his car..He heard her paayal go chan chan..he looked down..He saw her beautiful feet.. Taking steps on the grass beside his.. The moist grass touching her feet.. He smiled..
 He looked at his car.. And looked back down.. Her feet were gone from his side.. It was just his leather shoes and silence.. He nodded in negative..
 He walked to the car and sat inside.. He put the keys and started the car.. He closed his eyes as he lowered the windows.. He started away thinking.. Kaash aap kahi miljaaye..
He drove on the tarred way towards royal gates with the garden growing endlessly on either sides..
As he neared the huge gates.. The opened for him.. With the guards  saluting him..
The road ahead was empty.. The wind was chill and breezy.. He deove on the street lamp lit road.. Ram kudh nahi jaanthe the ki woh kaha jaarahe the.. 
Waha se nikalthe hi kuch chootgayi.. Na atheeth ka kabar tha.. Na aaj ki hosh.. Chal pade kisiko doodne.. Agar kuch tha toh ek goong.. Dil ki awaaz..

To be continued..


Edited by DilKiAwaaz.. - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
My genre is romance as we all like it.. Horror well lets say I will indulge in playing with all genres being a part of the story.. But yes Dil Ki Awaaz is all romance..

Continued..
Jaise woh nikle apne raasthe par.. baarish ke boondhe ghirne lagi.. He stopped his car.. He never liked the rain.. Par aaj kuch alag tha.. He put his right hand outside the window and let the raindrops fill his palms.. The touch of the cold water on his palm had brought a smile on his face.. 
His phone rang.. He picked it up..
Ram: Haan bolo Rishab..
Rishab: Bhai aap nahi aayenge na.. He said with disappointment in his face. He knew his brother.. 
Ram let out a sigh.. Everything he ever did was for his family.. A family he loved.. Aaunga Rishab.. 
Rishab: With twinkle in his eyes.. Thanks Bhai..
Ram grinned.. He nodded in negative. He closed his eyes.. And leaned on the head rest..he put his left hand in the pocket of his blazer and removed an envelope.. He could smell fresh Jasmine.. He opened his eyes.. It was a beautiful red crape paper.. With a white ribbon tied around it.. 
He pulled the ribbon and it slipped away..
He opened the envelope and took a letter out.. 


Mr. Kapoor,

Hum jaanthe hai ki aapne tasveer aur chaabiyaan dekhthe hi ghar pohunchgaye.. Bina khath pade.. Aur ab baarish ki boondon ki ehsaas ke saath iss khath ko padrahe hai.. Ram was surprised.. How could anyone know..
Tik ek saal pehele aapne iss makaan ki nilaami ke waqt.. Bade kwaish lekar aaye the.. Lekin iss makaan ki rakham ko humne anmol banadiya.. Aur aap isko khareedh nahi paaye.. He smiled..
Aaj shayad aapke paas sab kuch hai.. Lekin uss din aapki aankhon mein iss makaan keliye joh jhalak thi.. Hum jaanthe hai ki jaise humaare paayal ki chanak aapki aankoh ki woh jhalak aaj bhi barkaraar hai.. 
Aaj iss bin mausam ki barsaath ki sandesa samajlijiye iss khath ko.. 
Aapne saare zindagi baaki sab ki naam kardi.. Ab toda teherjaayiye.. Ek pal, ek lamha.. Ek choti nazar daaliye iss safar par.. Shayad aap apne aapko phirse doondpaaye..
Ab tik baara bhajgaya hoga.. He looked at his watch and his eyes were wide open as the watch ticked 12.. He looked quickly back to the letter..
Ab iss makaan sahi maine mein aapka hua.. Janam din mubaarak hai aapko..
Aapko justuju jiski thi.. Usko toh paaliya aapne.. 
Aap soch rahe honge ki hum kaun hai.. Zindagi ki iss lambi safar mein.. 
Kab mile the, Kab ki bichadgaye..
Aapko ruswaa na kiya.. Na karenge..

Aapke,
Hum.

Ram smiled thinking.. Yeh kaun hai.. But there was no distress.. His life was empty.. Nothing more left to acomplish.. Har din ek jaisa tha.. Par aaj iss chitti ne iss din ko anmol bana diya tha.. He smiled.. 
His thought drifted to the handwriting.. Flowy and beautiful.. Each word weighed emotions.. He smiled and put the letter back into the envelope.. He placed the envelope in the inner pocket of his blazer..
He started his car and drove away lost in the fragrance that the envelope had.. The handwriting.. The words.. Those feet seemed to have captivated his heart.. That was all he knew of her.. That was all he heard of her.. And the letter was all that she left of hers.. 

To be continued..

Posted: 11 years ago
Thankyou so much for your feedback.. Dekha jaaye toh peheli baar kuch likh rahi hu.. So I would like to know what you would like to read.. Aur koi bhi shikaayath ho toh zaroor bataayiye.. Im open to comments and criticism.. Waise har din Ill be updating.. 
Aapki,
SaraswathiEshwar.

Continued..
Ram drove away to Kapoor Mansion.. His home.. Or so he thought.. He smiled at the thought that a woman had wished him right on time and had given him the most beautiful gift.. The bungalow he always wanted to buy..
He arrived at the gates of his mansion.. A very plain huge house with a small garden and a huge parking lot..
The whole mansion had been decorated with flashy lights.. The media was there.. Glitz and glamour had filled the air..
Ram sighed as he parked his car. 
As he opened his door the media rushed.. And there he was the dashing business man.. He smirked at the media.. Put on his shades and walked with false ego and pride.. 
The media clicked away.. Evading him with questions.. With compliments.. He walked away as always..
The door was open with Rishab and Natasha waiting for him.. They looked at each other and smiled.. They wanted Ram to be happy.. Little did they know his happiness did not lie here.. But they always tried.. 
Ram walked to them and pulled them into a side hug.. His warmth reassured them.. They smiled and entered.. All the women in the room gushed at Ram's presence.. 
All the big names from the business and entertainment world were there.. They were all there to get a glimpse of him.. Everyone was here to try their luck, some in business, some in him and some well just to be noticed by one of the biggies..
He knew why they were here.. But he was all smiles.. To the world he was a ruthless business man who had no heart.. 
The lights dimmed and the party went on.. Some on the dance floor and others discussing work and deals.. Ram walked around quietly with a scotch in his hand.. He didnt drink.. But yes he always held the scotch in his hand.. It had become a habit.. 
He wore a mask of a tycoon.. He looked around and wished he hadnt come here.. Rishab was with his friends discussing work and Natasha was busy being a good host.. 
He let out a sigh and touched his blazer.. He was lost in the thought that yes she was with him.. He smiled and looked down.. The thought of seeing her payal go chan chan chan.. Those soft feet on the wet lush grass.. He raised his eyes.. 
His parents very much in love walked hand in hand down the majestic stairs to the dimly lit hall.. With instrumental music playing it seemed like it was playing just for them.. He smiled seeing his parents holding hand and walking.. They were lost in their conversation.. Giggling and laughing.. Everyone looked at them in awe.. The most charitable kind people anyone had known.. Everyone walked and greeted them with due respect.. 
Ram smiled.. This was all that mattered to him.. His world.. He looked at his mother who looked at him asking him how she looked.. 
She had a smart hair cut.. A neatly pressed silk saree and some light jewels.. 
He smiled to her.. She smiled back.. He thought.. Ma aapki ki aankoh ki muskuraahat sabse khubsoorath hai.. 
His parents walked to him.. Ram took their blessings.. Ram looked at his father with gratitude.. They hugged each other.. They needed no words to convey how much they loved and respected one another.. Both of them wished him for his birthday.. They knew it didnt matter to him.. They smiled asking him to go.. They would take care.. Ram watched as his parents played good hosts.. 
Ram walked away thankful to his parents for letting him have his time alone.. 
As Ram walked steeped out.. He left this world behind.. Just for a while.. Just to breathe.. To feel alive..

To be continued.. 

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