ArHi OS - She Will Be Loved - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing OS dear
loved the song you chose matching up to the situation within
great loved the way you have portrayed guilt, emotions and realizations
Arnav finally realized the truth and saying sorry made promise to fix everything
brilliant job dear
well written
thanks for pm
Posted: 11 years ago
superb! Seriously. The way he found the truth in summarized way, and the clarifying of the terrace statement was just amazingly written.
Posted: 11 years ago
I really loved how you portrayed his internal anguish and turmoil. Our Arnav Singh Raizada, always bottling everything up! And our Khushi, always being the ultimate, supportive wife. I really have a soft spot for this song, its just so sweet from its melody to its lyrics. To have Arnav finally think that of Khushi, that she will be loved by him, it was extremely apt! 

Mojo power sista. Keep it going! ❤️
Posted: 11 years ago
simply awesome
loved it!!!!
thanks for the pm
Posted: 11 years ago
hey great job
that was very nice😊
Posted: 11 years ago
That was beautiful.
I loved it..

Wish this had happened in the show..

Arnav's guilt, confusion, anger.
Khushi's understanding that she doesn't mean anything to him and that all that happened the days leading up to Payal & Akash's wedding was a dream..

Loved the apology.

The conversation between the two of them was so poignant..

Thanks for the PM..
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome & well written
loved it
like the way arnav found out the truth

Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful & beautifully written OS...

I wish you would Make it an SS..

That would be awesome...

Loved this OS..
Posted: 11 years ago
lovely
would u consider writing a few more parts
Posted: 11 years ago
I wish you would've continued this a little more.. this was a beautiful one shot!!! I loved your choice of song! :)

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