Wow... I m first.. And this was an awesome os..it is so beautifully written i jus love the way u started and then flashback.. We all are aware of the scenes but the way u potrayed it gave it another beautiful meaning.. Loved it..beautifully written...Edited by nupsiii - 8 years ago
DI DI DI! *twirls you around* I can't even begin to tell you...how much I love this OS! Firstly, you matched the song with your OS perfectly. Secondly, you captured the pain, the guilt, the realization wonderfully. It was flawlessly written! I have always wanted a proper Arnav's POV on finding out the real truth...on finding out that he had hurt and blamed an innocent soul...on finding out that he was wrong...on finding out how much Khushi loves him and how much he truly loves her. Aapne sab itne beautifully likha Di. I beyond loved it! His realization...his apology...his determination on making things right between them and giving her the love she always deserved...it was all FANTASTIC! And the little note at the end! Di! It was so sweet! I couldn't help but cry. Thank you Di! For writing something so wonderful for me. This means so much. This OS is forever embedded in my heart. I LOVE YOU DI! Hamesha and forever! Mwah!