FF: Kuch Dil Ne Kaha.. Update Page: 3 - Page 2

Ram sat in his office cabin.. A newly decorated room.. White.. There was a huge window behind his chair.. Darkness i the room.. The table lamp focused its orange light on a few papers laid out beside his acer.. There was nothing in his cabim except for a light wooden shelf filled with files his rose wood table and his chai.. With two other chairs in front.. It was way past midnight.. The owner of Kapoor industries.. Ram Kapoor.. A billionair was going over design sheets for renovation of his office..He was tired.. He leaned back on his chair.. And let out a deep breath.. His eyes hurt.. He took off his glasses and placed them on his open laptop.. His mailbox was empty.. He closed his eyes and rest his head on the chair.. There was a thunderstorm outside and it was raining heavily... He stood u and walked to the window and stared outside.. He could see nothing much.. He could just hear the rain.. He closed his eyes and put his hands in his pockets.. His head hurt.. His phone rang and he picked it up..
Ram: RK speaking..
Voice: Namaste, designs mai kardiya hai humne..
Ram thinking.. Awaaz toh itni meeti hai.. A smile curved his lips..
Ram: Thankyou for accepting this project. Ill go through the designs and get back to you.
Voice: Ji.. Thankyou. Good night.
Ram: Good night.
He looks at the number and saves it.. The phone waits for him to enter the Name before saving.. He types M and the clock strikes 2.00.. Accidentally the number gets saved.. Vikram barges in..
Vik: Ram yaar chalo! Neha ki saath missed calls hai..
Ram bites his toungue.. Sorry yaar mere wajah se.. He hurriedly picks up his laptop and they walk out..

Do I continue? Comments and criticism is welcome.. :) Do let me know what you think.. If you like this start I shall continue..


Edited by BawraMann - 11 years ago

nice start do continue...waiting...👏

Nice start...waiting for nxt update...

Ram closed the door of his cabin.. As Vikram rushed through the dimly lit corridor.. It was plain.. The walls were blank.. The funiture was absent.. Ram walked in large steps behing Vikram.. He had his laptop in his hand.. They walked towards an empty lobby when the elevator doors opened for them.. Vikrams phone rang as the entered the elevator.. 

confusion confusion ab milwa bhi do

nice one..

Vikram dropped Ram near the gates of something that looked like a huge bunglow.. White Royal gates opened to him.. He walked in.. The Ram Kapoor had entered a garden.. Never in his life had he ever visited a garden.. All he knew as office and home.. He smiled to himself.. He couldnt see clearly as it was very dark.. As he walked further.. He reached stone pavements// Beautiful led lights lit the stone pathway.. He smiled.. He could hear the wind.. There was peace and calm.. He heard the crickets creek.. And he saw Rabbits sleeping near a corner.. He was lost in this world.. The cool wind blew by.. And he shut his eyes as he walked.. He opened his eyes and looked straight.. All the lights had dimmed out.. He saw a beautiful Gazebo In front.. It was made out of white marble.. As he neared it.. He could see two people sitting down at a table with sheets spread.. He could see that it was a man and a woman... He walked on the steps of the Gazebo.. He saw a handsome youngue man.. He got up and greeted Ram.. Ram: Ram Kapoor.. He smiled.. As he looked at a woman whos back was facing him.. Karthik Sharma.. The young man said as they shook hands.. Ram looked at the woman.. And he felt like someone had taken his tiredness away.. Her presence had got him spell bound.. Who was she he thought.. She wore a beautiful Creme saree With a pashmina shaul of the same colour.. She got up and walked away to the other end of the gazebo.. Ram watched the wind play with her long straight hair.. 

it was beautiful 

Very beautifully written yar

read all parts in one go. I loved it very much