This my other ff which is after my morning of c night which may start according to its response here is the little sneak peak of it ' I want to know how many want to read it ?your comments are going to decide whether I am going to continue it or not' here is the little sneak peak of my ff.π³
It will called as well I need an name too please suggest π
it starts like nuts and karthick (my version of an story inspired from balh) fall in love and for it ram goes to meet karthick family secretly not letting them know of his arrival so that find is nuts marrying and correct guy or not.. when he goes he sees priya and something brew up in mind .. he sets his eyes on her
later he learns that they are and ok good family and as karthick was good he decided to get them married..suddenly priya's job goes off
he says priya... i need to talk to u ... she says but i tell me soon what u want to say and leave.. he says.. i want u...priya as shocked
aaj mein teri faida nahi uthaavoonga as i want u to come to me with your own will and u will come until then and kisses her on her lips where she pushed him and run away and sees shipra who was coming up on seeiiing her priya hugs her tightly and cries and shipra ask kya hua?she says ma mein woo when she was about to say she starts to get unconscious
shipra comes to meet ram and it was his personal cabin where no one dare to enter and shipra take her sip of apple juice and smiles says mr ram.. mein yaahn aapse kal ki jo baat huyi uske bare meein baat karne ayi hooon
he smiles saying may i know on what matter??she says mr kapoor mein jaanthi hoon and I saw everything .. I know that u like priya and I very well noticed how u were behind her.. u very well know if I want I can do anything even complain in police .. he smiled and sat and said shipra sharam that is ur name right.. may I know when u had gone an complain to police why did u come here? She says kyunki I know agar priya se aap se shaadi kareein to uski bhi life hojeyegi aur aapko bhi police ke paas jaana nahi padega' he says oh .. u want me and priya to get married? He says u r mistaken mrs sharma .. I never said I wanted to marry priya' she sasy mazaak bahut achha kar lete hain.. he says shipra jii ye sach hain I want priya but I never said I want to marry her and smiles.. I know u must have come here to blackmail me ' ya phir for money but let me tell u .. I want priya for me but not as my wife.. she says aapp ye sab'. He says before u could react let me show u something' it was dam shocking to shipra.. he says so aap priya ko manakar mere paas lekar ayenge.. and make sure she comes here with her own wish'
ur comments are going to decide it 's faith π
part 1 page 1
part 2 page 5
part3 page 8
part 4 page11
part 5 page 14
part 6 page 18
part 7 page23
part 8 page30
part 9 page37
part 10 page 42
part11 page 50
part 12 page 57
part13 page 67
part14 page 75
part15 page 79
part 16 page 88
part 17 page 98
part18 page 108
part 19 page 125
part 20 page 132
part 21 page 142
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