ArHi FF! Lonely under the sheets [Completed] - Page 3

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Edited by sherin1689 - 11 years ago

the story makes my breath hitch, my heart ache...heart wrenching, poignant, tender ... supremely beautiful. two broken souls trying to find their way to each other.

Enjoyed the story...the way each of them finds themselves in the relationship, how the connection grows, evolves and matures gradually.

enjoyed the story very beautifully written, practically expressed the feelings of arshi.

This content was originally posted by: Lahari.

Mark!

This will always be one of my favorites in the romantic genre. The simplicity of the story is astonishing and leaves you craving for their simple life and the grand peace that comes with it.

On second thoughts the issues that come before are anything but simple. ;)

Thank you. This was mere exploration of a phase in their life and not entirety of it. I prefer writing about phases than a complete start-middle-end. It requires too much of thinking which I kind of lack at this point.

Yes, complications start as soon as you have a name for +1 :=)

A stark contrast to "We the people", I am not going to compare the two but coming from the same author, I must say this is impressive. Relationships are never easy and need constant effort and work, beautifully written, then again you are good at it; just mentioning it again.

A beautiful, telling story which puts so much focus on the simple yet most important aspects of a relationship like marriage with all the feelings from frustration to anger to reflection to resolve being touched upon in such an unassuming yet deeply effective manner. Great job. :)

Bookmarking.

Kalyaani recommended. So it has to be good 😊

tonight booked for your story...
did not started reading yet but for the first time saw continous post...so...gonna read pakka 😊

Just read the whole story at a go. The way you have written about relationships, not jut Arnav and Khushi but Khushi Payal, Anjali with all the others etc is beautiful. You are such a brilliant writer and I am a big admirer. That's all I can say.