OS KON HO TUM???

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Posted: 2013-01-25T02:11:01Z
Hello all!!! I Feel like mei Writer ban jaoongi!! :) aaj kal tou roz koi na koi ek OS likhwa leta hai mujh sey!!!! so this one is forr myyy BESt TWITTER BUDDY.. SANIYA!!! merii jaan  frr u n all those who love to read my bakwas!!! sorry I am not so good at writing Romantic notes but sanii want tht so will try!!



So here I go!! 




KON HO TUM???



so the scene starts from Retro party!!


RAm is searching for priya when one lady comes and say : AAp ko aap ki wife upr room mei bula rahi hai.


After thanking the lady ram moves towards his room!! THE same GREEN RAYA ROOM!! 


N what he finds there the lady standing  in front of the window with her back towards him!!RAm hesitantly moves towards her!! Thinking she is PRiya!! 


Ram in his heart: keh dunga usey mei aaj apne dil ki baat!! 


and moves towards her n while hesitating he keeps his palm on her shoulders but removes his hand thinking : Kia sochegi PRIYA??


The lady takes his hands n slides them to her waist!!


Ram: PRIYA??


LADY: HAn boliye RAm. Kia kehna chatey hain aap?


RAm: PRIYA 5 saal pehle jo 3 lafz tum ney pehle bole thy aaj mei kehna chahta hun!! meri saari ego saara ghussa sub side pr rakh kr kehna chata hun!!! I want u back in my life..  I want my PRIYA back!! I WANT MY PEEHU BAck!!! I want myy FAMILY back!!! I LOVE YOU PRIYA N I REALLY REALLY DO!!! I promise u iss baar mei ek aacha pati ban kr dikhaoonga!! Please give me one last chance!!plzz :( 




Lady: MEI bhi apni aagey ki zindagi aap k saath bitana chati hun!!! I love YOU TOO RAM!!  
N hugs him!!! but still the face of the lady is unreveled!! 


while hugging her Ram feels that the lady is loosing her balance.. ram holds her firmly n looks at her face!!! 


PRIYA!!!!


yes she was none other than PRIYA RAM KAPOOR!!!!Tongue


RAm: PRIYA theek tou ho tum!!!!



PRIYA: (while holding her head) han kia hua hai mujheyy theek tou hun mei!!! bus thode sey chakr aarheye hain!!! BUT I LOVE U MR KAPOOR!! again loosing her balance!!


RAM: Shit!!! You are drunk !! pee rakhi hai tum ney!!


PRIYA: chodiyeye wo sub MR KAPOOR!! I want to say u something (is not able to speak properly due to heavy intake of alcohol) I AM SORRY MR kapoor!! aaj jo kuch bhi mei ne aap ko office mei kaha.. plz mujhey maaf kardijiye Because I love U!!!

RAM: PRIya its ok!! control ur self aao bed pr betho!!!


n takes her towards the bed n make her sit with the help of the bed rest!!

RAm: tumeh aaram ki zaroorat hai!! araam karo tum mei aata hun!! n tries to leave when Priya holds his hand!!!


PRIYA: kahan ja rahey hain aap?? mujheyy akele chor kr mat jaiyehh!!! nahi reh paoongii a
ap k bagair ab :( 


RAM: nhi ja rha mei kahine tumare pas hyy hun!!


PRIYA: aaiyeh!! bethiyeh na mere saath.. kitnii saarii batein krni hai aap k saath!!
N he sits beside her!!


PRIYA: haayeee... aaj mere golu KApoor kitne cute lag rahey hain!!! n comes closer to kiss his cheeks!! n places a warm kiss on hiss GOLu cheeks!!


RAm: yeh kia kar rahi ho yr!!! tum so jao tumeh aram ki zaroorat hai!! or abhi shaam mei NEha vikram ki shaadi bhi hai!! usmei bhi tou jana hai humeh!!

PRiya: AAp ney yeh tou bataya hy nahi k mei aaj kesii lag rahi hun!!(making puppy face)  Cry Bataiyeh na kesi lag rahi hun??


RAM: boht khoobsoorat!!! jesi meri priya mujhey humesha lagti hai!!!


PRiya: yeh kesiii tareef kr rahein hainn?? rukhi rukhii!!!! jese mei ney ki wese kijiye naaa Cry


RAM: uff merii maaa!!!! kahan phans gaya yr mei!!!! aaj phirr kis neyy pilaa dii iss ko!!

PRIYA: kiaaa apne aap seyy batein kr rahey hain!! Cry boliyee naa kesii lag rhi hun Cry

RAM: bohtt pyaari, khoobsoorat orr mere liyee touu tum duniyaa kii sub seyy khoobsoorat ho hy!!


PRIYA moves her cheeks towards him!!


RAM: ab yeh kia kr rahi ho??

PRIYA: UFFF ekk bachii k baap ban gaye hain magr GOLU k GOLU hain abhii tk!!! kiss kariye mujheyy!!! hrr cheez batani padti hai!!

n RAM places a soft kiss on her cheeks!! n startss blushing!!! : Ab so jao merii maa.. koi aagya na pata nhi kia hojayega!!


so jaoongi magr ek shart pr!!! 


RAm: Ab kia hai??


PRIYA: Do u love me!!!


RAM: ABhi tou kaha!! haann!! I LOVEEE UUU


Priya: OHWW myy cutee GOlu!!! I LOVEE U TOO!!!


PRIYA: TOU mujh seyy shaadii kijiyee aaj!!!


RAM: KIYAAA??? priya dekho aaj NEHA vikram ki shaadi hai.. humarii nhi!!


PRIYA: haan tou ek mandak mei 2 shaadiyan nhi ho sakhti kia??


priya:bataiyehh kr rahein hain mujh sey shaadi ya phir jaoon mei neechey!!!

RAM: ACHA theek hai merii jaan!!! aaj hy karenge hum shaadi!! ab so jaoo plzzz!!! 


PRIYA plants another kiss  on his cheek n says : okay my phir sey honey wale pati jee Wink


n she dozes off to sleep!!! n RAM keeps on blushing sitting thereSmilen says: pata hota tou pehle hy pila deta tumeh darroooWink


THE END


SORRY for all the mistakes!!! n do leave ur comments good or badd all are welcome :)Smile

Edited by farwasneha - 2013-01-25T05:47:31Z
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Posted: 2013-01-25T02:29:31Z
Pata nahi kya hone wala hai n pata nahi kaise dekh sakenge par yeh to Simply superb hai...Yaha tak ruk jaayenge toh i will fly..You have given a best gift.Thanq @farwasneha.Thumbs UpDancingPartyClap
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Posted: 2013-01-25T02:31:42Z
thank you so much!! but yr em confuse k pata nhi sahi likha hai mei ne ya nhi.. coxx esa kuchh frst tym likha hai...  sad scenes tou likh leti hun mei.. but scenes like this are bit hard fr me.. hope everyone likes it
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Posted: 2013-01-25T02:32:49Z
Originally posted by farwasneha


Hello all!!! I Feel like mei Writer ban jaoongi!! :)

arey ban hi gayi ho yaar! har ek writer ko ek apna apna style ya tareeka hoti hai ... so u r already a writer now!

 Ram: PRIYA??


LADY: HAn boliye RAm. Kia kehna chatey hain aap?

kaaash ... aisa hi ho ...

pata hota tou pehle hy pila deta tumeh darroooWink

awesome yar!


hahahaha ... very cute OS! talli priya n golu ram ... haaye haaye ... missing those holi waali din ...
RaYa ki dubaara shaadi .. wow!
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Posted: 2013-01-25T03:04:58Z
Originally posted by farwasneha


thank you so much!! but yr em confuse k pata nhi sahi likha hai mei ne ya nhi.. coxx esa kuchh frst tym likha hai...  sad scenes tou likh leti hun mei.. but scenes like this are bit hard fr me.. hope everyone likes it
dont u worry abt it.i loved it..when am worried that how worse its going to be on monday u just gave a reason to be happy and trust me it helps a lot to feel better.Thanks  once again.
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Posted: 2013-01-25T03:06:57Z
Originally posted by sreev12


Originally posted by farwasneha


Hello all!!! I Feel like mei Writer ban jaoongi!! :)

arey ban hi gayi ho yaar! har ek writer ko ek apna apna style ya tareeka hoti hai ... so u r already a writer now!

 Ram: PRIYA??


LADY: HAn boliye RAm. Kia kehna chatey hain aap?

kaaash ... aisa hi ho ...

pata hota tou pehle hy pila deta tumeh darroooWink

awesome yar!


hahahaha ... very cute OS! talli priya n golu ram ... haaye haaye ... missing those holi waali din ...
RaYa ki dubaara shaadi .. wow!
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yeah missing those happy moments..

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Posted: 2013-01-25T03:08:09Z
THANK u all!!!!  
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Posted: 2013-01-25T03:09:15Z
WinkMeri Maa itni acchi likhoge  tho, kabhi BT ka CV nahin ban Paayegi
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