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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello readers! Ab kya batau.. Mujhe laga instead on os weeks mujhe os wekk prediction likna chahiye!

Week 3 : Pridiction..

Everyone is busy with the preparations.. Ab sab priya ke flat pe tayaariyaa horahi hai..
The scene starts from where Priya gets up saying mein jaake chocolate eclairs banathi hu..

She leaces alone to her papas house while all of them get busy with the preparations in her flat..
Neha chupke se jaake Ram ko phone karthi hai..
Neha: Fatty.. Suno.. Priya apne papa ke ghar mein akele hai..
Ram smiling.. Aila! Haan tik hai.. Mein jaatha hu..
Ram keeps the phone in his pocket an happily rushes to Priya..

In Priyas apartment..
Priya is busy mixing the floor.. She is wearing a grey kurtha and has left her hair loose on her right shoulder.. Her eyes neatly lined with kohl.. She is lost in her thoughts.. Yeh Pihu bhi na.. Kuch bhi bol deti hai..

The bell rings.. She quickly washe her hand and walks to the door.. She opens the flimsy door and looks at Ram wet..
She murnurs.. Chaar seediya chadke itne pasine chutgayi..
Ram: Oh hello yeh seediya chadke nahi kisine paani daldiya..
Priya ignoring his words: Papa ghar pe nahi hai..
Ram: Mujhe abdar se garmi aur bahar se tand horahi hai.. I cant explain.. Todi tik toh karne do.. Please..
She glares at him and leaves to the kitchen..
He smirks.. He walks in and vloses the door..
She looks at him annoyed: Towel room ke andar hai.. And goes back to doing her work..
Ram khushi khushi room chalajaatha hai.. Aur towel ke saath baahar aatha hai..
He walks to her wipong his head.. Looking at the chocolate mix kept there he stands looking at it like a small child..
Priya: Yeh pihu ke liye hai..
Ram goes close to her.. Toh..
Priya ignores him and continues looking down..
Ram ruffles his hair with the towel and water sprinkles on her face..
Priya glares at him..
Ram: Sorry.. Woh..
Priya looks at her hand.. Its messy she turns to leave but humaaare vute golu haath pakadlete hai..
Priya turns to him: Choiye..
He pulls her closer.. And wipes the water from her face.. He looks at her dove eyes and loses himself.. Priya looks at his brown eyes.. Pure overflowing with love.. With their proximity her heart starts beating fast.. Her anger subsides..
Bg music..
Dil ki dhadkan badthi jaaye saamne jab woh aaye..
Pyaar isiko kehethe hai kya..
Koi yeh samjaaye..
Bade acche lagthe hai...
Yeh baatein.. Mulaaquaatein..
Apnaapan.. Aur tum..

Ram smiles to her.. She moves her head away.. And looks at her hand.. She tries to free her self..
She looks at Ram.. In a low voice.. Chodiye Ram..
Ram pulls her closer..looking at her eyes.. Kya kaha tumne..?
Priya: Chogiye.. She realises.. Mr. Kapoor..
Ram: Chod du Priya? Jaise tumne chod diya tha..
Priya has tears in her eyes.. As well as anger.. She looks at his teary eyes..
They both love eachother.. They want eachother by thier side.. But the pain.. The anger.. They are lost in the moment in eachothers eyes longing for forgiveness and togetherness..

Tere bina mushkil hai jeena..
Tu mera humsaaya..
Tujhse bichadjaane ki dar ne..
Yeh ehsaas dilaaya..
Bade sacche lagthe hai..
Yeh aansoo.. Tere darpan.. Apnaapan aur tum..

The end!

Uff haan pata hai choti hai.. Par yeh sirf monday ki raya moment hai.. Har sunday ek prediction likhungi.. Aur toda lamba likhungi., hehe..
For now getting back to tumko dekha toh..

Lots of love,
Lesha.

Posted: 11 years ago
ram is such a sweetheart...
Posted: 11 years ago
Hope your prediction comes true and there is more Raya moments too. Great job Lesha
Posted: 11 years ago
hai hai ma darling... kash ye hota!!!!
Posted: 11 years ago
nice n mesmerising os
loved it loads
aur chahiye...jaldi update karo na😛
Posted: 11 years ago
good prediction, really in need of RaYa moments, do continue
Posted: 11 years ago

awewome part yaar i wish show me bhi aisa hi hota but we r not so lucky that what we want CV's will give us so easily... never mind we r getting by our great writer friends... u guys r awesome always made our days... thanks for writing it...
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