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Hey peeps =) I sort of had this tiny little figment of this story in my mind for a while now,so scribbled on the keyboard a bit this morning.

The chapter is still very crude,but yeah,whatever.I was just really way too impatient to post it.

Im thinking about completing the story in a dozen chapters,so,views please? ๐Ÿ˜ณ

 A heads up,im a sucker for dark,complex stories.So,there will rarely be sunshine in whatever i try to write :| 

There are many layers to this story.The first chapter,I have tried to keep it simple,not too many emotions all at once (there will BE too much of it soon! ๐Ÿ˜†)..its sort of the male protagonist's POV in the 1st chapter.

I have decided to name this story "Obscured Lives" whose meaning in simplest words can be deciphered as : Lives which cannot be easily understood.


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Dishy๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Ae ki kitta tu? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Ohh my sexy sig maker is also a sensational writer โ˜บ๏ธ

I really liked it..what a beautiful flow! How beautifully the words are woven... fabulous!

Nobel prize in writing is not Far Dishy โ˜บ๏ธ
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Originally posted by: shubhika124

Dishy๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Ae ki kitta tu? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Ohh my sexy sig maker is also a sensational writer โ˜บ๏ธ

I really liked it..what a beautiful flow! How beautifully the words are woven... fabulous!

Nobel prize in writing is not Far Dishy โ˜บ๏ธ


shubhi ๐Ÿค— thank you so much,hun :*

p.s : zyaada jhoot mat bol,logon ko lagega,maine tereko paise diye hain ye sab bolne ke liye ๐Ÿคฃ

kidding!thanks my bachcha!


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@monu : read weneva u find the time :)
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a brilliant start .. i have always loved wen writers describe a cold night.. and do every bit of justice to it with human emotions.. this was amazing ! 

i wud love to read the story further.. esp the mother son relationship.. it has left me with an urge to delve deeper..
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Originally posted by: disha15

shubhi ๐Ÿค— thank you so much,hun :*

p.s : zyaada jhoot mat bol,logon ko lagega,maine tereko paise diye hain ye sab bolne ke liye ๐Ÿคฃ

kidding!thanks my bachcha!



Matlab logon ko nahi batana ki you bribed me? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Oh sorry sorry ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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a brilliant start .. i have always loved wen writers describe a cold night.. and do every bit of justice to it with human emotions.. this was amazing ! 


i wud love to read the story further.. esp the mother son relationship.. it has left me with an urge to delve deeper..


Thank you so much for taking time to read it =)

And about the mother son relationship,yes.There is some dark past haunting them.

Thanks a lot for dropping in to leave a comment.Means a lot ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Matlab logon ko nahi batana ki you bribed me? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Oh sorry sorry ๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Shubhi,tu aaj kal sab kuch late samajne lagi hai ๐Ÿ˜›