OS: Continued From yesterday Nights Episode..

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Posted: 2013-01-01T01:38:46Z
Hmm.. Hello everyone!

Everyone was dissapointed with the way BALH went yesterday night.. 
There was a request from sandhigazala19! 
So this one is for you..

From yesterday night's phone convo of Raya..

Priya: Mr. Kapoor.. 
Ram: haan.. He seems tired tensed and angry with himself..
Priya senses that something is wrong.. Ram..
Ram snaps out of his distress hearing his name for the first time after 5 years.. He smiles.. Bolo..
Priya: Neha Vik ki toh..
Ram: Sulaayi ke bajah jagda hogaya.. 
Priya: Humesha kuch gadbad hi hota hai.. Aapk kaha hai ?
Ram: Gharpe aur tum?
Priya: mein abhi ghar pohonchrahi hu.. 
Ram: Ek kaam kartha hu.. Mujhe tumse kuch discuss karna hai.. Mein waha aajau? gets up and walks down the stairs from the room.. The lights are off.. He silently walks out of the house to his car..
Priya: lekin Neha..?
Both of them think.. The driver stops the taxi in front of the apartment gate.. Priya pays him.. And starts walking inside.. Ram is on his way..
Ram: Priya.. Hum kahi baahar chale..
Priya shocked..: Iss waqt.. Kya Mr. Kapoor.. Aapko waqt ka koi khayaal bhi hai..
Ram starts giggling on the other side.. Signalling the driver to speed up..
Priya: haaw aap has rahe hai Mr. Kapoor had hai.. Ram nods in negative.. Thinks.. Aaj maza leta hu.. Gussa toh nahi hai ab.. lekin punishment toh baaki hai..
Ram: priya suno toh.. Ab neha ghar pe hai toh mein kya karu..?
Priya: Scratching her temples... Haan.. And goes to the lift..She gets in.. 
Ram: Ruko..
Priya: Kya?
Ram comes and joins her.. 
Both of them look at each other confused.. They put their phones down..
The lift starts.. 
Ram: Hume unko realise karvana hai.. Ki unki khushi ek dusre ki saath mein hai..
Priya: haan.. Aise alag rehene mein nahi..
Ram: Toh ek kaam karthe hai.. Hum jagda karthe hai..
Priya: What? Looks at him.. 
The lift lands.. They get out.. They go to priyas apartment which has a note..
Priya,
mein aaj ki raath akele rehena chahthi hu.. Rehaan bhi mera saath hai.. Usse kuch baath karni thi.. Aaj keliye tum..
Love,
Neha.
Priya: Toh mein papa ke ghar.. 
Ram smiles at her naughtily..
Priya: Aise kya.. Chocking.. Kya dekh rahe hai..?
Ram: kuch nahi.. Mein sab ko kal.. picnic keliye invite karunga.. Tum Neha ko manaake leaao.. Waha hum dono baashan deke toda acting karlenge... Unhe bhi realize hojaayega..
Priya: Looking up down left right.. Haan ok.. And walks off quickly.. 

Next Morning.. in KM: 
Sab tayaar hai.. Ayesha aur mama ji bohot ud rahe the.. Baaki sab Ram Priya ko paas laaneki planning kar rahe the..
They all leave..
Sharmas Are ready..
Priya is wearing a while long kurtha With red leggins and Red dupatta.. She has let her hair down..  Natasha had forcefully dressed her up today.. She was wearing a Red bindi and red lipstick.. Neha walks in her head down... 
Neha: priya mera bilkul mood nahi hai..
Priya: Are aao na.. Waise bhi..Neha looks at her..
Neha's mood lightens..: Wow priya.. Tum toh aaj.. Uff.. Ram toh gaya.. Everyone starts giggling.. Priya turns pink..
 Priya..looking at Rehaan who stands at the door.. Rehaan Andar aao na..
Rehaan: Lekin maam..
Priya: Are You are a part of the family..
Rehaan has tears in his eyes.. He walks in and gives Priya a hug.. She pats his back..
Shipra and Nutz look at each other and smile..
Sudhir: Chale ab..
Rehaan parts.. Have fun.. looking at Neha.. maa..
Priya: Chalo tum bhi aarahe ho.. Neha smiles at rehaan... They all leave..

At the Pic entrance.. 
Ram Signals for them to open the gates.. its a beautiful garden which he owns.. The boundaries are not seen.. It seems like a vast golf  course with a lot of Trees and flowers.. 
Natashas car enters next.. They park and get Down.. 
Vik: Ram.. pehele tumne Pihu Khush Sammy aur Ritzy ko school bhejdiya.. bado ka kya picnic..
Ram: Arre chupkar.. Mujhe Priya ko jalaana hai.. 
Soumya Rishab And Kk walk with Daadi And set things up below a huge tree..
Shipra Sudhir and Natasha also walk.. Shipra manages to drag Ayesha and mamaji Away.. 
Priya slowly gets off the car with Neha.. 
Vik looks at Neha.. There is pain in both their eyes.. 
Rehaan walks away.. joining the rest of them..
Ram looks at Priya.. Her eyes neatly lined with kohl.. Her bindi Her red lips.. She looked so beautiful..
Vik looks at her..
Vik: Wow.. Priya.. 
Priya smiles at him.. 
Vik: Whispering.. Ram tu toh gaya.. Looks at Neha.. Neha aaj.. Kuch khaas hai kya?
Both of them seemed to have forgotten the pain..
Neha goes and stands beside him: lagtha toh hai.. And coughs..
Priya: nehaaa..
Neha and Vikram giggle.. 
Ram: Chale.. They go and sit down.. Neha and Rehaan.. Sit with the Sharmas.. The kapoors sit opposite..
Rajat arrives with Daijaan.. Cady and Rahul.. 
Rajat goes and sits beside Priya..
Ram is a little jealous.. Even though he knows Rajat would never cross his line.. 
Rahul goes to Rehaan.. 
Rahul: Sorry.. 
Rehaan: Im sorry.. Sab meri wajah se..
Rahul: Nahi.. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki.. Cady ne mujhe sab bataya.. Im sory bhai..
Rehaan hugs Rahul.. They both have tears in their eyes.. 
Vik and Neha look at this.. Cady Smiles at them..
Soumya: Ahem.. Priya bhabi.. Aap kuch.. Yani toda..
Rishab: nahi bohot hot lagrahi hai.. 
Ram: Oye chupbait! Bhabi hai teri..
Rajat starts laughing..
Rajat: Oye hoye.. Kya pyaar hai.. 
Ayesha fuming.. Thinking.. Yeh sab kya horaha hai.. Rajat bhi.. 
Both Ram and Priya turn pink..
Nutz; Antakshari khele..
Vik: Great idea.. Ram start karega..
Neha bursts into laughter with Priya..
Vik: neha yaad hai.. Bade achhe.. Mimiking Ram.. Everyone starts laughing..
Ram still calm.. He clears his throat.. 
He starts.. 
Bade achhe lagthe hai.. Everyone is stunned.. He sounds perfectly in tune..
Yeh dharthi.. Yeh nadiya Yeh raina Aur..
Everybody.. Aur Tum..
Rajat: Dekha.. mera dost accha gaata hai.. Ab Mr. Kapoor ka hogaya.. Mrs' kapoor ki baari.. 
Nutz: haan.. Ma se kuch.. 
Priya: Mere meheboob mere sanam..
 Shukriya meherbaaani karam.. 
Everyone goes aye haye..
Rishab: maar dala alla maar dala.. Everyone goes onn having fun.. 
Pulling each others leg.. They have Brunch and leave.. Vik Neha decide to sit and Disscuss.. Ram Priya stay back to support them.. While rest of them leave.. Cady Rehaan And Rahul take permission and go for a movie.. 
The four of them go and sit by a lake.. 
Ram and vik on one side and Neha and Priya on the other..
Priya: Tum dono ne kya decide kiya hai..?
Neha: Rehaan ko ghar mein its not possible..
Vik: I need some time.. 
Ram: Ok.. Lekin divorce..
Vik: Cancel.. Bacche Neha ke bagair nahi rehesakthe..
Neha: Rehaan ko mein Bangalore bhej rahi hu.. Padai keliye..
Priya: This is not done yaar..
Vik: Haan.. Usko phirse apni maa se alag..
Neha: phirse aake wahi kade hogaye.. With tears in her eyes..
Ram: Ill adopt him.. 
Priya: Haan yeh toh.. Ab problem hi solve hogayi..
Vik: Kya? 
Priya: haan.. Woh aaj se Priya Aur Ram Kapoor ka beta kehelaayega.. Kya farak padtha hai.. Ram and Priya look at each other..
Vik: Lekin humaari responsibility.. Hai.. 
Neha: haan tum dono kaise..
Ram: Par tm dono ko problem horahi hai.. toh..
Vik: Nahi.. Woh mera beta hai.. Mein khud karunga..
Neha looks at Vikram They have an eye lock.. Ram and Priya smile at each other..
Vik Neha: Thanks yaar..
Vik: Bohot jagda hogaya.. Ab tum dono bhi..
Priya and Ram look away..
Neha: Ab kya hua..
Priya: Ayesha Mr. kapoor ki biwi hai..
Ram says nothing.. He just looks at the water.. 
Vik: Are Priya.. Unki koi shaadi nahi hui.. nahi paper mein..
Neha: Aur naahi Mandir mein..
Priya just looks away..
Vik: neha hum chalte hai.. 
Neha: haan.. Aapdono khud solve karo.. Mujhe toh abhi Vikram ke saath Ghumna hai..
Ram and priya giggle and wave good bye..

The End!
Ek din ka episode itna hi hota hai.. Toh.. Baaki aapki imagination ki upar hai! ;)
Have a great year ahead.. Do leave your comments compliments and Crriticism.. :)


Love,
Lesha.

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Posted: 2013-01-01T01:58:23Z
Hum toh na jaane kya kya imagine kar bethe hain already...per CV's ki dimaag ki baati jal he nahi rahi !!!

thanks dear..
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Posted: 2013-01-01T02:00:05Z
Priya calling 'Ram ...' haaye haaye ... kab ayega yea din...
antakshari ram st karega ... hahaha kya timing thi vik ki ... maza aa gaya padke!
Mrs.Kapoor ki baari ... waw

Good one! thank you!
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Posted: 2013-01-01T02:02:28Z
hehe !! mujhe rehan and rajat se equally chir hai! liken raya ka part bht zabardast laga!! ClapClap
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Posted: 2013-01-01T03:41:40Z
wow lovely...thank you
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Posted: 2013-01-01T04:07:29Z
Kya yaar Lesha, tum bhi, ek din ka episode me thoda time aur bacha tha, uss me RaYa ka reunion dikha deti, par tumne bhi BREAK ka Sahara liya aur episode khatam kar diya, aisa kaise...zabardast tha, kab ayega woh din jab yeh charo dost phir se ek honge, naya saal hain, nayi soch bhi, shayad naya kuch dekhne ko mil jaye, till then bade achhe lagte hain, yeh dharti, yeh nadiya, yeh raina aur RaYa
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Posted: 2013-01-01T04:15:28Z
I wish we could see something on  these lines in the show tooDay Dreaming 
loved the OS
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Posted: 2013-01-12T13:49:06Z
really nice dear i enjoyed it a lot... loved RaYa's part .. i wish u shown RaYa reunioun too but never mind this is also awesome...
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