ff:Kya dil ne kaha part -3 updated on page-4

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Posted: 2012-12-28T09:02:52Z

                         Smile  kya dil ne kahaSmile


Hey,

         Myself Sakshi tanwar

I know I know i m also Sahshi tanwar share same identity with SAKSHI JI.

and I'm proud of it...

Here,

            I'm going to start a new ff on "Bade achhe lagte hain"

It's my first attempt to write something . kindly bear mw and encourage me to write more...


I'm going to start from begining season 1 where Ram and Priya r unmarrid and so onn...



Character sketch

The Ram kapoor:  A busnissman,single,in his early 40's.loves his family especially his sister Natasha.


Priya sharma:  A  self dependant lady in her early 30's.Is a doctor but loves teaching so teaches in a medical college and also loves to read novels in free time.

Other member's are as pr the show...

part 1-page1

part2-page3


Edited by sakshitanwar15 - 2013-01-09T04:45:29Z
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Posted: 2012-12-28T09:48:02Z
Would love to hear you out! You should definately write! All the best! Can't wait for you to start!!

Love,
L.
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Posted: 2012-12-28T09:50:56Z
Hi Sakshi,
Your concept is really interesting, since it's somewhat unusual here, I mean the FF writers usually start their version of story on current track or a plot that is widely different from the show. But your take is on season1,So I'm intrigued LOL
Please update soon. Big smile Thumbs UpEdited by -evan- - 2012-12-28T09:53:42Z
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Posted: 2012-12-28T09:51:18Z
Thanks for giving us an opportunity to read ur writings.
Please continue
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Posted: 2012-12-28T10:21:21Z

                                           Kya dil ne kaha

                                                    part:1

It's monday morning...sun is shining...


In kapoor mansion

Everything is going on too silently as no one is there...

suddendly,

                   Ram shouting on someone on phone..

Ram:How dare u talk toe like this.Tum jante ho kis se baat kr rahe ho.I'm Ram kapoor 'The Ram kapoor'chahu tho ek pl me tumhe raste pr laa sakta hu. Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri behan k bare me kuch bolne ki.

Caller:sorry sir.mujhe pta nhi tha

Ram:wt sorry, u hv to pay for it..

he cuts the the phoneand sees natasha sobbing

Ram:choti choti please calm down.main use chodunga nahi.

Nuts:Bhai usne kartik pr haat uthaya tho mujh sw raha nhi gaya or mane bhi us ko thappad mar diya.usne mujhe dhamki di h ki wo kartik kobarbad kr dega.

Ram:kartik...who is kartik

Nuts:Bhai wo bhai wo...

Ram:kya wo wo laga rakha h . kon h kartik bata na.

Nuts:Bhai kartik wo...kartik sharma...

wo US me hum saathme project kr rahe the or main.

Ram:main kya choti

Nuts:Bhai I Lv him...or wo bhi mujhse pyar krta h Ram:kya

Niharika:Ha Ram Nuts thik kh rahi h wo us ldke se pyar krti h.

Ram:Ma pr wo ...na jane us ldke ne.choti ko kis mksd ae fsaya h km se.km hume ho samajdari se kam lena chahiye

Nuts:nhi bhai he is very kind and moreover wo mujhse bahit pyar krta h

Niharika:Ram jab nuts ko hi koi problem nhi h tho hume bhi us ldke se milna chahiye

Ram:maa agar ap khti h tho thik h main ysse ek bar zaroor milunga.I promice or wase bhi main choti k liye kuch bhi kr sakta hu.

Nuts:Thanks bhai and hugs Ram

Niharika: chalo ram breakfast kr lo

Ram:maa ek important meeting h m chalta hu .office me hi kuch kha lunga..

Niharika:k

Then Ram leaves for office...

Niharika:shukr h nuts abhi us mote ko kuch pta nhi h ki jis admi se wo phone pr baat kr eaha tha wo tumhara ex-boyfriend or tum uske bachhe ki maa bnne wali ho..

Nuts:mom he is my past . pr ab main kartik se pyar karti hu or ye bachha  i'll abort it as soon as possible.

Niharika:nhi tum asa kuch nhi krogi ab jo krna h m krungi tum chup chap shadi kro or chalti bno

and leaves natasha alone...

In sharma house 

There is geeat hustle and bustle all around

Shipra:chlo sb nashta kr lo.

Priya:ji maa... ayesha chal maa bula ryahi h raste me tujhe bhi drop kr dungi

Ayesha:di aj maa bhi mere sath jaa rahi h tho ap niklo m maa k sath chlu jaungi

Priya: k

just then kartik wake up

Priya:ab kaisa lg raha h 

kartik: di phle se better lg raha h 

Priya:tu chinta mt kr main hu na sb sambhal lungi or te le teri tablets phle breakfast kr le phir dawa le lena

Kartik:k

they all hv there breakfast. then kartik say's 

kartik:  di wo ap sambhal kr jana..

Priya:tu chinta mt kr or jaldi se us ldki se milwa de

kartik:ldki

Priya:ha jiske liye itni mar khai h 

kartik:ha wo jaldi hi milwa dunga

hv a gd day...

priya leaves for hospital

In kapoor industries

Ram's phone rings

Ram:ji main abhi hospital paunchta hu

ram leaves office and run toward hospial



PRECAP::::Ram and Prita both r on the way to hospital will they mwet or destiny plays his game...still to watch stay tuned till my next updare...


please comment if u like it or nt .ur cimments would encourage me yo write more...


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Posted: 2012-12-28T10:24:38Z
 wanna read more

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Posted: 2012-12-28T10:29:18Z
Not bad, season one ki jhalkiya nazar aa gayi, continue
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Posted: 2012-12-28T10:56:47Z
continue soon Smile
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