SS: "BREAK KE BAAD" page 2 ;2 update

Posted: 2012-12-14T13:26:02Z
hi ,
this is fisrt story i ever wrote plzz forgive me if i hurt anyone or make any mistakes
                          Break Ke Baad

the story starts after the custoday case over  
ram loss the battle and priya wins pihu &  rajat goes to the lawyer to talk
priya tries to talk to ram but ram cums  out without seeing anyone
vikram rushes behind raam
ram comes outside the court
ram with full ofanger and lost faith in everything bzo of the court verdict that
he canoot see his daughter nor talk to her  
he rushes to driver seat of the car and ask the driver to leave  drives the car &
in fraction of seconds ram car dissaperas 4r there
vikram  are cums outside stood  shocked and worried by ram behaviour  
priya rushes outside the court and ask vikram
priya : vikram ram kaha hai ?
priya : vikram tell me ram kaha hai ? ( she starts getiing worried now )
priya : shakes vikram ..vikram ram kaha hai bolo
vikram: trembles rammm ramm priya
priya: haa vikram ram kaha hai ? jaldhi bolo i need to talk to him
vikram : priya woh ram kafi guseey mein chala gaya
priya : kaha chala gaya ?
vikram: priya woh kafi gusey mey tha aur drove the car by himself  
priya : vikram tumney unko roka nahi ?
vikram: priya jab tak mein aya woh chala gaya tha
priya : what ? kudh drive kara rahey tey ? ( she is totally worried now )
vikram : priya im trying his phone but phone swith off
priya : keep on trying his phone
inside the car ram was going threw turmoil of emotions & driving the car without watching the road
and no time his car was at a very hight speed
here vikram & priya tries his phone
priya : kuch hua ?
vikram : nahi abhi bhi switches off arahihai
priya :this is all bzo of me
vikram : nahi isa nahi nahi priya
vikram : plzz be relax kuch nahi hoga usey
priya :vikram abb unhey kuch hoga tho mein apney aap ko kahi maaf nahi kar paungi
vikram :apney app bhi barosa rakoo naothing will happen to ram

suddnely vikram phone ring
ram name flshes on his mobile
precap :vikram & priya are shock state
to be continued 
if u like or not plzz write your comments
Edited by coolbuddy12 - 2012-12-15T01:09:54Z
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Posted: 2012-12-14T13:31:27Z
good one keep writing
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Posted: 2012-12-14T13:33:04Z
Its too good...
continue continue continue
pls dont keep us hanging...
kya hua ram ko...pls let him be okay
do continue soon
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Posted: 2012-12-14T21:56:18Z
yaar beech mei kyu rukha...update soonClap
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Posted: 2012-12-14T22:27:36Z
do continue soon
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Posted: 2012-12-14T23:20:11Z
hey bhagwan kahan rok diya cont soon hope ram is fine 
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Posted: 2012-12-14T23:53:49Z
Aww...It's Nice...Plzzz continueBig smile
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Posted: 2012-12-15T01:07:11Z
Originally posted by abcd89

good one keep writing

thanks u so much
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