"Kesa yeh ehsaas pyaar ka hain".updated p1 on p2 - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
Character sketch looks very interesting! Plz continue soon..
Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u soo much u all of u.. 😃 i'll upadte First part of story ASAP! ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago

Part 1..}//..#

{NOTE :: THERE R NO NEGATIVE CHARACTERS IN MY STORY}

A Girl was lying on her yellow bed with laptop in her lap in her dark green room.. She wore night dress .. smiply beautiful.. her hair was tied in a bun.. n she was watching few dance moves videos on dance site .. n she was learning also few steps of dance.. suddenly her mobile start ringing n she did not realised that her mobile was ringing.. coz her mobile was in silent.. n she was busy with her dance video..

 just then a man wearing dark blue jeans n white coller t-shirt entered her room.. n his mobile was in his hand near his ear.. bcoz he was calling her past 1 hour..(but hitler is hitler .. jab ek kaam pe dhyan de to usko apne aju baju ki baaton ka dhayan nai rehta..bas apne kaam pe dhyan deti hain..) and he was moving forward to her n just then he thought ki first is chokri ka laptop hi kyo na bandh karu me? Isko me pichle 1 ghante se call kar raha hu par nai madam apne bharatnatyam me busy hain.. n then he started walking towards her laptop.. n then he took her laptop from her lap n loged off her laptop.. n then she also woke up from her bad n then u can see our pyari si darling Is here.. simply beautiful.. no make up just her eyes was filled with dark black kajal n eyelied filled with maskara.. N She is our Priya.. n then hitler started arguing with him..

Priya : Oyee.. motu.. kyo pareshan kar raha hain subeh subeh.. dena mera laptop mujhe dance moves sikhne hain.. dekh agar tune laptop nai dia to tere sath nai aaungi me.. motu motu motu.. dena mera laptop.. ;)

N then that man facing her with laptop in his hands.. n he was moving forward to Priya.. n then he kept his hands on her mouth to shut her.. n then he said :: my lovely darling.. first of all stop caliing me motu.. I'm not motu ok!.. n then u can see our dear golu molu pyara sa motu Ram is here.. Ram gave Priya her laptop n then he said..

Ram :: Priya darling yeh kya hain yaar.. kaha ho tum? Tumhara koi ata pata nai hain! Me tumhe pichle 1 ghante se call kar raha hu baby.. but yaha aake dekha to madam apne vichitra bharatnatyam me busy hain.. baby I was missing u badly.. Priya stoped him in center n said

Priya :: Hi motu.. kese ho tum? Aaree aate hi jhadne lag gae mujhe.. n by the way me tumhe motu islie bolti hu kyo ki u know how I m.. ki koi mere sath flirt kare to mujhe bilkul hi achha nai lagta .. islie me uske sath argue nai karti balki usko me usi ke andaz me jawab deti hu!Tum mujhe darling.. baby.. jaanu.. blah blah blah yeh jo sab bolte hona to mujhe bilkul achha nai lagta .. but me tumhe sad bhi nai kar sakti.. b'coz u r my bestie na.. to me tumhe tumhare hi andaz me answer karti hu..  Samjhe motu.. :D .. n sorry about ki I was not answering ur call.. coz my mobile is in silent.. n mujhe koi disturb kare jab me dance sikhu to achha nai lagta .. islie.. n Oye motu hello.. tum joy eh vichitra bharatnatyam bolte ho na vo meri zindagi hain.. mujhe bachpan se dance sikhna tha..par me study me busy ho gai thi..jab ab mujhe moka mila hain to kyo jaane du me.. n haan aage se bola na esa to motu teri kheriyat nai.. samjhe.. :x

 

Ram :: Jaanu.. me ekdum fit n fine hu.. jesa hu tumhare samne hu .. n ohh to badla logi ab mujhse tum haan!!..?? Huuhh.. leave it.. N OK OK maaf kardo mujhe ki tumhare dance ko bhala bura bola.. n tumhari aadat kab jaegi mobile ko har vaqt silent me kyo rakhti ho? Kya koi tumhare Boy-friend ka call aata hain kya jo tumhe pareshan karta hain? Aare me hi to tumhe call karta hain n tumhari family.. aur kon.. n jab dance sikh rahi hoti ho to tab silent pe rakha karo na.. pure din kyo rakhti ho?

Priya gave him a hitler look n said :: motu .. haan badla to lungi hi.. n it's ok.. age se esa mat bolna.. n motu vo sab baatain chodo but u can leave me now! Coz me let ho rahi hu.. mujhe school jaana hain.. bachhe intazaar kar rahe honge.. n aage se me dhyan rakhungi ki mobile silent pen a rakhu.. n mera koi BF nai hain.. n hota bhi to me tumhe batati bhi nai.. :P .. n ab mujhe school jaane ki izazat mil sakti hain mr.motu?

Ram smiled n said :: haan baba haan.. Tumhari baat samajh gaya me..n aage se tumhara mobile silent me nai hona chahiye..  n tum school jaa hi rahi ho to me tumhe drop kardu? B'coz me jogging se sidha tumhare yaha aaya hu tumse milne.. Priya suddenly looked at him with shocked look..

Priya :: tumne kabse jogging start kardi? Ajj suraj kaha se nikla hain jo The Ram Kapoor aka motu jogging pe nikla vo bhi zindagi me pehli baar itni jaldi uthke.. kya baat hain.. :D :D

Ram :: please darling.. stop it now yaar.. haan kardi hain start mene jogging .. ajse hi ki hain.. n mene islie start ki hain kyo ki tumhe patina jo hain mujhe islie.. ;)

Priya :: to phir puri zindagi tum jogging hi karte rehna.. kyo ki me to rahi tumhare hath aane se.. to.. ab yeh sab chodo do jogging vogging...n dekha phirse start ho gae flirt karne me.. kya yaar kabhi to mature behave karo.. n mujhe chalo school drop kardo tum.. baad me noon me lunch ke lie milenge hum.. tumhari office me.. n mujhe Siddhant(Ram's step brother) se bhi milna hain..

Ram :: me ese haar nai manne waala! Me koshish jaari rakhunga.. n haan chalo  tumhe drop kar deta hu.. n noon me kab free hogi tum?

Priya :: me tumhe call kar dungi.. ki kab milenge.. abhi ke lie tum maa papa se baat karo me fresh hokar aati hu..

Ram :: (Ram looked at her with naughtiness on his face) kya me chal sakta hu tumhare sath fresh hone.. :D :D ;)

Priya smiled n pushed him from her room n Ram ko bahar nikal dia room n then locked her room n go to the washroom .. n Ram smiled n go to meet her parents..

 

TO BE COUNTINED .. Wirte ur comments.. n tell me hows it? Bad or Nice.. both comments r allowed..

THANK YOU – Sona!

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by sahana747


Karthik is real or step ?.Good. Join the band(its).


Karthik real brother.. ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
so they are buddies
yaar baar baar motu mat use karo plz
ram tho kuch zyada hi flirty hain 
plz cont

n update the title with pgno n part
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by ramsakshiroxxx


so they are buddies
yaar baar baar motu mat use karo plz
ram tho kuch zyada hi flirty hain 
plz cont

n update the title with pgno n part

Well kuch updates tak hi motu waala hoga.. baad me nai.. ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
Awww... That was a cute update.. Plzz continue soon...
Posted: 11 years ago
very nice !!!!! plz update soon!!!!!! ðŸ˜Š ðŸ˜Š ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
wowooow i really likedd the intro seems really diffrent... wowoow i m loving cherecters too... now moving to read next...
Posted: 11 years ago
awww i m liking this update so much... yaar par plz Motu ko Golu me badli kar do... aur Ram se thoda kam flirt karvao... would like to see Kiddesh Ram then this... but over all very nice update loved it a lot... even enjoyed the most ... waiting for next do update soon waiting for ur next update do soon... n if u can PM me    ...

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