LAST WISH!! OS.(Page 2)

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Posted: 7 years ago
Rajat chaahe kitna bhi acch ho.. Lekin woh Ram kabhi nahi bansaktha..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Cry        Ouch          Cry
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aree yaar rula diya na...
you wrote very well...but pls priya ko rajat ke saath mat jhodo na
pls ab raya ko ek kar do na
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Posted: 7 years ago
i wrote this to jjust show RAM's emotions!!1 RAjat koo ghusana pada to showw RK's emotional dialogues !!! EVEN i hatee RAJJOO most!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
yest wen ram said to care of priya pihu if something happens to him in ambulance dat was so touching n teary
it reminded me of ur OS
thank god RAM is safe
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Posted: 7 years ago
ahay haye khuda kiye aisa na likhu kahi cvs na parh lein and assume karein acha this is what they want?
had u shown that  ram would have said but u wanted me to mvoe on so it is apt i want u to move on after my death and oh y oh y so mahan that priya is all innocent and rajat is the ever great!! 
i like ur writing but not the story Confused
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Posted: 7 years ago
yaar ise se batter koi tarika nahi mila hamain marne ka Rajat & Priya no never batter RaYa die together n give custody of Peehu to nuts... she will take care of her ... but i loved knyadaan one... part awesome babay... gud attempt
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