LAST WISH!! OS.

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Posted: 2012-12-04T23:40:58Z
Hello Everyone!! I am once again here with my One shot!!! I know after reading this u guys will be thinking to kill me !! I don't want this to happen but this is just a thought came to my mind last night while I was trying to sleep :) Didn't wanted to write something like this!! but phir bhi likh dyy 


                                                          LAST WishCry



Doctor came out side and said: sorry but humeh nhi lagta hum unhey bacha payenge! abhii patient hosh mei hain n shayad un k pas kum time reh gaya hai.. aap mei sey PRiya kon hai??


Priya(at the tym it is hard for her to utter anything) : me me meI HOON PRIYA.


Doctor: patient aap sey milna chahte hain.


priya in  shock stage was moving towards ICU ,it was hard fr her to walk as the life from her legs is going out any how she reach the room and opens the door! Find love of her life lying there n a pale smile on his face.


Ram( with a smile) : aao priya!! behtho mere saath!!


priya moves near the bed n sits on the stool beside bed n hold Rams hand  while sobbing:Ram kuch nhi hoga aap ko humare saath kismat eseyy nhi karsakhti Peehu k liyee jeena hoga aap ko. aap ko peehuu ki custodyy chaiyehh naa le lijiyee butt please mujheyy or aap ki rockstar ko eseyy na chor kr jaiyeh marr jayengee hum.mei jaanti hun aap naraz hain mujh seyy party me mei ney aap k saath jagra kiya or rajat sir k dance bhi kiiya.. Please RAm!!Cry


RAm still with the smile on his face: Priya yaad hai tumeh  jub tum bemaar thi or tum neyy kuchh wishes bataii thi mujhey  or mei ne wo saarii poorii bhii ki including ur lastt wish balkeyyy humarii last wishh humarii PEEHU!!


Priya: HAn RAm wo meii kese bhool sakhthi hun.meri zindagi k sub seyy haseen pal thy wo!1 usii dohran tou mujheyy aap seyy pyaar ka ehsaas hua .

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RAm: aaj jub mei bemaar hun kia tum merii ek last wish poori karogi?


PRIYA in tears: Ram aap esey kyune keh raheyy hain.. haan i will fulfill ur wishh butt yehh lastt nhi hogii.. abhi tou aap ko humarii beti k saath jeena hai.


RAm cutting her in b/w: Rajat sey shaadi kr lou n move on in your life after me!


PRIYA in shock: Ram !! how can u say this.. me neyy aap koo partyy mei bhi kaha tha esa kuch nhi hai humareyy beech!! mei sirf or sirf aap seyy pyaar krtii hun aap k siwaa kisi k bareyyy  me esa kabhi soch bhi nhi sakhti mei! PLz Ram itnii badiii saza na dijiyee mujhey meri galti ki..plz RAM ... crying so much!!


RAm: priya priya control yourself!! I know tumm srf mujh sey pyaar krtii hooor sirf meri ho pr please jaan try to understand tumm akelii nhii jee pao gi yehan or rajat tum seyy pyaar bhi krta hai wo boht khushh rakhey ga tumeh!!


PRIYA: NHi Ram.. I can't move on.. me aap ki thi aap ki hun or aap ki ban hy marna chahti hun..


RAm: priya this is my lastt wish.. please apne liyee na sahii merii beti k liye!! mei nhi chatha k wo apni poori zindagi apne papa ko miss karey!! HR pal useyyy us k papa ki kamii mehsoos ho.. BOht dukh hoga mujheyy priyaa... MEI nhi chahta jub humari Peehu ki shaadi ho tou us ka KANIYADAAn krne k liye us k papa na ho!! Jub k yeh mera khuwaab tha apni betii ka KANIYADAAn me apne haath seyy karoon pr shahyad kismat ko yeh manzoor nhi priya!! (tears rolled his eyes) kaashh priyaa hum dono ek saath humarii betii ko ruksat kr paatey!! or phir jub wo chali jati tou ekk saath useyy yaad kr k rotey!! humesha jo hum chatey hainn wo kyune nhi hota!! :(


PRIYA: RAm esi baateinn kyune kr rahey hain aap kia kahoon gi me PEEHU ko??



RAM: promise me priya! k tum RAjat k saath aageyy badho gi apni zindagi mei or peehuu ko  bhii help karo gi mujhey bhoolne me taakey wo rajat ko apn papa maan ley!!

n takes her hand n place a wet kiss on her hand!!MY last kiss for MRS PRIYA RAM KAPOOR!! I LOVE n I AM SORRY!! mei tumeh dukh dena chahta tha prr hr baaar mujheyy hyy takleef hui!


RAm rings the bell beside him n ask Nurse to send MR RAJAT KAPUR inside!!


After some time RAJAT come in!!

RAM: rajat yr me ne socha tha k yeh humarii lastt deal hogii ek saath!! magrr dekhoo kismat phirr mujheyy tumarey samne le aayi!! yr mere saath ek our deal karega ab shayad yeh last hogi??


RAjAT: Haan RAm bol na!!!! Tu aaj bhi meraa poorana dost hyy hai!! mei jaanta hun inn kuch dino mei tum ghussa thy tabhi yeh sub keh raheyy thy!!


RAm leaving priya's hand tries to fold his lifeless hands in front of RAJAT !!

RAJAT: RAm yeh kia kr rha hai tu!! GOLI tujheyy pett meii lagi hai lagta haii asr dimaag pr hua hai!! common buddy we are friendS!


RAm: MEre baad shaadi kr ley priya sey!!! 


RAJAt all blankly looks at priya whoo was in tears was not having anythng to say!! 


RAJAT: yeh kia keh rha hai tu RAm?? Priyaa srf teri hai wo tum seyy pyaar krtii hai.. maanta hun k me neyy pooja seyy pyaar krne kii galti kii haii magrr ab mei useyy sudharna chahta hun..me tum dono ko peehu k saath dekhna chahta hun!!


RAm getting excited: NHII ho sakhta esaaa nhii hai mere pas itnaaa waqt!!! please yr promise me!! k Tum mere baad merii beti orr priyaa ka khiyaal rakho gey!! meri betii koo kabhiii us k papa kii yaad nhi aaneyy dou gey!!! PRIYA ko humesha kush rakho ge!! mei neyy touu poorii zindagi seyy srff dukh hyy diye!! kabhii khushh nhi kr paya iseyy srff apnii ego or ghusse ki waja sey!!


PRIYA in b/w: RAm eseyy kyune keh rahey hain aap !! aap k saath bitaya hua hrr pall merii zindagi ka sub sey haseen pal haii !!

RAjat: NO brother!! mei esa nhi kr sakhta!! PEEHu or priya pr srf tera haqq hai!!


Ram: yrr RAJAT try to understand meii priyaa or PEEHU ka kal thaa tumeh un kaa AAJ or future ban na ahi... me future mei kahine nhi hunga un k saath!! plzz merii akhrii request!!

And takes priya n rajats hand n keeps priyas hand in RAJATAs :( (( NHIII YEHHH KABHII NHI HO!!))

RAm: iss janam mei tou tumehh somph rha hun isseyy.. aagleyy janaam meii durr rehnaa iss seyy n smiles!!!

 N A BLANK LINE APPEARS ON oscilloscope!!!

RAMMM!!!!!!!!!!

THE end :(Cry

SORRy guyss!!! i know eggs n tomatoes are ready forr me!!! but this was jst my second attempt to write something... all comments are welcome!!CryCry n please bare with my grammatical n spelling mistakes!!


Edited by farwasneha - 2012-12-05T03:33:28Z
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Posted: 2012-12-04T23:47:11Z
hahaha...ufff...yar  sabki satak gyi h...mere pas isse bttr option h serial band kar doLOL
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Posted: 2012-12-04T23:49:14Z
Originally posted by veena23


hahaha...ufff...yar  sabki satak gyi h...mere pas isse bttr option h serial band kar doLOL

 BUSS yrr kia kareinnn EKTA neyy kisii layk chora hy nhi humehh!!!!! yehh sochne prrr majboorr krr diyaaa... kalll poorii RAAAT neend nhi aayiii RAYA k barey me soch soch kr Cry

 socha yehh spost kr k thodaa dimaag halka kiya jaye Wink
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Posted: 2012-12-04T23:51:10Z
dont want this to happen in real balh...
good attempt
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Posted: 2012-12-04T23:57:31Z
this is called jhale pe namak chidna Angry
k i read it yeh kuch zyaada hi emotional tha yaar i neva want this happen in da serial isse better hota
both raya will die the same way they showed in barfi n end the show
sorry but i cant see ram priya with some one else but i must say u r truly brilliant writer dat kanyaadan dialogues wer awesum Cry
Edited by ramsakshiroxxx - 2012-12-05T00:04:35Z
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Posted: 2012-12-05T00:12:18Z
Originally posted by ramsakshiroxxx


this is called jhale pe namak chidna Angry
k i read it yeh kuch zyaada hi emotional tha yaar i neva want this happen in da serial isse better hota
both raya will die the same way they showed in barfi n end the show
sorry but i cant see ram priya with some one else but i must say u r truly brilliant writer dat kanyaadan dialogues wer awesum Cry

 EVEn i dont want this to happen!!!!!  I so hatee tht RAJJO( RAJAT) !!!! iss seyy acha i will like the serial to end!! Cry  but RAJJO PRIYAA NEVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 2012-12-05T00:14:05Z
w Cry Angry Hum sab ko ek hi shot mein maar dala.Good Bye.
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Posted: 2012-12-05T07:01:16Z
Writing was gud, but zara bachke rahiyo, kahin agar Ekta maiyya ko para chal gaya toh woh use copy na kar le aur agar aisa koi intentions na bhi ho phur bhi mann bana liya aur aisa hi kar diya to bari garbarr ho jayegi yaar
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