main aur meri tanhayee part 5 pg6 15/2 - Page 5

Posted: 11 years ago
snehal reallly u have megic in ur hand OMG... the pain of Peehu for not knowing anything abt her papa... the guilte of Priya who kills her 1000 time a day when she saw Peehu without her father ... omg... was so thouchy so emotinal... & what an end Ram moved on ... Priya left again alone n shattrred... kill my heart... u peened down Peehu's emotions so welll i just loved it it was really awesome... out of the world... do connt soon waiting for next...
Posted: 11 years ago
part 5
 

Apke saath ki kami har pal mujhme ek adhoorapan hone ka ehsaas dilate rehti hai ram peehu anjane mein hi sahi aaj apne papa se mili iss baat ki khusi hui aur dukh bhi ke who ape samne aap ki beti ki tarah nahi aa sakti

Pehle use apne mall mein meri shop tak pohonchaya ,phir who jab bathroom mein lock ho gayi apne use bahar nikala aura b who apki itni pakki dost ho gayi hai ke mujhe aakar apke bare mein sab batati hai aur main use ye bhi nahi keh sakti ki main janti hoon uske GOLU UNCLE ko ,

Aaj apko itne saalon baad dekha chehre par thodi udasi thi lekin ankhon ki masoomiyat wohi thi , in 5 saalon mein bhi aapki ankhon mein wahi pyaar dekh payi apne dekha nahi lekin maine aapko dekha jab aap peehu ko invites dene aaye.

Peehu ko apne godi mein bithakar apne jab usasae batein ki meri ankhen bhar aayi pata nahi sab dhoondhla hi gaya dono golu mere samne the mann kiya bass aake apne aap ko apke bahon mein jhok doon par rok liya pata nahi kyun smane aane ki himmat nahi hui par apki anhein dekhar mere liye unme basi udasi dekhkar lagta hai aap aaj bhi usi mod pe hai jahan hum alag hue the '.maine kahin apko akele chod kar galti nahi ki aap age nahi badhe ho 'main apko sab bata dungi ke main jinda hoon peehu apki beti hai

 

(after party )

 

Socha tha aaj jinda hone ki khusi apse batungi par aaj party mein mujhe ane jinda hone par afsos hi hua Ayesha ram kapoor sunai nahi diya kuch uske aage kab main ghar pohonchi pata nahi

Peehu ko aapki haton mein dekh kar khush thi lekin shayad kismat ko meri khusi manjoor na ho ram aap age badh chuke hai meri behen ke saath aura b main wapis nahi aa sakti shayad kabhi nahi

 

Khushiyon ki lehrein bass chu ke chali jati hai, kinare ki ass mein aage badho toh naav hi toot jati hai..

Besahara si ghoomti rehti hoon pani ke bhanwar mein jindagi khushiyon ki dastak dekar laut jati hai'

Ab jinda hoon bhi ke nahi mallom nahi bas saanse chal rahi hai aur dhadkane khoyi hai ..

 

Ek naya din nayi shuruvat peehu ke liye ab sirf peehu ke liye jiungi main

 

 

 

Poora mahina apke liye kuch na likh payi ram peehu hospital mein thi mujhe bohot darr lag raha tha aur hamesha ki tarah apne hi mujhe hausla diya ke mujhe use sambhalne ke liye khudko strng karna hoga paanch saal baad apki avaaj waise hi hai mujhe dilasa dene wali, apne hone ka wajood samjhane wali

Peehu ab thik hai

 

Jindagi kaise mod leti hai main akeli ho kar bhi akeli nahi reh sakti cady ye pagal ladki ghar chod ke bhag gayi hai usne mujhe aur sir ko baat karte wakt suna anjaan ki kahani unki apni hai Bade acche lagte hai unki kahani hai '..

 

Mumbai wapis aa rahi hoon main ek arsa ho gaya iss jagah ko dekhe hue aur yahan ki bearish aate hi mera welcome bearish ne kiya aur iss sheher ne phir se aapi yaad dila di peehu use bilkul aapki tarah hi bearish pasand nahi hai

Apko toh bearish se pyaar karna sihka diya peehu ko bhi ho jayega jab uske life mein koi aayega

Offo 5saal ki beti hai uski shaadi ke bare mein sochna sirf priya ram kapoor hi kar sakti hai PRIYA RAM KAPOOR? Hoon bhi ya nahi who hak kisi aur ka hai jitney jaldi ho sake iss sheher se dur jana hai yahan ki har baat mein harr hawa mein aapka ehsaas hai.

 

 

Edited by snehalparab - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
pichla yaad dila diya
abhi toh bahut kuch ho gaya, wanted to know what she feels when she met Ram.
update soon, u r very back
Posted: 11 years ago
back after a long time...
yummy update ❤️
jaldi karo...waiting for next part please😛
Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful .. The poetic touch in ff toh was just mindblowing.. Har words main jaise dard bhara ho.. Perfect.. Thank for updating, waiting for the next..
Posted: 11 years ago
u made me very emotional, Priya ka dard main samajh sakti hoon, uska dard me mehsoos kar paa rahi hoon, Ram ke bina Priya bohot adhuri hain
Posted: 11 years ago
ojh snehal where were u lost yaar a single short update that is also after ages but loved that u updated its have all the pain & love of RaYa's relationship i still remebered one one worl u wrote in this this is the megic ur words do on me its just mind blowing yaar how u make all of us just go mad with ur wrriting its awesome... too gud plz do update next one soon now waiting to read...
Posted: 11 years ago
Edited by Alya1991 - 11 years ago

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