RaYa OS- Jab Tak Hai Jaan

Posted: 2012-11-18T00:02:51Z

Well it's the confrontation I am looking forward between Ram and Priya without any other member present while they speak their hearts out and finally reunite!


So it being a weekend and no RaYa I thought of penning down an OS on them.Embarrassed


HugHope you all Enjoy!Hug



She stood their with the aarti thali in her hand, waiting for the moon make its appereance. She remembered her first KarvaChauth with Ram. How he had come home yelling at her for taking his Chennai flight tickets out of his bag, and when he learnt about the flight crash, he was thankful to her and had broken her fast fulfilling his duty of a husband. It had been 5 years since her fast was broken by him and not his picture. 5 KarvaChauth that she celebrated in Dubai, instead of asking for his long life all she ever asked God was to take her back to her Ram! And that day had finally arrived, yet she was as lonely with him as she was without him.


Clad in a Gujrati style lovely red and green saree, she walked upto the terrace to see if the moon was out. She did all the rituals and picked up the sieve to look at the moon and later picked up his photo to see him. But as she opened her eyes, Ram stood there in front of her, while she stood their in amazement. He was present in front of her, in blood and flesh.


Ram: "5 saal tumne ye vrat mera photo dekhkar toda hai. Aaj main khud tumhara vrat todunga."  Pulling her closer, grasping her shoulders, making her shudder from her thoughts, he continued,


"Puja karlo Priya. Chaand bhi bahar nikla hai. Aur tumhe bhook bhi lagi hogi."


She finished all the rituals, and he made her drink her water, thus breaking her fast. She was ecstatic. She had finally got what she wanted. She remembered someone telling her,


Priya: "Aaj koi bhi mannat mango, wo ek din poori zaroor hoti hai."


And then she remembered his marriage to Ayesha. And she questioned him,


Priya: "Aap yahan kya kar rahe hai Mr.Kapoor? Aapko to aapke biwi ke paas hona chahiye na. Ayesha ke paas mera matlab. Aap yaha mera vrat kyun tod rahe hai?" she questioned him all hurt from inside.


Ram had enough, he had come here to tell her that he was ready to let go the past, start afresh with their daughter, and here she was taunting him.


Ram: "Haan, lekin wo kya hain na maine socha ki tum bechaari garib kaise apna vrat todogi to maine socha ki aakhri baar main khol deta hoon. Aur waise bhi kaha pata tum wapas Dubai na chali jaao. To bas apni pehli biwi pa ehsaan jata raha hoon. Aur chinta mat karo, ehsaan chukaane ka mauka zaroor doonga."


Priya: "Main jaanti thi. Aapki zindagi main ab main hoon hi kaha na? Aap to aage badh chuke hai." She said with tears rolling down her cheeks. She couldn't bear the fact that he had married her sister. She knew there was a reason and she wanted to know about it.


Priya: "Ayesha ke paas jaane se pehle kya aap mere ek sawaal ka jawaab denge?"


Ram: "Haan. Bolo."


Priya: "Aapne shaadi kyun ki?"


Ram: "Priya tumhe sach main lagta hai ki maine aapni zarooraton ko poora karne ke liye Ayesha se shaadi ki? Lekin tum to misunderstandings ki dukaan to ho na. Tumhe kaise misunderstanding nahi ho sakti?"


Priya: "To phir aapne shaadi kyun ki?"


Ram: "Tumhari izzat bachane ke liye."


Priya: "Yeh kya keh rahe hai?"


He looked away from her, and responded,


Ram: "Haan Priya, tumhare jaane ke baad Ayesha pregnant thi, Sid ne use dhoka diya tha. Aur phir uski izzat bachane ke liye main use shaadi karnewaala tha, par maine Sid ko kaise bhi manakar uske dastakat liye aur Ayesha ki shaadi Sid se huyi hai, mujhse nahi. Pichle 5 saalon se wo mera naam leka ghumti hai, par mujhe koi farak nahi pada kyunki meri shaadi ho chuki thi, mere Priya se."


Priya was shell shocked to hear this. Ram had actually got her sister married to Sid and he was always married to her. She fumed over him.


Priya: "To aapne mujhe yeh pehle kyun nahi bataya? Main samajh baithi ki aap aage badh gaye honge. Aur phir wo kya tha, Ayesha ko apni biwi mane ka? Mere saamne?"


Ram smirked knowing that Priya was indeed jealous today and very possessive about him even after 6 years of marriage.


Ram: "Dekho Priya please mujhe maaf kardo. Maine jo bhi kiya, Ayesha ko apni patni maana, wo sirf tumhare andar ka mere liya pyaar jagane ke liye tha. Main bas apni poorani Priya ko wapas paana chahta tha. Jo sirf meri ho. Jo sirf mujhse pyaar karti ho. Aur kuch nahi. Main tumse pyaar karta hoon Priya. Sirf tumse."


"Please mujhe maaf kardo, pichle itne dinon main maine jo tumhe takleef, dukh aur dar diya uske liye. Main bahut naaraz tha tumpar. Bas aur koi maksat tha nahi mera. Aur tum meri har baat kyun maan rahi thi? Kyun nahi wapas chilla kar mujhe jawab diya?"


Priya: "Kyunki apne jo kiya wo isliye kyunki aap mujhpar gussa the, aap mujhse itna pyaar karte hai ki aap ye baat maan hi nahi paaye ki maine aapko dhoka diya. Ki maine aapke jazbaation ke saath khilwad ki. Saari meri galti thi."


A rush of tears rolled down her cheek, making the long lasted hurt, anger, and loneliness wash away. Ram slowly cupped her face, and gently wiped her tears away. While wiping her tears away, his eyes were equally moist. She soon made her way into his arms. With that she hugged him tight! He took her lips in a kiss and she responded with equal passion!


 They part apart gasping for air. With that she gently placed her palm against his cheek,


Priya: "Main bhi aapse bahut pyaar karti hoon. Bahut pyaar. Yeh 5 saal kaise kaante hai sirf main hi jaanti hoon. Mr. Kapoor, aaj main agar zinda hoon to sirf Pihu ke karan, roz aapko yaad karti jab Pihu aapki tarah karti thi, roz aloo ke parathe."  With that both burst in peels of laughter.


Before turning way he asked her,


Ram: "Kab tak mujhse pyaar karti rahogi?"


Priya: "Jab tak hai jaan Ram."


Priya: "Ab chale kya neeche. Mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai."


Ram: "To mujhe kaunsi kam bhook lagi hai. Maine bhi to kuch nahi khaya hai."


Priya: "Kya matlab aapka?"


He shyly confessed that even he had fasted for her today. She made him drink water and fed him sweet.


As both were about to leave, he made her wait. He picked up the red powder kept in her aarti thali, and applied in her maang, claiming her as his forever.


She was amazed but really happy. In true sense she had got her husband back. With that he pecked her forehead gently, wrapping his arm around her waist, both were about to walk when Ram tells her to come with him to Kapoor mansion with him.


Priya: "Haan wo to theek hai, Ram, par Pihu ka kya?"


Ram: "Kya kaha tumne? Ram…. Tumhe pata hai, main taras gaya tha tumhare muh se mera naam sunne ke liye.Phir se ek baar kaho na."


Priya: "Ram."


 Ram: "Aur rahi baat Pihu ki to wo aaj ke liye Choti use sambhaal lengi."


Priya: "Par Ram, aajtak Pihu mere siwa akeli nahi rahi hai. Mujhe ye idea itna pasand nahi aaya"


Ram: "Comeon Priya. Ek raat ka to sawaal hai. Kal hum dono use wapas lene aayenge na. Please."


She smiled knowing he would do the necessary arrangements to make Pihu comfortable and fulfilling his promise to get his daughter in the morning.


With that both left for Kapoor mansion after having dinner and convincing Pihu to stay with her Natasha Bua.





So guys do you want me to pen down an Epilogue for this? Do leave your precious comments! They really mean a lot to me!


So guys how were it? I hope I have lived up to the standards of all the RaYa fans!


Positive criticism is always welcome!Big smile


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Love And Luck Always!




Edited by -Mayu- - 2012-11-18T00:35:18Z
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Posted: 2012-11-18T01:18:43Z

... Great
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Posted: 2012-11-18T01:23:10Z
Wow.. Lovely I was just longing for Raya to talk in the way u have written their dialogues Very simple and touching and matured way they are. I love if u continue it and thank u for the pm
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Posted: 2012-11-18T01:25:53Z
Hey dear, fantastic..

How I wish something like this happened in the show, guess it's too early to ask for it. Bt atleast I wld want Priya to knw that Ram did fast for her. I wld literally jump with joy the day wen Ram wld fill her maang..Day Dreaming Thank you so much for making the weekend bearable!!!Hug
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Posted: 2012-11-18T01:30:19Z
Nice update...thanks for pm
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Posted: 2012-11-18T01:40:55Z
awesome yaar Clap
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Posted: 2012-11-18T01:42:57Z
very touching awesome ff Thumbs Up
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Posted: 2012-11-18T07:10:22Z
really wish u were actually writing our BALH!! kash kash aisa hota..Day Dreaming. hmm... awsome dear... continue like this..SmileClapBig smile
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