hello guys thanks a lot for all ur sweetest comments .
well i hope i do write good! am not sure how good is it. i hope u all like the story .
i guess the on going present and past track is confusing. i just thought of telling the story this way , the main story is the past not the present. everything that happened in past made them fall in love happens in present. i could not manage it well. 😭
i was thinking to end this story as soon as possible. the reason of slow updating is am a little busy . please excuse me. now please help me guys. tell me what will be good in the story. y ram married ayesha n how they got separate is in the past . it is a small plot of sid, ayesha and shipra.. so tel me soon i will post the next update soon i receive ur comments.
Past and present parallel track !
or
first past n then present !
please let me know ur POV so that i can improvise my story ! please help guys
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