The last para..Brilliant ..Am always trying to write a love scene without succsses !
This content was originally posted by: PinkjaliOhh shit.!! This update was the mother of all suspense.. The actual suspense was just smashing.. And poor rajat ab toh wo jail main chakki pissing and pissing... This is the best suspense thriller story i have ever read.. The end So soon..? Can't u continue it..? Reading ur ff has become a part of my routine.. I will badly miss ur ff. Come back really soon with a bang dear.. And u r an awesome suspense writter dnt forget it..
This content was originally posted by: love4rayaWah anjy kya likha hai..Suspense akhir tak bana raha..Awsum.. Yar BALH nai to atleast start writing for CID dey really need good writers.. Kya acting ki sabne.. Rajjo going jail..and in jail chakki pissing & pissing hehe.. Oye write a new one soon..
This content was originally posted by: gangaprakash38wow... very good.. twist pe twist. liked it man... good planning tha
This content was originally posted by: leena04anjy... *socha tha kya aur kya ho gaya... kya ho gaya...* OMG Rajat is the main culprit but kya twist tha yaar maza aa gaya sachi... aur sath sath RaYa k baby k aane ki gud new bhi... really blessed to read such awesome SS hope u will bring some new too very soon... awesome writer...
This content was originally posted by: vishnuhHa ha loved the plot..
1)Tum jahan sochna bandh karte hon wahan se meri soch shuru hoti hain...An amitabh fan?
2)Tumhe coma me rehne ki acting karni hai...jiske liye tumhe muh band rakhna hoga...jo ki next to impossible hai...kya karun mai tumhara...hey bhagwan..😡...The best of the piece..)The last para..Brilliant ..Am always trying to write a love scene without succsses !
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