FF: priya and ram reunion - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
friends this is my version of story
after the last episode
priya will tear custody papers and send pihu to ram house
ram is happy that pihu is back to him after 5 yrs
pihu will ask ram
papa mama ney mujhey bola ki ap mujhey aur mama ko bohut pyar kartey hey aur apney sirf mujhey ghar par kyu lekhar aya mamaa hamare saath kyu nahi aya
ram will hug pihu but cannot explain her anythingn
priya will be crying on the bed so badly
in this way 2-3 days are over
sudhir will come and talk to priya
priya aur kitna dhin aise rothey rahungi
papa main pihu key bina nahi reh nahi saktha par mai mr.kapoor ke saath laad nahi saktha mujhey pihu aur mr.kapoor dono important hey main dono ke bina nahi reh saktha
main mr.kapoor ko itna pyar kartha hu ki main agle panch saal main pihu ko mr.kapoor ke paas rehney dhungi par mujhey patha hey kabhi na kabhi mr.kapoor ka ghusa thanda ho jayega aur ek dhin woh zaroor mujhey samjengey
pihu will watch some horror movie and go and catch mr,kapoor very tightly
ram will say kya hua beta
pihu will say papa mamaa ney kaha ki jab bhi mama ko dar lagta woh apko pakad lethi kyunki mamaa ko patha hey jab bhi woh apko pagad legi ap mamaa ko kuch bhi honey nahi dhengey
bade ache lagte hain song will be background music



ram will be very pleased to hear this

ram will talk to himself mujhey laga agar main pihu ko apney paas rakungi toh mujhey priya ka yaad nahi ayenga lekhin main galat tha priya pihu ke maan kitna acha taswir merey barey mey banaya jabi main pihu ko dhekungi mujhey priya ka yaad aur bhi zyada arey abh main kya karu

next day night  priya will be on the road waiting for an auto it will raining very badly ram will be passing by that area ram notices priya
priya will be completely wet with that run ram cannot control his pain seeing priya in the rain and insists her that he will drop her not as a husband but he will give her lift
priya denies it so ram leaves in front of priya but he parks his car at some distance and will be watching priya  and after half an hour she will get auto she sneezes so badly and reaches priya new flat
ram after some time calls sharma nivas and asks about priya and sudhir sharma tells him that priya left this house and is staying in a separate flat
ram will be not feeling gud about this and he will be feeling that some thing is bad with priya he takes address from sudhir sharma and when sudhir sharma asks him about priya address he will tell that he want priya sign on pihu custody
ram reaches priya's new flat and he rings the bell but no one opens the door
he will banging the door no response
then from lock hole he will see
priya will be lying on the floor
ram takes master key from the society and opens the door
he will see priya lying on the floor
he will catch priya and rubs his hand on her face and tell priya uto priya open ur eyes

precap: ram takes priya in his shoulders and makes her ly on the bed and call  a doctor





Edited by sangeethagupta - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
at first welcome to the Balh forum this  story . seems interesting please continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
welcome to the forum!!
nice begining.. continue soon
Posted: 11 years ago
very nice please continue
Posted: 11 years ago
Love it yaar,plz cntinue.U know actually i want priya to send peehu to KM aftr Ram denied custody then it wil b interesting to watch hw he tackles her.She wil keep reminding him to do things 4 her the way mom did nd also make him realize that though he thinks her a dhokebaz she always rememberd him evry breath nd also made him familiar to peehu by drawing an imaginary picture of her dad in her mind.
Posted: 11 years ago
V gd prediction.. Loved it.
Posted: 11 years ago
nice start..plz continue soon:)
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome... story would like to read abt it more do connt soon... waiting for ur PM in next update...

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