Pyar Ka Dard Hain.. New Os

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Posted: 2012-10-05T07:13:11Z
the court gave its words... 
Peehu's custody was permitted...
Ram won the war with priya...

The next day Ram will come and  will snatch peehu from priya... Ram was having more fun , making priya to loose, 
he has now achived the success he wanted ...Tommorrow morning will be his most  pleasant mornings ,he will get back his daughter his peehu...

Next Morning...
It was the worst night yesterday for priya... She hadnt closed her eyelids for even a sec... She cant stop herself from watching peehu..may be for the last time...

After that night ,, when the bright sun rays entered priya's room.. their was no life left in her... She didnt want such morning to arrive in her life...

A bell rang, once , twice ,thrice...
Sudhir Opened the door... Ram ??''

Ram hurriedly made his way to that old room ...to Priya's room... His eyes avoided the view Of priya's painfull face, the way she firmly took peehu in her grip , restricting ram to snach her , Ram gave no attention... He Forcefully took the sleeping peehu out of priya's hand and put her in his tight hug... 

PEEEHUUU !!!!!!!???  a sream came to Ram's ears when he was taking peehu towards the door of sharma villa...

Peeehuuu ... A cry came to Ram's ears when he opened  the dooor...

Peehhhuuuhhuuu.. a sniffing beg came to Ram's ears when He took peehu completely out of Sharma Villa...

Ram didnt look behind...

Ram came in front of the lift ...
forcefully his mind went to a memory  he didnt want to...
he reminds the first day they both were in this lift .. Priya in  a red dress .. her hair tied ,but a part of it falling on her face..The uncomfort which they were having...

He didnt want to move down on that lift were there is any story of Ram -priya togetherness...

His eyes went to the stairs... he was about to move down ...
His mind visited older thoughts...

He laughed in his mind , his eyes cried in his mind...
The first day they were on this Stairs, with ram a thaila in hand, and she was teasing on him... Ram gave a deep breath...

when he came down with peehu...
His Phone rang... The name Didnt flash...
He holded it... Plz Mr.Kapoor...

He didnt let it to complete ... he cut the call...
Suddenly his mind went to their conversations...Their first Phone Fight... And Priya's words '' hello Ji...'' when dadi was around her...

His lips gave a small smile...
Suddenly... His Phone Bips...

He recieved the msg...

Mr.Kapooor .. mein priya ..plz peehu ko mujhse dur mat le jaaie ...M sorry...

His mind  smiled and cried ...With the first chat  
 ''itne bade ho gaye ho... abhi taq aapna naam nahin pata??''

Driver Gaari Jaaldi chaalaoo...

His eyes went on thw kala khatta shop beside the two field class were they often had their kala khatta... the  stairs of two field ...from where priya came down to reach ram...

Going a few distance away...

His Eyes fell on that ganesh Mandir,,, where he prayed that..
meri priya ko koi dukh mat dena...

He closed his eyes...

Peehu hugged him more  tightly...

Ram's mind visited the dubai scenes...

In the bookshop , when peehu's mom hugged her...
The Way Peehu's mom cried on the phone call...
And Lastly the way she cried  today.. For peehu...

Suddenly it starts to Rain...
Ram put his hand out and felt it... Few drops fell on his face.. And A drop go round down his eyes...he Closed his eyes and few more drops rolled down...
Ram hugged peehu more tightly...

Ram put his hand inside his pocket and Took out the custody papers... He made it into pieces and then threw them out of the car...

Driver gaari ghumaao...

the rain was lowened now...

priya just came out in the garrage place and was about to take an auto...
when a car came in back direction... Priyaa????

Priya turned to that voice, she came running and started pitting the windows with her hands...
Ram opened the door...    

Priya havent yet started any word when Ram handed peehu to priya...Priya hold peehu in a big and deep hug, kissing her here ,there, in hr cheeks,, In her forehead...
 her eyes were crying hugeee...She was not Looking At Ram...whos mind was burning in a cold surroundinggg...
His  mind was breaking...He was breathing higher...

He said it in  a soft voice ... wo aate waqt... Law Papaers khain gi..gir gaya...

Priya looked at Ram on a sudden instinct... She whispered a hugee , cryfull , wavy thaaank U...

Ram in a moment turning his back and then aain turning to priya...

Thik Aise hi... Thik aise hi ...Paanch saal se meine  gale laga na chaha... Thik aise hiii... Kamse kam tum jaanti to thi... Ki peehuko tum firse dekh paaogi... Ek na ekdin zaroor gale milogi usse... Par mujhe .. Mujhe to pata hi nahin tha.. ki dubara hum kabhi aamne saamne honge...
Accha hota agar mein , tumhe  dekhte hi maar jaata...
Achha hota priya...

PRIYA: aiiiSa mat kahie Ram..

Ram : Nahin suno... tab tumhe yeh to malum hota ki aapne aap ko kho dena kya hota hain... No no...M wrong ...Tumne to jaan buchke chhoda mujhe ... mein maar jaau to koi fark nahin parega... 

Priya: aisa mat kahie na...

Ram : Pata hain peehu ko meine kyun wapas kia... M not that selfish like you... Tum agar mujhse meri beti ko dur rakh sakti ho... To mein kyun nahin kar sakta ... Haasil bhi karlia... But nahin kar paya , kyunki tumhaara chahera saamne aagaya...mein un saari yado ko bhulana chahata tha.. Jisme tumho ...Par jaha bhi dekhu..tum hi tum ho... Tumhaari yade khatam karne ke liye   to mujhe khudko hi khatam karna parega priya...

priya : aisa mat kaho na Ram...

Ram : firse jit gayi na tum...Firse hara diya na tumne mujhe... Aaaj to yeh prove hohi gaya ki mein tumse zyada pyaar karta hun... Kamse kaam Tuumhaare barein mein  sochta to huuunn,,,tumne to kabhi mere baare mein socha hi nahiiin... sochha hi naahiiin...Ki ekbbaaar aake gale millu... To mera gussa thanda ho jaayegaaa...Mein samaj paaunga ki ,,tumhaari bhi shayad koi majboori thi...mein haar chuka hu priya  mein haar chuka ..Hu .. ( Shouts : and its just all because of u!!!!!???) 
when suddenly with that shout peehu opened her eyes 

Kaise kaar sakti ho tum mere saath aisaaa...

Peehu : Of ho !! aaplog jhagra kyun kar rahe ho ????(Peehu looked at priya ) Mamma ???( looked at Ram ) Papaa ???????

a sudden smile came on both the lost lips. 

Ram brought his palms  to peehu's cheeks... said to peehu...

I love u... (He looked at priya ) Dnt go anywhere now...Ur my Life  ..

and thus the story ended with a sweet family hug


Baade accheee Lagte Hainnn

 

 
 



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Posted: 2012-10-05T07:18:49Z
Originally posted by shilly


nice 1 dear!!

Thanks a lot
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Posted: 2012-10-05T07:31:18Z
Lovely OS ananya! Clap
So want this to happen in the show..!
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Posted: 2012-10-05T08:19:12Z
Very Sweet Ananya... keep it up... waiting for such beautiful os n ff...
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Posted: 2012-10-05T08:22:54Z
i liked ur OS topic very much.. Will drop my comment after reading.
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Posted: 2012-10-05T08:39:15Z
Nice OS!!!!... Thanks...
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Posted: 2012-10-05T08:46:05Z
so cute and sweetBig smile
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Posted: 2012-10-05T09:08:58Z
Wow, kitna cute.. Love it.. Clap
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