Frowning U Obsessive Tormentor ADULT (HOLD Pg 13) - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by cutesukirti1987


Wow amazing update!
So Piya is Abhay's officially!
I already thought d language to be Italian.
This is really nice n diff story n thnx 4 sharing ur wierd yet amazing dream with us.


Thanks kirti. Embarrassed
Yep Piya is Abhay's officially. Big smile
How you already know it was iIalian? You know that language? Wink
Aww thanks for the compliment. Embarrassed
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by trishnawaliya


oye tujhe italian ati hai... i dont belive... hw is dis happening... sach bata ya u r serching 4 italian words but its nt possible so soon... amazing...

nw do d nxt update till dan i serch 4 stake to kill dis abhay- d devil...


Nope I don't know italian. I searched it from google translation and then I add those words. LOL I don't even know in my dream which language they were speaking, it was total new for me. But I remember a little part of those words, I did google search and found it was italian language and so I added my own words of italino. Wink I hope you get the point? Tongue

haha u wanna search stake to kill Abhay? Oh no poor Abhay. Cry
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by dreamyjennice


Piya marked as abhay ...wow...whats he gonna do now...prepare for hybrids


haha not so soon hybrids haan. Wink It's an adult ff, you can expect juicy things from Abhay. LOL
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by MS-meghasharma


amazing update.so pia has been marked 4 abhay.interesting twist .waitin 4 ur further updates.


Thanks megha. Embarrassed Next update will take some time, as I don't remember what happens next, so update will not be made soon for next chapter. Confused
Posted: 9 years ago
Dopy,m telling u..tu saare ffs chod de n continue dis one.Its so dark n intense.How cum u remembered doz italic phrases?applause..The place is quite weird n ofcus inhuman.The king has volumes of authority in his voice.Poor piya..though shez of abhay's..but still she is now a part of da evil world.Desperate to know how abhay tortures pia in his own way.Dont want love to come so soon in btwn dem..plz write dis piece 1st..
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by darkcocoa_renu


Dopy,m telling u..tu saare ffs chod de n continue dis one.Its so dark n intense.How cum u remembered doz italic phrases?applause..The place is quite weird n ofcus inhuman.The king has volumes of authority in his voice.Poor piya..though shez of abhay's..but still she is now a part of da evil world.Desperate to know how abhay tortures pia in his own way.Dont want love to come so soon in btwn dem..plz write dis piece 1st..


haha that's the only reason why I updated so much continuously, kyunki I don't want to forget what I saw in dream. But aage ki part I don't remember that well. I've to re-think what I saw in my dream. Honestly I don't remember those phrases at all. Just a one-two words I remembered and did google search to find what kind of words they were and whatever italian words I used is not what I saw in my dream. They are my own phrases as I found with google translation. LOL Actual dialogues I don't remember at all. Only the reactions, pain and expressions all these thing I remember very well but dialogues are created by me with help of google search and translation. Embarrassed

Don't worry love is not going to happen so soon, in my dream love never happened between them. It was all about torture, pain and sacrifices, but no love. Cry
Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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abhay z just a smokingly hot evil.I like it.Poor pia..shez growing so much panicky to her evil vicinity n ofcus ABHAY RAICHAND(raichand e hai na?).His proximity is surely disturbing her n he knows it!first session..cough..dimag me ahem ahem thoughts aa rahe hai..lol..i know passion wala toh its not gonna happen 4 atleast now..lemme guess..umm..he'll either torture her physically by violent means or vl try to rape her..haha..stupid predictions!cntinue soon:-)Edited by darkcocoa_renu - 9 years ago

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