IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25 - Page 4

oh man!! I love that you wrote this!! I am slightly nervous!!! 

The last moment was heartbreaking and beautiful. Well written, looking forward to your next update.

You reel us in slowly but surely and leave us panting for more...

Beautiful ..Cute part...I loved it specially their emotions...:)

Brilliant start...Loved every bit of it.

very nice! This is another nuance to khushi -arnav bond?!?

Great Start... am hooked...needless to say that. I am quite intrigued to know how it continues. hope you update this one quickly..

I know that Im not going to be able to be patient,,,Im waiting to see what you have in store for us very impatiently

This was so sweet. I am assuming the deep dark secrets that Arnav is hiding actually involve Khushi, and aren't the ones of his parent's past. Maybe, I don't know. But I loved this. Arnav as a father is actually very heartwarming to read since that is so different from his character. And since napstermonsterji has written it it is obviously amazing. Continue soon napstrmonsterji. :)

I loved it and I'm hooked to it..