IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25 - Page 2

friggin fantastic. 

I loved this and well done with writing out ASR

update soon

Oh wow. That was beautiful. Little Khushi already has Arnav wrapped around her fingers, doesn't she? You need to continue this definitely! :) 

OMG...that is all i am capable of right now...EEEKKK!!! Edited by Nmyra - 11 years ago

A fab start to an equally fab story and I am just so happy that there will be a second part as well.

Omg, this is so interesting! Please continue!

You had me at the first paragraph.  You conveyrd such a sense of joy, dancing light, laughter and beauty.  All the characteristics of Khushi - happinesss.

simply brilliant..loved it;

Loved the language, the details, the grimy pink shoes. Loved it all. Will look out for your update.