that was beautiful!
and i loved the way you described Arnav's emotions. I mean you'd expect him to go all bitch ass on khushi and blame her, but this was such a mature outlook. and for some reason understandable. i mean yeaa i'm a sucker for happy ending, but it would be so outa place if they got married abhi. I mean even if you see it from a human's point of view in general and not just fictional characters, would u marry somebody who's mother loved your father and that lead to nasty events? nope it wasn't khushi's fault in any sense, but just the fact you have2 make peace with it is very hard.
and i f**king adore Khushi! she's my rockstar, the final words, "its over" are still ringing in my head. i mean both are trying to do something for the other, Khushi wants him to be happy knowing he probably won't be without her, and he doesn't wanna hurt her so he doesn't tell her to leave her own mother for his sake. that's the beauty of these 2...
i absolutely loved the OS! it was amazing!! i really wanna see how they'd progress in their lives after this situation, how they would try moving on in their own lives, starting from scratch. i wish you would continue it, but leaving it here makes sense too, cus both the characters got the closure. though i'm kinda sad that these 2 are sad. humph
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