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Hey all,
My second attempt at writing something. Its a bit long. I hope you all will like it.
Ram confronts Priya and tells her that he is not convinced with her
explanation and he will be taking Pihu with him to mumbai and that she is not welcome in KM anymore. However after Priya pleads with him a lot and he also deliberates over the situation, he realises that tearing Pihu away from her mom won't be fair to Pihu. He doesn't want Pihu to go thru the trauma of adjusting to new surroundings without Priya by her side. So he lets Priya accompany them however warns her that she will be in KM only as Pihu's mom and not as Ram's wife. Ram, Priya and Pihu take the next flight to mumbai and reach KM
KM:
KK is at the door to welcome Pihu and Priya. Saumya is also with her. Ayesha
is standing in a corner clearly not happy with the happenings. After KK does
the arti she welcomes Priya inside. Ram takes Pihu inside. She is feeling shy
seeing so many people around and all of them fussing over her. She hides behind Ram.
Just then Kush comes over.
Kush: Papa... and gives a hug to Ram.
Ram also hugs him back. Ram kneels down to his level and says: Beta apne
mujhse kaha tha na mein aapke liye eisa koi gift le aaun jo sirf Dubai me milta
ho to ye dekho mein kise le aaya. she is your sister Pihu. Pihu, he is your
brother Kush.
Both Pihu and Kush are excited to meet each other.
Saumya: Chalo didi mein apko apke kamre tak le jaati hoon.
They start walking towards RaYa room, just as they are about to climb the
steps, Ram stops them.
Ram: Saumya don't take her to my room. woh mera aur Priya ka kamra tha aur
hamesha rahega.. Saumya, KK give him a confused look.
Ram: Ye jo wapis aaye hai woh sirf Pihu ki ma hai, meri biwi Priya nahi hai. ise
guest room mein le jao. Bansi Kaka, inke liye guest room khulwa do.
Priya's eyes well up hearing this. Ayesha on the other hand is glad.
Ram: Chalo Pihu mein aapko aap ka kamra dikhata hoon. Meine use bilkul ek
princess ke kamre ki tarah sajaya hai.
Pihu: Mein alag kamre mein nahi rahungi, mein mamma ke saath hi rahungi. She goes and hides behind Priya holding her dress really tight.
Ram is about to say something, when KK stops him.
KK: Jaane do Ram use Priya ke bina rehne ki aadat nahi hai, give her some
time to adjust to these new surroundings.
Ram agrees and goes to RaYa room.
Priya goes to the guest room and settles down. After a while, KK and Saumya
come to her room.
Saumya: Didi aaj na humne aap ki aane ki khusi mein ek party rakhi hai to aap
bhi tayar ho jayiye.
Priya: Saumya lekin mere pas koi acche saree nahi hai. aur party shyam ko hai
to shop karne ke liye bhi waqt nahi hai.
KK: Priya why are u worrying so much. Go to your room and pickup a saree from your old collection. Ram ne tumhara sab saman bohot
acche se sambhal ke rakha hai.
Saumya: Haan aur maa woh bhi to saree hai na, jo Ram Bhappa Banglore se
leke aaye the. pata hai didi, Ram Bhappa ek baar jab Banglore gaye the to
hamare liye shop karte samay unhe ye saree bohot pasand aayi, to unhone
woh tumhare liye kharid li, aur hamse kaha ke agar Priya hoti to use ye saree
bohot pasand aati and she would look so beautiful in it. So I just bought it for
her, I know she won't be able to wear it but mere man ko accha lagega.
Priya's eyes welled up again listening to Saumya and she realised the depth of
Ram's love for her, and she started feeling guilty for her actions all over again
and tears started flowing from her eyes.
KK came near her and consoled her: Don't worry Priya, every thing will be fine.
You will have to give him some time. He is really angry right now, but I am sure
he will come around and accept you. He loves u very much and won't be able
to stay away from u for long.
Priya just nodded. She decided to go to RaYa room and check with Ram if she
can borrow one of her old sarees.
As she started climbing the stairs, she remembered all the beautiful memories
that she had of the time the 2 of them spent in their room. She pushed open
the door and called out: Mr Kapoor..
Ram was in the changing room and so didn't hear her call him. Priya didn't get
any response and so assumed that Ram must not be in the room. so she
stepped in. Once inside, her eyes started to well up again. She saw their
picture that was taken at the Mah-Guj border still up on the wall. Nothing had
changed in the room. It was exactly as it was 5yrs ago. She went near the bed.
She remembered herself running her fingers thru Ram's hair. She remebered
herself sleeping in Ram's arms and listening to his heart beat. She just couldn't control her tears any more and she started sobbing. She sat down on the floor
next to the bed and burried her head in her hands and started crying. Ram
heard her crying and came out of the changing room. He couldn't see her
break down like this. He wanted to take her in his arms and console her and
wanted to tell her that lets start everything afresh. But just as he was about to
take a step further, he saw Pihu come into the room and remembered that Priya
had not only wronged him but also his beautiful daughter, so he stepped back.
Pihu went directly to Priya said: mamma aap kyun ro rahe ho. kya hua? just then
she spots the Picture of Ram and Priya on the wall. She says: Mamma yeh kitna
accha photo hai papa ka aur aapka. Papa kitne acche lag rahe hai isme.
Hearing this Priya starts feeling even more empty and bad and starts crying
even more.
Pihu: Mamma aap rooa mat na, aap bhi bohot acche lag rahe ho. infact aap to is
world ki sabse khubsoorat mamma ho. Papa aap she acche nahi lag rahe hai.
(she thinks that Priya is upset because Pihu said her papa is looking better
than her mom).
This brings a slight smile to Priya and Ram's lips. Ram remebers his first
encounter with Pihu when she had described Priya as the most beautiful mom
in the world.
Pihu makes Priya sit on the bed. Priya takes Pihu in her arms and starts crying
again. Pihu pulls herself away and then she spots Ram standing in the
doorway of the changing room. She goes to him and drags him and makes
him sit on the bed next to Priya.
Pihu: Papa dekho na mamma kitna ro rahi hai. meine use gale bhi lagaya but she
is not stopping. Aap try karo na. Mein jab roti huun to mamma mujhe gale lagati
hai aur mein chup ho jati huun. lekin mein mamma se choti hun na is liye woh
shayad chup nahi ho rahi hai, par aap to bade ho, to aap use chup karao.
Ram just looks at Priya. Pihu takes his hand and rests it on Priya shoulder and
then asks him to hold her.
Pihu: aare yeh kya papa mamma ke aason bhi to pocho na.
Ram doesn't have a choice but to follow Pihu's instructions. He starts wiping
away Priya's tears. Priya looks at ram and they share an eyelock.
Pihu then notices the earings that Ram has kept next to Priya's photo on the
side table. She takes them and says: wow yeh kitne khobsoorat hai. Mama
aapke hai? lekin na yeh jaroor papa ki choice hogi hai na papa?
Ram and Priya are still looking at each other and hardly hear what Pihu said.
Pihu: Papa.. hai na yeh aapki choice. Pata hai papa, mamma ki choice na ekdum
boring hai. isliye yeh to aap ne laya hoga.
Ram : ha beta yeh meri hi choice hai. aur woh aaj bhi wahi hai par tumhari
mamma ki choice badal gayi hai.
Pihu: papa mein yeh earrings chachi ko dikhaki aaon?
Ram: han jao beta.
In a hurry Pihu doesn't notice Priya's foot and trips and is about to fall.
Both Ram and Priya grab her in order to prevent her fall. In this attempt,
Ram's hand lands on Priya's hand. Priya shivers at his touch. Ram noticeses
that and is happy that his touch still has a magical effect on her. He
withdraws his hand. Priya helps Pihu on her feet and checks if she is ok.
Pihu: mein thik hun mamma, and she runs out of the door.
Ram to gets up and starts going out of the room
Priya: Mr Kapoor.. Saumya ne bataya ki aaj party hai aur mere pas, koi acchi
saree nahi hai, kya mein mere purani saree's mese ek le sakti hun please?
Ram nodded his head and went out.
Priya went to the changing room and opened her closet. She was shocked to
see all her stuff intact and so very well organised. It sure had Ram's signature
on it as everything was arranged so nicely as she could never organise her things so well, she had always been very clumsy.
She started browsing thru her sarees and noticed a nice blue one. She
immediately thought that this must be the one that Saumya was talking about.
It was absolutely stunning, after all it was Ram's choice so it had to be
beautiful. She pulled it out and started admiring it. But she dared not wear that
one, as she wasn't sure how Ram would react. She started to put it back. Just
then Ram came back to the changing room and noticed the saree in her hand.
Ram: You can wear that one if you like.
Priya: thankyou Mr Kapoor.. its.. She was about to say "very beautiful" but
before she could complete her sentenced Ram had left the room.
Priya decided to get ready there itself as all her accessories were also in there.
She got ready and then went to the dressing table(in the changing room) to
put on her bindi. She purposely put it tedhi as she was hoping that Ram would
notice it and would definitely come and adjust it. She wanted to feel his touch
again. Ram came back to his room, saw the changing room door closed and
for some reason assumed that Priya must have taken the saree and gone back
to the guest bedroom to change. so he went towards the changing room and
here inside the changing room, Priya was ready and she was heading out. She
looked back at herself in the mirror and walked forward. And at the same time
Ram opened the door, so she unknowingly walked staright into Ram's open
arms. As she bumped against him, he instinctively held her in his arms. Before
they knew it, they were holding eachother and their hands started moving up
eachother's back. Both of them pressed their bodies against each other and
tightened their grip.
Ram(thinking to himself): I have longed for this so much, and finally after 5
years, I have her exactly where she belongs--In my arms.
Priya(thinking to herself): I missed these strong arms so much and finally after
5 years, I am exactly where I belong-- In his arms.
Neither one of them wanted to let the other person go. They were so lost in
each other that they didn't even notice, Pihu calling "mamma..mamma..." as
she ran up the stairs. Finally when she reached the bedroom door and yelled
"Mamma", did Ram and Priya come back to reality. Both of them instantly
withdrew from the embrace and looked at the door. Pihu came in.
Pihu: Mamma, dekho chachi ne mere liye 2 dress laye hain. Tumhein kaunsi
pasand hein? Mein kaunsi Pehnu?
Priya: Dono hi bahut pretty hai beta koi bhi pehnlo.
Pihu was not satisfied with the ans. so she went up to Ram and asked him the
same question.
Ram: ye pehnlo, mujhe yeh color pasand hai. Pihu was happy as it was her
favorite color too.
Pihu: Papa apki aur meri dress ki choice bhi same same.
Priya looked at the father daughter enjoy each other's company and decided to
head downstrairs.
Priya: Pihu mein niche ja rahi hoon, tum jaldi se niche aa jana so that I can get
you ready.
She took a few steps when
Pihu: Mamma ruko.
Priya turned back. Pihu asked Ram to pick her up and walk towards Priya.
Pihu: Yeh mamma bhi na itni badi ho gayi hai phir bhi bindi tedhi hi lagati hai.
While in Ram's arms, Pihu attempted to correct Priya's bindi. Ram was so
mesmerised by Priya's looks, he wanted to correct the bindi himself, but Pihu
did it for him. She then climbed down from his arms and tugged on Priya's
arms to take her downstairs. While walking out of the door. Priya againlooked
back at Ram with eyes filled with love. Ram too wanted to stop Priya and take
both the beautiful ladies in his life in his arms and hold them forever. Pihu
dragged Priya downstairs. Ram went back and sat on the bed still thinking of
the beautiful moment that he shared with Priya, when they were in each other's
arms.
Here Priya reached the guest room and sat herself down on the bed and she
too was thinking of the same moment.
Ram(thinking to himself): I wish the moment would have lasted forever and
ever.
Priya(thinking to himself): I wish the moment would have lasted forever and
ever.
index:
part 1: Page 1
part 2: Page 3
part 3: Page 4
part 4: Page 6
part 5: Page 7
part 6: Page 10
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