FF: kush ka Gift. continued in thread 2-link given - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
Hey people.. this is an FF my friend is writing.. I'm just sharing this with you coz i love it.. So this is not by me...

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3127422?pn=34

  FF: kush ka Gift.change title to I neva missed u..

Posted in thread 2...
Sorry for all the mess... My sis got confused... sorry...
Heres the link to thread 2...
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3143867
Continue here after part 17...





FF: KUSH KA GIFT... EXCLUSIVELY FROM DUBAI...

PART 1


Yeh separation yeh hide n seek is just giving me ... ah I cant write it ... guess karlo!!!!

Toh meine kya socha ki ek FF  likhu about

"kush's gift exclusively from dubai!!!"

 

 "socho ki premier mein ram ' priya mil toh jate hain par ram pehle yeh manta nahi ki peehu uski beti hain!!!! Scene starts at ram's hotel room!!!"

 

Ram :: priya is that really u...

Priya : haan ram mein zinda hoon ...

Ram ::: wait wait this cant be...no this cant be!!!!

Priya :: ram mein hi hoon plz believe me !!!!

Ram :: toh tum wapis kyun nahi ayi!!!

Priya :: mein ayi thi ram!!! Par jake dekha ki ... waha app meri ...and closed her eyes!!! Aur ram raina ... jiske saath mein dubai ayi thi uss waqt wo mere saath thi!!  She lost her mother in that accident and her mother asked me to send her back safely to her friend's place !!!! thats rajat sir!!!!Meine  toh socha tha ki raina ko bhi hum log adopt kar lenge we wanted a baby ... but jab udhar dekha ki sab papa maa bhai app sab ne muje mara hua... meine ishika ka bat soon liya tha !!! socha ki wo sach hi keh rahi hain!!!

Ram: peehu kaun hain!!!

Priya :: humari beti ram app ki khoon hain... app ki parchai hain!!! App ki traha khana khati hain!! app ke tarah chalti hain..aur toh aur khartte!!! Ram stopped her and said "tum janti thi tum maa banne wali ho tab bhi tum wapis nahi aayi kyun!!!"

Peehu :: mamma muje darr lag raha hain mamma and came and hide herself behind priya!!!

Priya kneeled down to peehu and was about to say peehu ...ram said "priya answer mee..."

Priya stood up and said "app mujpar sakh kar rehe hain!!"

Ram looked aside ...

Priya :: muje dubai mein aa kar pata chala ki i was pregnant wd ur baby!!! Ram looked up!!! Priya said looking at him yes mr.kapoor wd ur baby,,... meine app ko phone kiya tha!!! Par ... app ne nahi uthaya !!! ghar mein phone kiya toh app dinner ke liye gaya huye the!!! Phir phone kiya toh kisi lady ko complement de rehe the...ram said "kya !!!" priya "uski earings ke bade mein..."

Phir se phone kiya toh app ne disconnect kar diya!!! Toh mein kya karti app toh meri phone uthaya nahi kya karu!!! Kya karu!!!and sat on the bed...peehu ran to her and hugged her and said "mamma mamma mat royo naa..plz...app kehte hoo na god sab theek kar denge... god sab theek kar denge!!!"

Priya hugged her back and said "ram iske kismaat mein sayed sirf iski maa ki hi payar likhi hui hain mein app ko disturb nahi karungi aur nahi yeh app ke samne ayegi!!! Mein jaise thi waise hi rehungi!!! Par app ka bahut bada ahesaan rehega meri aur meri bacchii ke upar agar app meri dukan mein aa kar book signing event mein participate kare!!!"

Ram :: kya !!! mein book signing event...

Priya :: app anjaan hain toh !!! bade acche lagte hain ki writer!!!

Ram :: no ... mera friend hain...

Priya folded her hands and said "plz mr.kapoor insaniat ke naate ..help me!!! Nahi toh isse lekar..."

Peehu took out a rose from the vase and said " uncle yeh app ke liye plz mamma ka help kar do naa!!!nahi toh mamma rona bandh nahi karegi wd a broad cute smile on her face she said!!!"

Ram took the flower and said "ok priya apna number deti jao agar mera friend ko koi problem naa ho toh mein aayunga ..."

Priya wrote her number and kept on the table and said "chalo peehu its late kal school hain naa..."

Peehu holding priya's hand turned while leaving to ram and waved him bye and good nite!!!!

 

Ram stood there perplexed!!!!

 

He called anjaan and said "yaar ek problem ho gayi hain!!! Meine jo dubai wali lady k bare mein bola tha naa... usko kisi tarah mera contact number mil gyaa and u know i said u she is in crisis now she is taking me as anjaan and wants me to sign the book kya karu!!! ... dekh baad mein mere pe ilzaam maat dalna!!!!"

Ram disconnected the phone and looked at his watch and called priya!!!

Priya picked up the phone !!!

Ram :: kal 2 baje ke baad mein aa jayunga app ke shop mein aur yeh sirf mein insaniat ke nate kar raha hoon aur koi waja nahi !!! and before priya could say n e thing he disconnected the phone!!!

 

Back in hotel and priya's residence!!! Both of them cant sleep !!! both of them are in deep thoughts of each other!!!

 

The whole night went sleepless for both ...

 

Priya woke up peehu but she failed to get up on tym for school as priya was late last night!!! She took peehu direct to the shop and meet cady and she said "anjaan aaj aa raha hain 2 baje ke baad..."

Cady "really kisne convince kiya saree se convince ho gaya !!!"

Priya managed to smile and said "nahi re peehu ke liye aayega!!!"

Cady "ok then u should thank my friend!!!"

Priya "kon!!"

Cady "rahul jisne anjan ke bade mein details diya tha!!!"

Priya "ok toh use bhi bula le !!"

Cady "no yaa!!! Net chat pe thanks bolna padega he lives in india!!mumbai!!"

Priya "ok bol dungi!!"

Priya and cady was busy wd the arrangements for the book signing event!!!"

Cady put closed sign on the counter and said "chalo abhi rahul ayega online!!!"she dragged priya and made her sat by her side!!!

Cady connected the call and said to rahul "rahul aunty tumse thank you kehna chahti hain!!!"

Rahul : "baad mein baat karta hoon and he guarded the webcam and cady heard mom mom no.. no...

Cady was taken aback as neha said "hi!! Beta!!! How r u!!!"

Cady hesitatingly sai "hi aunty!!" and looked at priya and said "help naa..rahul ki mom!!! Plz bol do kuch bhi bacha loo..."

Neha "hello beta app ke bare mein kuch batayon!!! U know rahul !!!"

Cady "no aunty actually my aunty wanted to talk wd him thank you bolne k liye unhe to video chat aati nahi ...isi liye...

Neha "thank you kyun bhai"

Cady : "aunty se hi pooch lijiye and dragged priya infront of the monitor..."

Priya's hair was blocking the view at first cady made her look!!!! And both remained stunned !!!!!!!

Neha :: priya !!!! tum!!!!

Priya said "cady jaa peehu ko le kar... peehu peehu come here!!! Peehu came and intentionally she took her in front of the monitor so that neha can she her!!! Priya said "mamma ka ek kam karogi!!!"

Peehu "kya mamma!!"

Priya :: "wo leaflets bahar distribute kardo aur iss(turning her to the monitor ) aunty ko hello keh do!!!

Peehu smiled and said "hello!!! Aunty how r u!!!"

Neha sat back on her bed with a hawww expression and said "rahul leave me alone plz...rahul didn't ...she shouted just get our and dragged him out of the room and locked the door and came back to the monitor!!

Neha :: priya is that u !!!

Priya : "unfortunately yes neha!! Aur rahul kitna bada ho gaya hain!!!"

Neha :: peehu ram ki beti!!! She had tears in her eyes !!!

Priya : "chalo tumne toh man liya ki peehu mr.kapoo ki beti hain par unhone nahi mana...

Neha :: kya !! yeh ho nah sakta priya ram tum pe biswas nahi karega!!!

Priya : aisa hi hua hain!! Aur batao waha sab kaise hain maa papa... aur maa unhe mr.kapoor ne ...

Neha :: bahut kuch change ho chukka hain idhar priya ... bal ki sab kuch ..ram ka ek beta hain tum janti hoo...

Priya got a shock and said "ram ne shaadi!!"

Neha : 'no usne adopt kiya tha!! Jab kush 2 din ka tha ram use lekar aya tha kisi ne use anaath asraam ke bahar rakh ke !!! aur tab se usi k sahare jee raha hain!!! Par peehu kapoor khandan ki nishaani hain tum dono ki payar ki nishaani hain aur woh pura ram jaisi dikhti hain!!!priya !! wapis aa jao!!!! She said in one breath!!!"

Priya :: sab kuch unn jaisi hain tablets bhi leti hain aur kharatte bhi marti hain!!!

Neha : kya kharatte !!! bhi!!!

Priya "neha papa kaise hain!!! Unse baat karwa payogi !!! i miss him!!!"

Neha apna number do i take him in conference wd u...

Priya gave her the number and neha first called her and then took sudheer in conference and said "uncle i have a surprise for you !!!" sudheer "kya beta !!"

Priya :: "papa!!"

Sudheer "kaun!!!...priya !!!!"

Priya :: "haan papa mein priya !!!!"

Sudher "beta neha yeh kaisi mazak hain!!!"

Neha "nahi uncle priya se meri abhi abhi video chat mein... bahut badi baat hain mein aati hoo aap ko bata ti hoon par do important baat suniye ek priya zinda hain...aur dubai mein hain!!! Kaise hain nahi pata par abhi kuch poochiye maat muje bahut sare logo ko yeh baaat batani hain priya ko aur kapoor khandan ke nishaani ko wapis lana hain!!"

Sudheer "beta mein natin ya nati kiska nana hua hoon!!"

Priya got shocked !!!! she said "papa app!!"

Sudheer "tera report ...jail ka... abhi bhi mere pass hain!!! Tu jab kho gayi thi tab wo report tere maa aur mere haath mein aa chukka tha!!"

Priya "papa mr.kapoor ko !!"

Sudheer "nahi sirf hum dono ko pata hain!!! Ram uss waqt tere gaam mein aise duba tha ki pooch maat ... par mein abhi k abhi use baata raha hon!!!!"

Priya saw peehu coming back to the shop!!!

Priya "papa disconnect maat kijiye lijiye peehu se baat kijiye aap ki natin!!!!"

Priya kneeled down and said "beta namestein karo tumhare nanu!!!"

Peehu :: namestein nanu app kaise hoo...

Sudheer cant control his tears and said "mein theek hoon beta apne maa ko phone do!!"

Peehu said "mamma and gave her the phone !!!

Priya :: papa r u ok !!! cady was taken aback by hearing papa from priya!!!!

Sudheer :: beta ram dubai mein hain mein usko tera nu...priya stopped him and said "mein  mil chuki hoon unn se unhone peehu ko appna khoon manne se inkar kar diya hain indirectly...

Sudheer ::mein use phone karta hoon!!! And b4 priya could say ne thing sudheer disconnected and neha said "sorry priya i also want uncle to call ram and disconnected!!!"

Priya saw cady looking at her wd many questions !!!!! priya smiled !!

Cady :: what !!!

Priya ::: mein kabhi anjaan ki biwi hua karti thi !!! and she saw peehu eating paratha!!! And said "plz cady aur kuch nahi plz abhi iss sab ke liya bahut choti hain tuh!! Aur peehu bhi!!!"

She started arranging the shop and removed the closed tag and enter rajat!!!!

Edited by RaYaKapoor - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
datz nairitaz creation...she is d awsm writer...
Posted: 11 years ago
yes it is.. i love this one from her..
Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update...interesting one too...👏👏👏
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice start yaar...continue sooon :D
Posted: 11 years ago
I have been reading this one on facebook. She writes really well.
Posted: 11 years ago
Yess read it once on FB...Very nice yaar...Plzz continue...
Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks guys... Will post sum parts today...
Posted: 11 years ago
PART 2

 

Priya got surprised seeing rajat !!!

Rajat :: good after noon M/s Sharma

Priya greeting him back said "sir mein sham tak app ko rent de dungi !!!

Rajat :: I was here for something else can we talk in private for a while if you dnt mind !!!

Priya :: sir what private !!!

Rajat :: plz I request and insist!!!!

Priya :: cady shop dekhna aur peehu ko bhi mein aati hoon…

Rajat took her to a coffee shop and priya said hesitatingly "sir app ko agar shaop wapis chahiye!!!

Rajat said in between "no no m.s Sharma I just …I just …I just want to say sorry for my behavior wd u…. may be u r true that I m not happy wd my life but…priya stood up and said "sir plz … muje app se yeh sab batiene nahi sunna hain sir !!! I will re pay ur rent by …. Rajat stopped her and said m/s Sharma I have read the book!!!!

 Priya " please sir muje app se kuch baat nahi karni aur waise bhi mein mr.anjaan k liye wait kar rahi hoon!!!!'

Rajat lost his temper now and said  "mein tab se app se mafi mange jaa raha hoon and app kuch aur hi duniya mein hain!!! Why m/s priya Sharma!!!"

Priya "sir I m little disturbed plz excuse me!!! And left for her shop ..when she entered the shop she found ram already there!!!!

She saw…..

Ram was talking with peehu …..

Ram "toh app ko kya khana pasand hain!!!"

Peehu 'sab kuch jo mamma deti hain!!! Par aloo ka paratha chocolate cakes chicken bahut pasand hain!!!! Par mamma deti nahi hain!!!"

Priya "peehu get down from there and go ..sit there pointing to a chair…"

Peehu was not at all a disobedient girl!!!! She obeyed her mother !!!!!

Priya "thank you mr.kapoor for coming sayed mein abhi yeh dukaan!!! Bacha lungi!!!"

Cady "ok bye mera yehaan kya kaam app ne itni badi baat muje app se nahi baat karni!!!"

Priya "cady plz calm down we talk later na baba!!!"

Cady "ok!! But promise me u will not leave me alone!!"

Priya smilingly said "are mein kaha jane wali hoon no baba I m not going n e where …humesha tere saath rahungi aur tere bina tere junior star ka kya hoga!!! "

Cady smiled and hugged her ….. priya hugged her back and said "haan jab tuh sasuraal chali jayegi tab toh mein aa nahi payungi tere saath!!!"

Cady "ufff take a chill pill..hain na junior star…."

Ram :: "sorry priya but I cant appear infront of n e one…

Priya "oh!!! Its ok!! But !!! sorry may I know y !!!"

Ram : 'dekho I m a business person aur ram kapoor ko sabhi jante hain issme agar mein samne aa gaya toh logo ka… u know what I mean!!!"

Priya looked down and said "yes I know!!! Ok mr.kapoor thank you for coming!!! Cady shop close kar de!! Nahi toh mere mein sab gussa uttarenge "the readers" !!! Thank you mr.kapoor!!!

Cady "yeh app ne theek nahi kiya uncle!!"

Ram was already tortured emotionally by priya and cady he said ::: ok ok I will but no media you have to look on it!!

Cady said it in excitement "dnt worry when I m here!!!"

Cady "chal junior star announcement karni hain!!!"

Cady and peehu left in excitement!!!!!!

 

Priya and ram alone in the shop !!!! a very ackward silence prevailed between them!!!

Priya broke the silence and said " plz baithiye app..and showed him a chair…!!!"

Ram sat there and priya started updating the stocks…..

Ram "so business shik gayi!!"

Priya smiled and said "nahi I m horrible… wo cady help kar deti hain !! aur peehu kabhi kabhi kuch ideas de deti hain!!! Phir bhi mr.kapoor it is enough for me and peehu!!!"

Ram "peehu nice name!! …"

Priya "thanks!!!"

Ram: but y Sharma????

Priya :: coz I m sharma!!!

Ram :: but u were Sharma but u are kapoor now!!!!

Priya :: I were!! Not now and …they saw cady and peehu priya said "plz mr.kapoor !!! baad mein jo bhi bolna hain boliye!!!"

Peehu ran to priya and said "mamma mamma announcement ho gaya !!!! sab ayenge abhi!! Uncle app sab ke samne ayoo ge toh!!!"

Ram "haan peehu!!!"

 

At the mentioned time the customers came in and ram signed book for them …. And within a moment … she collected enough money to pay the rent and even more than that!!!

 

One hour from then ……

Priya asked cady to put the closed sign !! coz she didn't want excess exposure of ram!! As anjaan!!!

Cady "are dekho bahut log aa rehe hain!!rehne do naa…. Plz….."

Priya "cady!!!! Do what I say!!!!"

Cady with a sad and irritated face followed priya's instruction and within next half an hour priya cleared the shop …

Ram came to her and said "so collected the rent!!"

Priya smiling said "yes and thank to you!!!"

Ram "kitne hue!!"

Priya "have to count!!!"

Ram "really horrendous in business..if u dnt mind may I !!"

Priya " yes sure " and gave the cash to him!!

Ram without counting it put it in his coat's pocket and said "cady peehu will u excuse us for 5 mins…"

Peehu "are aaj jisko dekho excuse excuse excuse!!!"

Ram laughed and said "akhri baar k liye beta!!!"

Cady said "chal junior star mein tuje pastry khareed ke dungi!!"

Priya "nahi cady nahi nahi !!! cady "chill naa…..abla nari!!!!" priya shouted " cady I said no!!! are kabhi toh meri baat man le… ufff koi bhi meri baat …kya baat hain mr.kapoor jaldi boliye nahi toh meri beti naa jane kitne pastry kha legi!!!

Ram said "humari beti!!!"

Priya smiled and said "kal toh app!!! Papa ne phone kiya tha!!!"

Ram didn't listened to her and said "dot 7 I will send car for u and my daughter!!! Come to my hotel I want to talk wd you!!! And you should say all to peehu that who am I !!!!"

Priya "this is not done kal muje app!!! Ram said in between raising his voice mein abhi wo ram kapoor nahi raha jo badal gaya tha tumhare liye!!!!… bal ki abhi mein wo ram kapoor hoon jo tumhare ane se pehle tha!!! So be ready in tym and he looked at her from top to bottom and said nice look !!! pura badal diya apne app ko!! Good !!!"

He left and said "agar rent ke paise wapis chahti hoon toh aa jana 7 baje beti ko lekar !!!"

Priya "wait u r blackmailing me!!!"

Ram : "hmm correct u r !! toh kya ho gaya !! u used to do that every time no!!!just come!! And 7 minutes!! 2 minutes extra .. hmm u know I dnt give n e one extra tym!!!! App ko diya !!!! Jao jake dekho peehu ne kitni pastries khayi!!! And left!!!"

Priya stood there thinking what is happening ek insaan jo kal peehu ko apni beti nahi mana aur aaj meri beti!!!

She came back to the reality and said "peehu…. And she managed to close the shop in a careless manner and ran to the cake shop !!!!"

 

Back in india::::

 

Kk: beta kya baat hain tum khud tensed hoo aur hum sab ko tensed kar rehe ho!! Bolo toh sahi!!! Kya baat hain!!

Neha :: pehle sab ko aa jane dijiye phir bolti hoon!!!

Saumya:: neha kya baat hain!!! Sab theek hain naa!!!

Neha "wait naa… sab ko aa jane ..lijiye aa gaya…vikram rahul kaha hain!!!

Rahul ::: present please!!!

Neha "idhar aa mera hera hain yeh pehli baar muje tuj pe gussa nahi aa raha hain kisi ladki ke saath flirt karne ke liye !!!

Rahul 'mom I was not flirting I m serious!!!"

Neha "ok mera jigli pooh!!!"

Neha turned to everyone and said very seriously …. "pata nahi kaise bolu but I have to say!!"

Kk "abb bol do beta …..neha said not letting her to finish loudly closing her eyes "PRIYA IS ALIVE!!!"

Kk : "what!!"

Shipra "kya !!!"

Vikram came to neha and said "kya bol rahi hoon!!!"

Neha "haan sach hain yeh and all thanks to rahul!!!"

Kk "I dnt believe this….."

Neha has already given her instructions to rahul he said "I can prove it .."

He was there wd his lap top …he called cady for the first time in his life!!!

Rahul :: cady can u come online and keep priya aunty wd u plz….and be quick no excuse plz…..bye meet u on video chat!!! Bye bye bye and he disconnected !!"

 

In Dubai!!!!

Cady disconnected the phone and said "chalo shop mein rahul ko app se kuch baat karni hain!!!!"

Priya "mujse" !!!!

Cady 'haan chaliye " and dragged her to the shop and made her sit on the chair she connected the net and rahul was already there….

Rahul there you are….  Where is she !!! cady moved and said "here!!"

Rahul "where is sis!!"

Cady dragged peehu and said here!!! And made her sit on the priya's lap…

Priya tum dono kahoge kya ho raha hain yeh sab!!!

Cady 'pata nahi!!!"

Rahul 'one sec aunty!! And turned the monitor to the family…

Priya was in shock seeing them!! And same condition was wd the kapoors…..

Kk came forward and said " toh yeh hain ram ki mini mee…. Isi liye usske jaisi hain yeh ….kya naam hain !!!!"

Priya said "plz maa plz..she doesn't know n e thing thoda samhal ne dijiye…..and she took peehu out from there …

Peehu "mamma wo kaun thi ..aur wo sab app ko jante hain!!!"

Priya hugged peehu and said " kuch nahi beta kuch nahi!!! She didn't know what to say!!!! She hold peehu as close as she can!!!!!!!

Neha said "cady take care of her actually u r very young to know this!!! Cady said " I know she is ram uncle's wife she said me…. "

Neha "god bless u beta just take care of her .. ok bye beta!!!"

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