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Hello friends I'm a newbie in dis forum' this is my first attempt in writing a ff.. I hope u like it' As I'm a fan of arsha/kriyansh so I started writing dis story months ago in my diary bt cudnt post it here as my exams were on'

Now abt d story it vil  b on our beloved arsha, actually it vil b started from april so der cud b use of back dates..

I'm Really nervous abt it..πŸ˜• dis is fictional so I dnt intend 2 hurt ny1, I'm just gng 2 use sum characters here nd der as I dnt have much idea abt arsha's personal lyf so I vil b using sum of real nd imaginary characters it is nothing 2 do wid sum1 on personal front..

Comments, criticism nd suggestions r  most welcomed..

Do leave ur comments pleasssee'😊

Chapter 1

The party is on its peak,every1 is having a merry time ; people are dancing, drinking,chit-chatting, having fun afteral dey al were celebrating a cause, not a small occasion 2 celebrate, it is a reception party of a very beautiful , made for eachother couple,

It is reception party of our heavenly couple karan nd Jennifer..⭐️

Every1 is having a gala tym, newly weds  are bussy in receiving d guests, al d guests, frnds nd family are njoying demselves, but der is one lonely soul in d party who was standing in d corner wid a glass in his hand, staring at a girl who has entered d party 4 abt 30 minutes ago nd nw she is chirping, giggling nd dancing wid der frnds.

He was so much into dreamland of dat gal, he didn't even noticed ven sum1 came nd stood nxt 2 him,

His beautiful dreams broke ven d person nxt 2 him spoke up'

Person:  Hey!! You luv her naaa'

Boy: haaannn'(dreamingly)😍

(& wid dis he cums 2 reality nd saw d lady standing beside him in a beautiful turquoise gown, she was none other dan our new bride jenny.😊) 

Huh!! No no I didn't mean dat, nd I'm sorry I didn't noticed ven u cam mam..😳

(wid a guilt look on his face as if he was caught on stealing)

Jenny: oh!! Cum on Amar ( yes, till nw u al must have guessed d boy is none other dan kunwar amarjeet singh)

I'm around ur age so stop calling me mam,it sounds lyk I'm ur skul teacher nd one more thing dnt hide ur emotions dude it is written al over ur face dat ur deeply, madly in luv wid her..

Amar: (sheepishly) sorry!! Nd luking down he said, but I dnt luv her she  is my best buddy nd my gf is Sonia not her..(he said defendingly)

(Sonia is an imaginary character fr d tym being amar's gf)

Jenny: ohhh!! Cut d crap'(she was abt 2 say sumthing bt was interrupted by a husky voice of her handsum husband, 'karan')☺️

Karan: exactly Amar, I mean y r u even giving dat lame excuse of best buddy..

Amar: But sir mam (looking 2 both of dem) v r best frnd, u both r misunderstanding us, I'm already in a relationship  wid sum1 else..  (He give as an explanation)

Karan: see 1st of al dnt call me sir,(make a weird face) it seems as if I'm way older dan u, ven I'm just a couple of yrs elder 2 u & abt u nd her being best frnds dat also I knw ki tum bht ache dost ho bt I can see in ur eyes man u luv her a lot,

Main kya I guess every1 present here knws dis v al can see dat, but tumhe khud ko yeh baat pata hai ya nahi I dnt knw..

& u being wid nybody else either u  r making fool of urself or making fool of sum1 else '

(Amar thought fr sumtym nd started 2 giving up his defending answers)

Amar: okaie, I won't call u sir toh karan bro toh keh sakta hun na(to which karan nodded happily) & apko bhabhi(Jennifer smiled approvingly),

See bro I knw wat u both r trying 2 say, bt v cant change nything she doesn't consider me more dan her best frnd & nw she is gng 2 NY, so d matter of fact is yeh chapter yahi close hojana chahiye..(sighed heavily)

Karan: (trying 2 make amar understand, he put his arm around his shoulders frm back)

Dekho amar maine ek galti kari due which me nd jenny tuk 7 long yrs 2 get united,& I dnt want u 2 repeat d same mistake; ven I usesd 2 shoot wid u guys tab main khudko aur jenny ko tum dono mein dekhta tha'  nw also I think dat if I wud hav told jenny abt my feelings earlier toh v wud hav been 2gether wid eachother long back..

But at dat I also lyk u unheard my hearts voice nd yahi best buddy wala tag de diya na apne dil ki baat na na jenny k dil ki baat jaanne ki koshish kari,

But nw I realized destiny always wanted us 2 b 2gether bt I was d only 1 fool who cudnt understand it..destiny ki wajah se hi hum har baar takkaraye, aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai kit um dono k saath bhi yahi hota aa raha hai..

Jenny had tears in her eyes which she quickly wiped up b4 her husband sees dem& smilingly she continued..

J:karan shi bol rahe hai bt 1st thing Is dat u shud knw wat ur heart says, try 2 introspect urself, listen 2 ur heart den everything vil b crystal clear'

A: (luking down as if searching sumthing)πŸ€”

Bhabhi I knw , main janta hun ki main usse buhat pyaar karta hun (he spoke in very low tone bt audible enuf)

Jennifer's mouth was wide open😲, karan giggled seeing dis & closed it'

To b continued'

 

Sorry in advance.. I'm writing ff for d first tym so plz forgiveme fr errors nd I dnt hw it wud turnup, I'm just trying 2 put my best, plzz let me nw hw was it nd tell wether I shud continue it??? Post ur reviews plzz'😊

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     INDEX
chapter1- page1
chapter2-page3
chapter3-page4
chapter4-page6
chapter5-page8
note+ chapter6-page10
chapter7-page12
chapter8-page14
promo+note -page15
Note-page16
chapter9-page18
chapter10-page20
note- page22
chapter11-page22
chapter-12 (last chapter)-page24
Epilogue-page24
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loved chap 1.pls continue and pm me...
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Nice 
Continue and pm me plz
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loved it cntinue and plzz pm me..😳
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Amazing start:-):-)

Continue soon and pm me pls:-):-)
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Amazing start 
well written 
pls continue nd pm me 
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Aww its awsome...plzzz cntinue...i want to read more...n plzzz pm me nxt tym
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do continue n plz pm me...
its a nice story...😊
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nice start...pls continue soon