New FF :Fir Miley dou dil Lekin...updated page-6

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Posted: 2012-07-29T02:53:49Z
hey guys This my first OS hope u like it, After seeing New promo i can't controll my excitement That's why now i m writing this os, after seeing Priya, Ram was totally shocked &  very happy but he Also very anagry with priya becoz u know guys. ok now i m starting My os with RaYa convo, please forgive me for my grammatical mistake

Ram:  Priya??? Tum??? Tum sachme priya ho kya???He wanted to tauch her

tabhi Haddi aake saab gadbad kar deti hai, hey Ms Sharma aap uha ???

Ram:  Rajat tu isse janti hai ???

Rajat:  Ha Ram ehi tou hai, Ms Sharma, i mean Ms Pooja Sharma, pichle 5 saal se inhone hi tou meri oh book shop chala rahi hai tujhe bataya tha nah main ??

Ram:  oh ha, tou ahi hai, Ms Sharma, Ms Pooja Sharma(With angry face)Hi Ms Pooja Sharma please to meet u

Pooja: Hi Ram, They both Shakes there hands , priya seems very tensed  also very Scary too becoz She knew, Ram will not Forgive her 4 doing This, After seeing her scary face Rajat comes behinds her and kept her hands in Priya's shoulder

RaJat : r u ok MS Sharma, u seems very tensed, everything is ok???

Pooja : yeah i m fine

Ram feels very helpless to see Both of them & also very Angry but nobody in this party  notice that but Priya understood every thing

Ram : After seeing them together Excuse me main jara aati hu,

Rajat: kaha ja rahi hai , abhi tou Ms Sharma se thik se introduce bhi nahi hue teri,

Ram:  tum log batein karo mujhe kuch kaam yaad aa gaye baadme milti hu nah , Teri Ms Sharma se after hearing it, Priya becames shocked, & Rajat feels embressed infront of Pooja, He said.
 Ram meri dost Kuch bhi bol dete hai, sorrry Ms Sharma

Priya:  No it's ok excuse me, She letf the place, She said herself in minds, mujhe Ram se Baat karni hoga,i know oh mujhse bohot gussa hai, sayyed meri sakhal bhi nahi dekhna chate hai, iss liye uha se iss tarha se chala gaya lekin kuch bhi ho ,mujhe un se baat karni hi padegi aur  usse Pihuu ki bareme bhi batana hai, sayyed Pihuu ki baat sunke oh mujhe maaf kar de, lakin kaha hai oh, ye Ram bhi na pata nahi kaha chali gayi, tabhi pihuu aa jate hai,

Pihuu: Mumma aap kaha chale gayi thi main kaab se aap ko dhund rahi hu, Pata hai Golu uncle nah, mujhe Aloo paratha khelaya, aur aur unhone mujhe bohot saare choclate bhi diya, Golu uncle  bohot accha hai, aur oh aap se milna chate the Lekin aap kaha the???

Priya : sorry beta aap ko pata hai aap ki Golu uncle iss waqt  kaha pe hai??

Pihuu: Nahi, ha lekin maine unko Bahar ki taraff jate hue dekhi thi,

priya: ok beta Thanx, aapka Kaddy didi kaha hai,
 
pihuu: uha pe Kaddy di

Priya: kaady ke pass jate hai aur bolte hai Kaddy Tum na Pihuu ko aj ghar drop kar dou, mujhe jara ek joruri kaam hai, main baad main aaungi tum kar dougi nah ??

Kaddy: Ok main iss motu ko ghar pohsa dungi,

Priya: aur kaddy jaab taak main ghar baphas nahi aa jati hu tum uski paas hi rehena ok, barna oh akele daar jayegi

Kaddy: Ok
Pihuu ko kaddy ke pass chodke Priya Ram se milne chala jate hai, ram apni gari se party chodnei wali hai tabhi Priya Ram ki Smne aa jati hai usse dekhke Ram aur bhi jada gussa ho jatr hai,

Ram : Arre Ms Sharma sorry Ms pooja Shrma aap ??? aap eha kase???Aap ko tou party main hona chahiye Rajat ka party hai, oh, jaiyye app eha pe kya kar rahe hai

Priya: Ram mujhe pata hai aap mujse naraz hai, lekin aap aesi batein kyu kar rahe hai???

Ram: Naraz aur aap se kyu, main aapko janti hu kya???

Priya: aap aese baat kyu kar rahe ho??main janti hu ki aap ke deemag main abb bohot sawal hai,lekin main aj aap ke sab sawal ke jawab dene ke liye hi  ayi hu lekin eha nahi, kahi aur, Then they both left the place & both r cames in a sea beach, they both were silence 4 sometimes they
didn't talk to each other, burt after few mins priya broke this silence

Priya : aap ko pata hai Ram main aap ko uha kyu le ayi??

Ram: He remain silent, not uttered any single words

Priya:ah nah meri saab se fav jaga jab bhi main bohot udhas ho jati hu, main eha pe aa jati hu, eha aake mujhe bohot Shanti milte hai

Ram:loudly said Stopped Stooped this nonsense, why u r telling this , who am i???

Priya:bohot daar jate hai, & said Ram please aesa maat kahiye pehele meri baat tou suniye?

Ram:Kya sunu tumhari baat aur kya kehena chati ho tum , tumhare paas kehene ko kuch hai,???
 
Priya: aap meri baat tou sniya

Ram: kuch nahi sunna mujhe, Tum eha pe aake apni life khushi khushi bita rahe ho, aur pata hai uha inn 5 saalou main ek aesa din nahi thi jaab main tumhe yaad na kiya ho, main apni aapko tumhari maut ko gunhe gar maan kar, saaza de rahi thi, iss 5 salou main nah, main
apni life jeena bhul gayi thi, tumhe pata hai, tumhari maut ke  baad Sid ko main uski ghalti ke liye jail vhej diya, Lekin fir bhi main apni aapko nahi maaf kar payi kyu ki maine socha agar main ye saab pehele kar ti tou tumhari saath oh hadsa nahi hota

priya: Ram

Ram:tumhe pata hai main inn 5 salou main apni life ko narak bana liya, main jee tou rahi hu, lekin meri liye nahi baaki saab ke liye tumhe pata hai, main fir se apni habbits ko apna saathi bana liye ohi, unhealthy khana, tablets, khana saab khuch,in 5 salou main , main kabhi apni parwa nahi ki thi, humesha bhaagwaan se apni maot mangta tha

Priya : Sorry Ram main aapko batana chati thi Lekin(with crying face)

Ram: Lekin lekin kya priya? mujhe aj pata chal gayi actually tumne kabhi mujhe pyaar hi nahi ki thi, aur tumne mujhse jo divorse manga tha oh bhi iss liye taaki tum akele zindegi bita sakte ho hai nah?

Priya: Ram aesa nahi hai, main accident ke baad aapke paas jana chate the lekin fir( she told everything to Ram about that accident &also  Natz Ishika convo& finally how she came to dubai everything everything) & she told him pata hai main aapse duur aake puri tarha se tut gayi thi main  appni zindegi khatam kar dena chati thi lekin tabhi meri zindegi main Pihuu aayi

Ram:Pihuu ??? Pihuu tumhari beti hai???

Priya: ha Ram pihuu , lekin pihuu sirf meri nahi oh aap ka bhi beti hai aap ka khoon hai oh,

Ram: kya? pihuu meri beti hai, apna khuud ka baccha hai, pihuu, after hearing it Ram seemed very excited & happy he wanted to hug Priya but he controll himself & said pihuu meri beti aut itna saal taak tumne uss mujhse duur rakha, tumharri himmat kase hue apne beti ko mujhse duur rakhen ki, tumne ek baar bhi nahi socha pihuu ko tum mujhse duur rakhke meri zindegi ki saabse badhi khushi chin rahe ho, lekin tumshe kya fark padh ta hai,meri khushi se tum tou sirf apni bareme soch rahi thi nah?priya main tumhe khudko mujhse duurr raknne ke liye sayyed maaf bhi kar dungi, lekin tumne mujhse meri beti se alag rakha iss ke liye main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi tumne mere saath bohot galat kiya, aur iss ke liye main tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karungi, aur ab main tumhe apni beti ko apnie se duur bhi nahi rakhne dungi main usse apni saath le jaungi, Mumbai, taab tum jasi chaho apni zindegi bita sakte ho, aur agar tumhe mujhse Chutkara chahiye nah tou tum divorse paper le ayo, main sign kar dungi, main kaal Mumbai baphass ja rahi hu, aur saath Pihuu ko bhi le ja rahi, hu, lekin main nahi chati hu, tumbhi meri tarha aapni beti see durr rehene ki saza bhuktou iss liye main tumhe Pihuu se alag nahi karna chati hu, Agar tum chaho tou meri saath Mumbai ja sakte ho, Lekin ek baat tum Mumbai sirf Pihuu ki Ma banke jaougi meri Biwi banke nahi, kyu ki main tumhe apni biwi hone ke liye force nahi kagungi

Priya: Ram aap meri baat tou suniya

Ram:Ab bohot Raat ho chuke ab aur koi baat nahi , jo bhi baat karna kaal karege,aur ha tum pihuu ko tayyar rakhna main usse lene aa jaungi
They both left the place

Edited by jakther - 2012-07-30T09:12:08Z
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Posted: 2012-07-29T03:17:24Z
very well thought...Smile
dis may happn wen raya meet

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Posted: 2012-07-29T03:24:46Z
superb yaarThumbs Up..par thoda sa hugging shugging chahiya tha.. gussa wala ya pyaar wala koi bhi chalta.. Iam dieng to see raya together and miss their hug..keep it upClapClap
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Posted: 2012-07-29T03:41:57Z
that was very realistic... thanks for writing..
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Posted: 2012-07-29T03:48:39Z
very gd first fiction post.. I wish u would extend it further..
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Posted: 2012-07-29T04:50:31Z

Maybe this is going to happen...awesome OS .

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Posted: 2012-07-29T05:02:23Z
awesome dear !!!

Loved it Smile
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Posted: 2012-07-29T05:22:15Z
I think this is going to happen. Nice OS.
but which new promo?Shocked i need to check the forum...
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