"jab tum aa jate ho samne~love in dubai"UPDT PG40

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Posted: 2012-07-12T06:54:38Z
ok then ab sbko dubai pahuncha diya h to yha shuru hogi ek nayi prem kahani ...ram priya ki jiska jariya bani h pihu...so my here is the next part of my FF "pyar hame kis mod pe le aaya"...with new name...in new thread..actully bht jyada pages ho jate h to updates m mujhe problm ho jati h qki kabhi kabhi mobile se handl krna padta h...ok then here i go with... 

"jab tum aa jate ho samne~love in dubai" 

Scene 9... 

Ab sb apni apni jagh pahonch chuke h life apni raftar se chalna shuru kr chuki h...with daily routin..priya ki laprwahiya...pihu ki samajhdariya...aur hmari bechainiya...sb asusual apni jgh pe h aur badhti hi ja rhi h..aj pihu ko phir se priya ki wajah se late hone wala h to ..pihu madam ka lecture chalu h aur unki useto student hr din ki trh use gatake ja rhi qki bhai glti bhi to unhi ki h... 

Pihu...ma kitna time lagta h apko..ek cheez dhundhne me hr din aap aisa hi krte ho...aur din mujhe apki wajah se late ho jata h pta nhi aap kab seekhoge.. 

Priya...sorry sorry meri ma ..aage se aisa nhi hoga 

Pihu...roz aisa hi hota h 

Priya...ab nhi hoga 

Pihu..roz yhi kehte ho 

Priya...ufff..achha meri ma chale ab 

Pihu...ab bhi puchh rhe ho 

Priya...aah golu..u r too much... hadh h... 

Dono school jane k liye nikalte h..ek to late ho rha hota h upr se taxi wala lagta h uski biwi ne nashte me aloo parathe khila diye h jo usse taxi chalayi nhi ja rhi aise chala rha h jaise bailgadi h.. 

Priya...bhaiya thoda tez chalaiye na..bht late ho rha h..ye india thode hi h ki sadako pe jgh nhi h.. 

Taxi driver..madm jb der ho rhi to samay se nikalna chahiye na...taxi h airoplane to h nhi ki uda k le jau.. 

Pihu hasne lagti h to priya ko gussa aa jata... 

Priya..tum kya dant nikal rhi ho..aur aap taxi chalaiye jaban nhi.. 

Taxi wala priya ki bato se distrb ho jata h aur glt turn mar deta h aur samne se aa rhi car se bhid jata h..dono gaadiya ruk jati h dono k drivr ladne lagte h..tabhi priya bahar nikalti h... 

Priya..are bhaiya jane do jyada nuksan to hua nhi h.aur hme der ho rhi h...chalo please.. 

Peechhe se awaz aati h... 

Oh to apka irada kuchh jyada nuksan krne ka tha...tb to bada afsos ho rha hoga... 

Priya pichhe mud k dekhti h samne ram khada rhta h muskurate hue... 
Ufff...kya smile de rha h priya k to dil tk chhu aayi uski smile.. 

Ram...oh aap ..main soch hi rha tha ki koi unique prsn hi hoga tabhi dubai jaise shehr ki sadko pe bhi accident hone lage... 

Priya...excuse me...aap kehna kya chah rhe h..taxi m nhi chala rhi thi.. 

Ram..are whi to achha hua ki aap nhi chala rhi thi sirf baithi thi to accidnt ho gya chalati to dubai me bhukamp hi aa jata 

Priya...this is rediculus..hw dre u... 

Ram...are isme dre ki kya bat h itna attitude dekh k taxi ghbra gyi aur bhid gyi.. 

Priya...aah look who talk ...jo khud attitude ki dukan h wo mujhe bta rhe h attitude k bare me 

Ram...achha aap ne kb dekh liya mera attitude 

Ab to priya ko kuchh samajh nhi aa rha tha ki kya kahe lekin ab attitude ki baat aa gyi h..to bina kahe to rhegi nhi bhai ye bhi to attitude hi h...hadh h.. 

Priya...tabhi jb aapne dekha 

Ram...m to ab bhi dekh rha hu 

Priya...m bhi dekh rhi hu 

Ram...to aap meri nakal kyun kr rhi h 

Priya..m ...mne kab nakal ki 

Ram...abhi to 

Priya...abhi???... Kya nakal ki mne 

Ram..are aap hi ne to kaha ki mere me attitude h to wo aap q dikha rhi h...agr mera attitude aap dikhayengi to nakal hi hogi na... 

Priya...aah ..hadh h mr.kapoor aap kabhi nhi sudhrenge 

Ram...ji 

Priya...kuchh nhi.. 

Ram...pr kuchh to kaha aapne 

Priya...dekhiye mera deemag mt khrab kariye ek to waise hi hme late ho rha h upr se accident aur un sb pe bhari aap .. 

Raam...excuse me...bhari kisko bola aapne 

Priya...apko bola 

Ram..kyun bola 

Priya...qki aap h 

Ram...dekhiye ab bht jyada ho rha h 

Priya..whi to m bhi kh rhi hu bht jyada ho rha h..cntrol kariye 

Dono me bhs hoti rhti h tabhi pihu aa jati h aur chillati h 

Pihu...aaahh chup ho jaiye aap dono itne bade ho gye aur bachho ki trh lad rhe h.. 

Ram...pihu ko dekhte hi ekdm khush ho jata h use pta nhi tha ki pihu bhi h sath me wo fatak se pihu ko utha leta h... 

Ram...are darling tum ...tumhe pta h mne kitna miss kiya tumhe...aur upr se tumne btaya bhi nhi tha ki tum kaha rhti ho m to yhi soch rha tha kahan dhundhunga tumhe achha hua na is accident k chakkr me tum mil gyi...i miss u baby 

Pihu..i miss u 2 mr.kapoor ...m ma ko bol rhi thi ki hum apko yha nhi bula sakte aur aap yha aa bhi gye...mne bhi apko bht miss kiya 

Priya dono ko dekh kr bht khush ho rhi thi pr uski khushi kitni der tikegi..turant use khayal aata h ki is trh in dono ko milne degi to inka ekdusre se dur rhna mushkil ho jayega to ram ki life distrb hogi unki khud ki family hogi bachhe honge..aur ab to wo mujhe pehchan bhi nhi rhe h ya pehchanna chahte nhi pta nhi..to m nhi chahti ki meri wajah se wo jra bhi pareshan ho..aur waise bhi ab kya fayeda h ab to zindgi kahan se kahan aa gyi h... 

Priya..pihu..chalo hame der ho rhi h na..bhaiya aap apni taxi nikaliye..yha se 

Drivr..madam taxi to band ho gyi ab nhi ja sakti 

Priya..are ye kya baat hui ab hum kaise jayenge..apka deemag khrab h pehle to aapne itna late krwaya aur ab kh rhe h nhi ja sakte ...hadh h... 

Ram...excuse me ap chahe to m chhode deta hu 

Priya...ji nhi koi jarurat nhi...hum khud mng kr sakte h 

Ram..wo to m jan hi gya hu...i mean aap kr sakti bt is waqt jana jaruri h to... 

Pihu...ma chalo na mujhe mr.kapoor k hi sath jana h...please...aur late bhi to rha h...please ma 

Priya k paas ha kehne k alawa koi rasta nhi bachta aur wo car me baithne jati h to ram fatak se aake door kholta h...priya usko dekte hue usme baith jati h...wo pihu ko bulati h beech me baithne k liye pr pihu kinare baithne ki jid krne lagti h wo mr.kapoor k bagal me ab dono ko samajh nhi ata h ki kya kare..kya ..kya kare baithna to padega na boss qki pihu aur mere aage to kisi ki chalati nhi to ramji baith jaiye..jyada style mt mariye jb se priya ki photo dekhi h tabse hi to itne normal behv kr rhe h..nhi to kl to bada bhadk rhe the..are bhai priya se sach jo janna h direct to puchh nhi sakte priya unko janti h wo to priya ko nhi jante na to ye sb krna padta h boss...anyways ram beechh me baithta h to uska hath priya k hath pe rakha jata h...dono ekdusre ko dekhne lagte h ...with..bg...bade achhe lagte hain... 

Pihu...wow mr.kapoor aapki car to bht badi h... 

Dono ka dhyan tut jata h aur dono idhr udhr dekhne lagte h..uff india me bhi yhi krte the aur dubai me bhi yhi kr rhe h...koi fayeda nhi hua inhe itna dur lane ka...hadh h... 

Ram...achha apko achhi lagi 

Pihu..ha bht hmare pas to nhi h na 

Ram...are to ye bhi meri thode hi na h 

Pihu...to 

Ram...are mera ek dost h usi se udhar mangi h.. 

Pihu...ok mtlb apke bhi pas hamari hi trh car nhi h..isiliye aap itne achhe h 

Ram...mtlb.. 

Pihu...are wo h na khadus uncle unke pas bht badi car h isiliye to itne khadus h.. 

Ram...hahaha..ha bhai mere pas to nhi h itni badi car pr chhoti si h 

Pihu...oh.. 

Ram...achha apko gan sunna achha lgta h.. 

Pihu...ha 

Ram...to kaunsa gana sunengi aap 

Pihu..mera aur ma ka fvrt...bde achhe lagte h 

Ram...are ye to mera bhi h... 

Rampriya phir ek bar ek dusre ko dekhne lagte h tabhi drivr ye gana laga deta h..aur kya scene bnta h boss dono ekdusre ki ankho me khoye rhte h with bade achhe lagte h..tabhi pihu ki awaz aati h 

Pihu...ma..meri hanky ka pin khul gya band kr do na... 

Le ab priya kaise band kare beech me ramji baithe h aur priya ka hath itna bada to h nhi ki ramji ko par kr sake...waise ria uth k idhr aa sakti h pr ye to m hone nhi dungi to priya ko hi koshis krni padegi...hihihi..qki mujhe bht maza aata h na badmashi krne me...lol...priya hath badha k koshis krne lagti h ram thoda dabne ki koshis krta bt ab wo bhi kya kare uska size hi aisa h to koi fayeda nhi hota h priya thoda sa uth k pinup kr deti..tabhi car jhtke se ruk jati h aur priya ladkhada k ram ki baho me aa jati h...ufff..chhoti si car usme ye pyar aur do dil bekrar bt beech me aagyi drvr ki awaz ki deewar hadh h..thoda ruk nhi sakta tha...abhi bolna jaruri tha...nalayak.. 

Drivr...sir school aa gya 

Dono chaunk jate h... 

Pihu...ma chalo..jaldi..by mr.kapoor 

Aur pihu neeche utr jati h priya jaise hi utne ko hoti h uska stole ram ki button me fas jata h..ab wo pareshan ho jati h ek to ye sb musibate upr se ram ka muskurana..ram bhi na mauka dekh k hamesha chauka marta h..khair tension me aram se hone wala kam bhi nhi hota h...priya itni buri trh se stole k sath pesh aa rhi hoti h ki puccho mt...tab ram hath badhata h aur stole ko pakdta h pr priya ka hath bhi touch ho jata h priya turant hath hata leti h... 

Ram...aap hr chheez k sath itna hi gussa dikhati h ya aaj kuchh spcl h 

Priya...mtlb 

Ram...mtlb gusse me insan ka ddemag kaam nhi krta h aur itna gussa seht k liye bhi achha nhi hota h..lijiye nikal gya itni asani se aap khamkhah iske sath kushti kr rhi thi... 

Priya muskurane lgti h aur sochti wah jo sb mne sikhaya h wo aaj mujhe sikhaya ja rha h...vry gud..aur wo car se utr jati h..phir priya aur pihu ekdusre ka hath pakad kr jane lagte h ram unhe dekhta rhta sochta h kash ye sath thoda aur lamba hota... 

Khair..sabhi apne apne kaam pe chale jate ..pihu school priya shop aur ram ko jahan jana tha wha... 


Scene 10... 

Priya shop pe aati h to dekhti h sb books idhr udhr rakhi hui actully shop bilkul theek rhti bs kewal ketabo ki jagah idhr udhr ho gyi thi jisse koi fark nhi padna chahiye lekin madm ko to padega are bhai unhe ramji ki aadto ki aadt jo ho gyi h..to wo kitabe sahi krne lagti h aur badbadane lagti obiously na...bolna to uska fvrt kam h...kitna bolti h yaar hadh h... 

Priya...ek din bhi kahi chale jao na to pura shop uthal puthal kr dete h aap log kitni bar kaha h ki chhezo ko jgh pe rakha kariye pr nhi kyun sb sahi rhega to m kya karungi mere liye bhi to kuchh kam hona chahiye na..mere pas deemag khrab krne k liye bht sari cheeze h aaplog kyun meri pareshania aur badhate rhte h...priya bate krte krte table pe chad k books rkhne lagti h...ufff..kitna messi kr rkha h idhr hath bhi nhi lagya tha kya isko saf nhi kr sakte the...jo karu m hi karu aaplog to bs khade rahiye...dijiye mujhe wo book utha k 

Priya hath badhati h..to ek book uske hath pe rakh di jati h wo dekhti h to khti h.. 

Priya...are ye wali nhi wo wali 

Phir se ek aur book uske hath pe rakh di jati h..wo phir se chillati..are yar hadh h..apko pta nhi h yha kaun si book rhti h q idhr udhr ki books de rhe ho.. 

Nhi mujhe to nhi pta h aap btayengi tb to pta chalega.. 

Priya awaz sun k chaunk jati h aur mudhti h to ladkhada jati h aur seedddhhhaaa..hehehe...baho me aa jati h...waise kmal h na cricket ka shaukh h ye to pta tha pr catch bhi itna achha pakadta h ye pta nhi tha... 

To b continue... 
Edited by veena23 - 2012-09-10T05:49:40Z
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Posted: 2012-07-12T07:14:25Z
awsomeupdate veena. thanks
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Posted: 2012-07-12T07:15:21Z
wow muje ram aur priya ki first meeting aur first fight yaad aa gai great update loved it
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Posted: 2012-07-12T07:21:10Z
lovd d updateClap
specially in carWink
want to see more cute nok jhok of ram and priyaSmile
but not dat bw rajat and priya 
hopng d guy at d end is not rajat
eagerly waiting 4 d nxt partSmile
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Posted: 2012-07-12T07:29:29Z
AS ALWAYS.. SUPERB... HeartTongue
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Posted: 2012-07-12T07:31:30Z
Awesome update Veena! Big smile
Loved the car scene!!! Heart It was so cute!! Day Dreaming
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Posted: 2012-07-12T07:36:02Z
wow... di... u r too good... awesome imagination... ab mein bhi imagine kar rahy hun... LOL... anyways , muje aapki ye idea bohoth pasand hai... love it... hats off to u...  ok... ab kya hoga... kya ram ko past jaldi yaad aayenga ???   so many questions yaar... i want answers soon... ok di... so continue asap... & thank u thank u thank u sooo much... love u a lot... & big big hugs for u... HugHug

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Posted: 2012-07-12T07:51:20Z
That was chooo chweeet...Big smileit was fantastic update...Clap 
Aap kamal ho yaar...Hug 
Just loving your writing...Heart 
Plzz update sooonnn...
Edited by kaparikh1 - 2012-07-12T07:50:41Z
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