"30 palo me 30 salo ka sath...yade yad aati h"

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Posted: 2012-06-19T16:36:37Z
so frnds i am here with my 1000th post on IF...ufff...mujhe bht time lag gya ye krne meWink...hihihi ...as usual late lateef...khair ab jake ye hua to shi bt i dsnt get any idea that what i post as 1000th post...what i hv diffrnt ...ff likh chuki hu os likh chuki hu video bna chuki hu creations krti hi rhti hu..to phir bhi krna to inme se hi h kuchh h...waise idhr mne jitne bhi logo k 1000th's post maine padhe sabhi super hot the...lol..aur mere sath do prblm h ek to meri soficicated hindi Smilejisse mostly people relate nhi kr pate & second is hotty shotty storyTongue mujhse likhi nhi jati to mne kaafi socha ki kya karu kya karu...to i get idea that i hv to choose my best side that is emotional part..i think i cn play with my words imotionally hopefully good so i tried it...actully abhi ek cheez bachi hui h mujhse...& that is short stories...so hv to write a emotional SS...kuchh alag bhi ho jayega..chalo ye to decide ho gya ki kya likhna h ab tital ka locha ho gya...ufff...ok i hv to think about it...hmmm... Got it...here i go with my 1000th post.. Short story...


"30 palo me 30 salo ka sath...yade yad aati h"

                          

                       scene 1

Aaj m 30 salo baad apne ram se milne ja rhi hu...ab to buddhhe ho gye honge..

Aaj ram priya ka 30 salo bad phir se milna hona h priya taiyar hote hue ram k bare me sochti rhti h...wo aine me dekh kr apni bindi lagati h as always tedi aur sochti h

Aaj phir se bindi tedhi laga rhi hu kya ab bhi ram ko dikhegi meri tedhi bindi...ya tees salo me nazare kuchh badal gyi hongi ram ki...

Udhr ram bhi apni priya se milne k liye itna hi excited h...sochta h

Aaj tees salo bad ek bar phir se apni priya ko jee bhr k dekhunga m...kya ab bhi uske chehre ki muskan mere liye waisi hi hogi...ab to meri gudiya budhiya ho gyi hogi...bs kuchn pal ki hi duri h pr kat nhi rhi h...

Dono ek park me milne wale the priya aati h to dekhti h ram pehle se hi wha baitha park me khel rhe bachho ko dekh kr muskura rha h

Priya sochti h...aaj bhi ram ki muskan bilkul chhote se bachhe jaisi h..

Priya ram ko apne usi andaj me dekhti rhti h tabhi ram uski trf dekhta h aur sochta h

Ram..uff ye aaj bhi bilkul waise hi dekhti h isiliye m khud ko iski nazaro se bacha nhi pata...

Priya pas aake baithti h ram use dekh kr muskurata h..priya bhi muskurati h dono ekdusre ki nazaro me dekhte h phir blush krte h aur nazare churane lagte hain...

Priya...kaise hain aap

Ram...bht achha ekdm fit & fine...

Priya...hmmm achhe to aap h hi

Ram...ha kuchh kaha???

Priya...nhi

Ram...tum kaisi ho???

Priya...main bhi bilkul fit & fine hu even apse se thodi si jyada...

Ram...hahaha..wo to h mujhse chhoti jo ho

Priya...muskurati aur blush krti h...

Ram...priya ek baat kahu ???

Priya...kahiye na

Raam...tum thodi budhhi ho gyi ho

Priya...aahhh ..achha aur aap to aur jawan ho gye h..kya h ram hum30 salo baad mil rhe h..to budhha budhhi to honge hi na

Ram...hahaha...hmmm 30 sal ho gye na priya...samay kaise nikal jata h pta hi nhi chalta h

Priya...ha ram lagta h jaise kal ki hi baat h...jb pehli bar apse takrayi thi 

Ram...mujhse nhi meri badi aur mahngi car se wo bhi tumhari ma ki wajah se

Priya...aur ma ne pura tamasha bna diya tha...pr hm mil nhi paye the

Ram...ha aur mne to socha tha ek bar milo tum to m btata hu ki ram kapoor se panga lene ka kya mtlb hota h

Priya...btaya bhi to tha...kitna pareshan kiya tha mujhe aur papa ko

Raam...sorry

Priya...it's ok..aur wo pehli phone pe cnvrsation...

Ram..heheehe..yes hw could i frgt it..mne socha kaisi chalu ladki h itne bade hadse ko chhota sa accident bolti h

Priya...hehehe...aur mne socha...uff ye amiro ke chonchle ek car ko jra sa lag kya gya h...itna scene create kr rhe h ye nhi ki itne paise h to uski marammt kra le

Dono hasne lagte...

Priya...aur apko wo hmari pehli mulakat yaad h wo lift ka band hona aur phir wo aunty

Ram..are unko kaise bhul sakta hu agr wo predict nhi krti to hmari to kabhi shadi hi nhi hoti ...

Dono ekdusre ko dekhte h...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed







                             scene 2

phir kuchh der ki khamoshi k baad dono eksath bolte h...aur hamari shadi...

Priya...hehehe...waqai duniya ki sabse anokhi hi sadi thi..jaise sari musibate usi time aani thi hr cheez me problm ho jati thi...mujhe to puri shadi hi problm lag rhi thi..

Ram...aur upr se dadi aur naani ki bina bat ki pareshania...ek to hum shadi se pareshan upr se inki nayi nayi rashme...oh

Priya...shadi phir bhi shadi to bht hi yadgar rhi na ram

Ram... Ha mne bhi ummed nhi ki thi ki itni achhi ho jayegi...khair ho gyi hmari shadi kisi trh 

Priya...pr hmari life to itni asan honi hi nhi thi...shadi to ho gyi pr samjhoute k naam se...

Ram...aur humdono ko pta nhi kahan se hmesha kuchh na kuchh mil hi jata tha jeeb sa krne k liye ,chahe mera wo pehle hi din us jana ho,chahe wha se tumhe call krk pd mangate waqt tumhra mere cupboard ko hath lagana ho

Priya...chahe apka wapas ate hi mujhse ladna kisi aur ka gussa mujhpe utarna ,chahe ek hi kmre me rhte hue bhi alag alag rhna hr bat to hmari ajeeb hi hoti thi...are m apke atrangi dosto ki karamat kise bhul gyi

Raam...kaun si karmat ????

Priya...are whi hotel k kamre me suhagrat bhul gye kya...

Ram...wo bhala m kaise bhul sakta hu life me pehli bar itna ajeeb expirience hua tha suhagrat ka...

Priya...pr aap se jyada mere liye ajeeb tha qki usi din to mne apke wo bhayanak kharrate sune the

Raam...oye mere kharrato ki bhayanak mt kaho koi h jise unhe sune bina neend nhi aati...

Priya ram ko dekhne lagti h...phir khud hi bol padti h..aur wo cake ufff ram utna bada cake akele kha gye mujhe puchha tk nhi

Ram...ye mne puchha tha pr tumne hi to mna kr diya tha tumhe apple jo khana tha diet mntain krna tha na

Priya...ha to m apki trh thode hi na hu ki kuchh bhi kha lu m hmesha healthy food khati hu

Ram...achha ab bhi...

Priya...nhi mtlb khati thi ab to mere pati k sath rh k meri bhi adat kharab ho gyi h

Ram..achha pr m to ab cake nhi khata

Priya...kyun koi khane nhi deta kya????

Ram...nhi aisa nhi h meri biwi to deti h mujhe pr main jyadatr avoid krta hu...health concs ho gya hu na

Priya...hmmm mtlb kafi sudhr gye hain

Raam...sudhrna padta h...khiar chhodo ye bate tumhe hara honymoon yaad h

Priya...ofcourse ram honymoon nhi tha jabrdsti ka honymoon tha..mtlb hmne kitne bhane bnaye ,kya kya nhi kiya use spoil krne k liya

Ram...lekin ghrwlo ne to jaise kasam hi kha rkhi thi hme bhejne ki aur dadi wo ekdm hath dho k peechhe pad gyi thi

Priya...aur meri ma wo to ase excited thi jaise khud ja rhi h

Ram...tumhari ma ufff...wo nighty kya kamal ki cheez rkhi thi unhone...us waqt to mujhe samajh hi nhi aa rha tha ki tumhari ma k liye kya expression du

Priya...heheehe..wo hmesha se hi aisi thi..lekin ek bat to h ki honymoin ka chahe jo bhi hua ho hmari rishte ek naam jarur mil gya tha

Ram...ha dosti ka rishta...jo aaj bhi barkar h...aur chahe jo bhi rishto ka jo bhi hua ho pr ye rishta hmare beech hmesha rha chahe hum pas rhe ho ya dur...aur shayad isi rishte ki wajah se hmare beech pyar ki shuruwat bhi hui

Priya...ha aur hmdono ko ekdusre ki jarurat ka ehsas bhi isi rishte ne kraya...lekin us pyar k ehsas me bhi kuchh ajeeb tha

Ram...as usual ...agr wo ajeeb nhi hota to ye jarur hmare liye ajeeb ho jata...qki humdono to h hi ajeeb...

Priya...aur apne bhi to aisa kam kiya tha...pyar ka izhar krna tha to b apne dost ki madad li aur phir bhi nhi kr paaye

Ram...excuse me madm m krta pr aap shayad bhul rhi h ki aap hi ne mujhe pareshan kiya tha jis wajah se mujhe gussa aa gya tha...lekin boss tumhara gussa dekhne k baad to mera gussa kaha ud gya pta hi nhi chala ..ek to mujhe waise hi pyar k bare me kuchh pta nhi tha upr se tumhare izhar k tareeke k bad to mujhe samajh hi nhi aaya ki m kaun sa tareeka apnau

Priya...ha aur isiliye aapne mere sath wo kr diya...

Ram...wo ...wo kya priya...heeehee..lekin mujhe wo krne pe majbur to tumne hi kiya tha aram se meri bat sun leti to ye sb kyun hota...

Priya...achha mne kiya tha???..glti pehle apne ki thi...

Ram...pr mne sorry bhi to bola tha

Priya...achha sorry bol dene sb khtm ho jata h...

Ram...ufff priya tum phir se shuru ho gyi

Priya...m shuru ho gyi ???..hadh h

Ram priya k muh pe hath rkh deta dono ek dusre ko dekhne lagte hain...with bacground music

Bade achhe lagte hain...




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                scene 3

dono thoda cmfrtable hone ki koshis krte hain...samne khel rhe bachho ko dekhne lagte hain...

Ram...priya tumhe yad h ..wo hmare beech missundrstanding ka daur ..logo ne hme alag krne k liye kya kya kiya...

Priya...ha ram bht achhi trh se usiki wajah se to...

Ram...wo nuts aur kartik k rishte ki wajah se hmare beech glt fhmi hona mera tumpe chillana tumhara ghr chhod k jana...ufff

Priya...apki ma ka mujhe blckmail krna duriyo ka badte jana...

Ram..meri ma ki sachhai samne lane ki tumhari wo koshis aur mera use nhi manna

Priya...apki ma bhai sbki sacchai apke samne aana

Ram...mere liye tumhara jail jana

Priya...in halato me apka akele samna krte hue mujhe bachana

Ram...phir bhi apne rishte ko na bacha pana...tumse ek pal ki duri brdasht krna mushkil hote hue bhi

Priya...5 salo ki lambi duri ko bs ekdusre ke pyar ke bharose jhel jana...

Ram...5 sal bad phir se hmara amna samna ...ufff..phir se jaise jindgi wapas usi mod pe aa gyi thi

Priya...jahan se safar shuru kiya tha ...bs nayi thi ek shuruat jo hmari beti k rup me hamare beech me tha

Ram...ufff usse milna bate krna kitna achha lagta tha mujhe...pr...

Priya...hmmm mujhe bhi wo hmesha apke hone ka ehsas krati thi kabhi laga hi nhi ki aap mujhse dur gye???

Raam...m dur gya hi kaha tha priya m to hmesha tumhare dil me tha dhadkan ki trh...

Priya...unhi dhadkano k sahare aur apki beti k sath to jee h mne ye jindgi...

Raam..phir to jindgi ki raftar kabhi kam nhi hui ...zindgi apni raftar se chalti gyi aur hum uske sath behte chale gye...

Priya...aur behte behte aaj kahan aa gye???...khair jo hona hota h wo to ho hi jata h...

Ram..hmmm

Priya...ram bht der ho rhi h mujhe jana hoga

Ram...please priya itni din bad mili ho aur itni jaldi jane ki baat kr rhi ho

Priya...ram aap jante nhi h mere pati ko mujhe dekhe bina chain nhi milta agr wo pehle aa gye to...

Ram...priya bs jyada sunane ki jarurat nhi h meri biwi ko bhi mujhe dekhe bina chain nhi milta h ...

background music

bade achhe lagte hain




                        


                               scene 4

priya...hmmm 5 sal ...ram jindgi kitni ajeeb hoti h na 

Ram...ha bilkul hmari trh ..waise bhi tumne hi to kaha tha mujhse ek baar jb hme cancer k bare me pta chala tha to that life is so unpredictable ..hme iske hr pal ko jee bhr kr jeena chahiye..isiliye yhi soch k to tumhare bina bhi jindgi jee li

Priya..jbki hmdono sochte the ki ekdusre ke bina ek pal bhi jee nhi sakte...lekin...khair chhodiye ram hum to ye bate bht achhi trh jante hain ekdusre k bare me...

Dono ekdusre ko dekhte h kuchh der ki khamoshi k bad priya..hi khamoshi todti h aur bolti h...

Priya...ram m apse kuchh kehna chahti hu...jo in 30 salo me kabhi nhi kh payi

Ram...m bhi priya...aaj itne salo k bad mile h to kuchh to ajeeb phir se hona chahiye na...

Dono hasne lagte hain phir priya kehti h...

Priya...ram kya kabhi mne apse kaha ki aap jab bhi mujhse dur jate the mujhe bilkul bhi achha nhi lagta tha chahe wo mera pehle hi din apke ghr aate hi apka US jana ho ya KARWACHAUTH pr us jana ho bhale hi us waqt m apke liye kuchh bhi feel nhi krti thi lekin apke hone se ek security ka ehsas hota tha...jb ap nhi the to wo din mujse itne bade ghr me kante nhi kat rhe the.

Ram...hmmm janta hu m priya tabhi to hmare beech koi rishta na hote hue bhi m tumhe is trh akela chhod ke jana nhi chahta tha..lekin ...

Priya..hmmm...

Ram...priya kya kabhi mne tumse ye kaha ki tum jb bhi muskurati ho m jindgi ki sari pareshaniya bhul jata hu aur unko tolrate krne ki ek ajeeb si himmat aa jati h tumhare chehre ki muskan dekhkr

Priya...hmmm janti hu m tabhi to mere chehre pe ye muskan aa jati h taki m apko khush dekh saku,sukun se sans lete hue dekh saku

Ram muskurata h 

Priya...ram kya mne kabhi apko kaha ki m ye bindi janbujhkr tedhi lagati hu taki aap ise theek kre i alwys want ur attention on my bindi i dnt know why...may b i wanna feel ur touch

Ram...ha priya m janta hu isiliye to chahe jaha bhi ho jaise bhi ho ye tedhi bindi mujhe dikh hi jati h aur aaj bhi dikh rhi h

Priya...to phir sahi kyun nhi kiya i am still waiting fr this

Ram...yhi sunne k liye ki itne salo bad bhi tumhe mera intezar h ya nhi..

Phir ram priya ki bindi theek krta h aur priya apni ankhe band kr leti h ram use muskurate hue dekhte h aur ab dono bht kareeb rhte h itne ki ekdusre ki sanso ko mehsus kr sake

Ram...priya kya kabhi mne tumhe ye kaha h ki tum jb aise ankhe band krk mere samne hoti to mujhe bht achhi lagti ho...tum mujhe sote hue bht achhi lagti ho ,tum mujhe nashe ki halat me bht achhi lagti ho...

Priya...ha ram m janti hu...

Priya ka chehra hatho me le leta h priya ki dhadkane achanak tez ho jati h,sanse bas me nhi hoti h

Priya...pr kya ram mne kabhi apse ye kaha ki i am crazy about ur touch..m hr pal apko apne aap me mehsus krna chahti hu apke chhune k andaz ko kabhi nhi bhula pati apki sanso ki mehk ab bhi meri sanso me h apki dhadkane ab bhi mere dil me dhadkati h...

Ram...m janta hu priya...pr kya kabhi mne tumse ye kaha ki m tumhe hr hadh se bhi jyada pyar krna chahta hu shayad itna ki kisi ne kisi s na kiya ho...tumhari hr sans pe apna naam likhna chahta hu taki koi use mita na sake...i am craving about ur love passinatly...i wnna touch u ,i wanna kiss u,i wanna hug u...i jst want only u...

Priya...ha ram m janti hu..tabhi to m aaj apke itne pas hu pr kya kabhi mne apse ye kaha ki mujhe apke aur mere beech hawa ka bhi ana pasand nhi h..m to apka pyar apke sath bhi nhi bant sakti wo sirf mera h aur mera hi rhega..

Ab to rampriya k beech hawa k liye bhi jagah nhi bachati...they r not in thier senses bt its not tooo longr...bcz of priya wo turnt se jaise hosh me aa jati h aur khadi ho jati h...

Ram...kya hua????

Priya...mujhe jana h

Ram...are lekin achanak kyun???

Priya...ram bht der ho gyi h sb log kya sochenge????

Ram...kya sochenge????..koi kuchh nhi sochega...aur tum bhi mt socho

Priya...lekin ram????

Ram...ssshhh...bht bolti ho tum

Dono ekdusre ki ankho me dekhne lagte h aur bhagwan se dua mangte ki ye sath kabhi khatm na ho aur ye pal yhi tham jaye...is pal k baad dusra pal jindgi ka chahe jaisa ho pr usme bhi humdono ka satha aisa hi ho...
Tabhi achanak barish ho jati h aur dono ek sath kehte h

Lo ab to hmari dua pe bhagwan ne bhi permission de di..aur dono hasne lagte h






              scene 5




ram priya ko uthane k liye jhukta h...

Priya...ram ye kya kr rhe h???

Ram...kya kr rha hu mtlb utha rha hu aur kya kr rha hu

Priya ...are apni umar ka to khyal kari koi haddi waddi khisk gyi na to sb romance bhari pd jayega...

Ram...excuse me mama..kya umr m kisi bhi jawan ladke se jwan hu..samjhi aap qki m dil se jwan hu insan buddhha tb hota h jb wo mehsus krta h ki wo buddhha h..aur waise bhi jb tum samne ho to...

Priya...bs ha jyada hero bnne ki jarurat nhi h...aur aap mujhe le kahan ja rhe h...

Ram...wo samne ghr dikh rha h wha

Priya...ram this is going to b enough...mujhe ghr jana h

Ram...kya ghr ghr laga h ,thodi der k liye ghr ko bhul nhi sakti ho...30 salo se usi ghr me to h kuchh pal m mang rha hu to tumhe ghr jana h...

Priya...are lekin ram aap jante h na ghr jana bhi to jaruri h

Ram..ek din ghr nhi jaogi to tufan nhi aa jayega

Priya...hmmm

Ram...hmmm...waise bhi ghr jayenge to phir se whi life ho jayegi mr. & mrs. Kapoor ki duniya.

Priya...ha whi ghr,whi bachhe ,whi grndchildren aur whi pati...

Ram...oye aur whi pati kya...heyn pati to whi rahega 30 salo se whi h aur agle 30 janmo tk whi rhega...whi patni kyun nhi bolti???

Priya...qki patni bhi to whi rahegi pichhle 30 salo se whi h aur agle 30 janmo tk whi rahegi...

Dono hasne lagte h aur jane lagte h...

Priya..thank u sooo much ram hamesha mere sath rehne k liye..aur mr. & mrs. Kapoor ki duniya se nikal kr rampriya ki pyar ki duniya me ek bar phir se lane k liye

Ram...u r welcom my jan...apke liye to kuchh bhi madm ...pr sach batau to kuchh salo se sb ek routin jaisa ho gya tha...bada sa ghr ,bade sare log,badi badi jimmedaria inme rampriya ki chhoti si aur pyar bhari duniya kahi ghum ho gyi thi ...m whi duniya ek bar phir se hmare beech wapas bnana chahta tha...in 30 palo me 30 salo ko ek bar pheer se jeena chahta tha aur ye tumhare bina to ho nhi sakta tha isiliye to tumhe yha bulaya...

Priya...aur isiliye to m yha apki priya bn ke aayi ...apka pyar bn k aayi ...na ki mrs.kapoor...i love u sooo much ram

Raam...love u tooo jaan...waise umr k sath sath tumhara kuchh weight bhi badh gya h kya thodi bhari lag rhi ho

Priya...ram...kya h kyun aap mujhe chhedte h hamesha...apse to jyada bhari nahi hu na

Ram...are chhedne ka wada jo kiya h aur tum mujhe kyun hamesha mota bulati ho 

Priya...mne kab mota kaha ...??.. Maine to bs yhi kehna chaha ki aap thode bade h

Ram...oye phir...

Priya...are ram...bade...achhe lagte hain na...

Dono ladte jhgte apne 30 palo ko enjoy krne chale jate h ...aur main yha baithi unhe tb tk dekhti rhti huDay Dreaming jb tk wo meri ankho se ojhal nhi ho jate aur unhe dekhte dekht sochti hu ki akhir aisa kya h inme...ki 30 sal beet jane k baad bhi utna hi vishwas,waisa hi sath,waisa hi rishta itni majbuti se barkrar h...kitni bar mile bichhde pr kabhi juda nhi hue,kitni bar lade jhgde pr khafa nhi hue...kitni bar logo ne mitana chaha pr bahar hi rhe khija nhi hue...ufff...kya jadu h inke rishte me jo inko ekdure se aur hame inse aajtk jode hue h...kya kasak h inke rishte m jo is rishte ki grmahat kabhi km hone nhi deta...inko dekh kr mujhe ek gana yaad aata h is waqt...

Ek tera sath humko do jahan se pyara h
Na mile sansar tera pyar to hmara h tu h to hr sahara h 
Ek tera sath...

Hmmm...shayad isiko pyar kehte h ...aur shayad...isiliye ye hame ..

BADE ACHHE LAGTE HAIN






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Edited by veena23 - 2012-06-19T17:10:32Z
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Posted: 2012-06-19T16:57:57Z
wow Veena.mazaa aagaya ,bahut khoob bahut khoob. truly awesome dear.Edited by SriB - 2012-06-19T17:49:19Z
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Posted: 2012-06-19T17:16:02Z
Kya idea nikala he di.. Superb..realy enjoyd it..
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Posted: 2012-06-19T18:30:50Z
awsome veena. loved it. thanks. congrats on becoming goldie
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Posted: 2012-06-19T18:50:59Z
Veena first of all Congrats on becoming a Goldie..
 
Very nicely written story.. Enjoyable.. liked it for its different style of presentation...
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Posted: 2012-06-19T18:58:51Z
Originally posted by anizor


awsome veena. loved it. thanks. congrats on becoming goldie
THANK U SOOO MUCHHug
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Posted: 2012-06-19T19:00:47Z
Originally posted by Lavi_961


Kya idea nikala he di.. Superb..realy enjoyd it..
HugHug
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Posted: 2012-06-19T19:03:03Z
Originally posted by SriB


wow Veena.mazaa aagaya ,bahut khoob bahut khoob. truly awesome dear.
THNK U DI----HugHug
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