OS: Main Kaise Jeeyungi Tere Bin...

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Posted: 2012-06-06T10:55:17Z

Hey everyone!

Wrote an OS, continuing from the precap of yesterday's episode! I hope you all like it! Don't forget to like/comment!! 

ENJOY!


Police: Mr. Ram Kapoor, you are under arrest. 

Ram: Kya? Kis liye?

Police: Aapki pharmaceutical company ne nakli dawai bana kar hazaron log ki jaan khatre mein daal di hai.  Iss ka investigation chal raha hai. 

Ram is in complete and utter shock.  His pharmaceutical company producing fake medication?  Who would do such a thing?  Just then Priya enters with a file in her hand.  

Priya: Ek minute.  Iss hadse ka zimmedaar who shaks hai jo iss company ka maalik hai.  Aur company ka maalik Mr. Ram Kapoor nahin, main hoon.  

Ram: Ek minute, Ek minute, yeh sab.

Priya cuts him off: Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor. 

She hands the inspector the file that she had found in Ram's office, with the transfer of company's papers and Ram's statement clearly indicating that he had transferred the company in her name.  

Ram: Inspector, please meri baat suniye. 

Ram, in his thoughts: Priya, yeh tum kya kar rahi ho?  Tum jaanti ho in sab ka matlab kya hai?  Why are you doing this Priya?! 

Priya cuts him off again: Aap shayad bhool rahe hai Mr. Kapoor.  Aap ne yeh company meri naam kar di hai.  In kharab dawaiyon ki vaja se jo bhi haasa hua, un ki moral responsibility, company ke owner hone ke naate, meri hai.  Main arrest ho ne ke liye tayyar hoon.  

Priya looks at Ram, her eyes screaming out the pain, the anguish and the love she felt for him all in one.  

Priya, in her thoughts: Ram, main aap pe kabhi koi aanch nahi aane doongi.  I'm sorry Ram, maine aap ko in kahi dinon mein bahut chot paunchayi hai, bhaut dukh diya hai aur main jaanti hu iss baat se bhi aap ko bahut dukh hoga.  Lekin, main aapse bahut pyar karti hu.  Main aap ko kuch hone nahi doongi, aur agar is ke liye mujhe jail, ya aap se door jana pade, toh bhi mujhe manzoor hai. 

She slightly smiled and turned around and walked out of the house, escorted by the police. 

Vikram: Ram tu chinta mat kar, hum bail karwa denge aur pata lagayenge iss ka zimmedaar kaun hai. 

Ram turns to his family: Main police station jaa raha hu, bail ka intezaam kar ne aur phir office, yeh pata laga ne ke iss ka zimmedaar kaun hai aur itna bada haadsa kaise hua.  Vikram, tu aur Neha ghar chale jao. Tumhare bacche tumhara intezaar kar rahe honge. 

He turns to the Sharmas:  I'm sorry.  Meri vaja se yeh sab' Aap log please chinta mat kijiye, main sab sambhalunga.  Choti, tum log bhi ghar jao.    

Rishabh: Bhai main bhi aap ke saath chalta hu.  

Ram: Haan chalo. 

They leave Lalaji's Kothi, leaving everyone stunned and confused. Ram called his lawyer and told him the entire story.  They were driving to meet him first to figure out the bail papers and try and get Priya out as soon as possible.

Ram had a million things flying through his head but right now the only important thing was to get Priya out of jail.  He couldn't bear to see her in there for even a second. 

Rishabh: Bhai, main jaanta hu in sab ke peeche kis ka haath hai. 

Ram: Kya? Kis ka? Kis ne kiya yeh sab?  Chodunga nahi main uss insaan ko

Rishabh: Lekin aap ko vaada karna hoga ke aap mere baat par yakeen karenge.  Maine khud dekha hai usse ghaltiyan karte hue.

Ram: Yeh tu kya keh raha hai Rishabh? Tu ne mujhe bataya kyun nahi? 

Rishabh: Main aap ko pareshaan nahi karna chahta.  Mujhe laga ke main handle kar sakta hu.  Aap waise bhi bhabhi ko leke pareshaan the.  Lekin'

Ram: Rishabh batao kaun hai jo iss haadse ka zimmedaar hai.  Uss ne sirf Priya ko jail mein nahi dilwaya, balke hazaron logon ki jaan khatre mein daali hai.  Main usse kabhi nahi chodunga.

Rishabh: Bhai who Sid Bhai hai.  Ussi ne yeh sab profit ke chakkar mein karwaya hai.  

Ram slams on the breaks.  He looks at Rishabh with wide eyes.  His conversation with Sid comes rushing back to him.  He had put him in charge of the company until Priya doesn't fully take over.  What the heck has he done? 

Ram: Sid? 

Rishabh: Jee bhai.  Sid.  Jiss ne aap ne uss company ki zimmedari di thi.  Wahi in sab ka zimmedaar hai aur ussi ki vaja se bhabhi iss waqt jail mein hai.  Aap jaante hai Bhabhi aap ko kabhi jail nahi jaane deti.  Isiliye uss ne yeh papers saamne laake khada kardiye.

Ram: Haan jaanta hu Rishabh.  Priya kabhi mujhe jail nahi jaane degi.  Chahe usse khud hi kyun na jaana pade.  Lekin main Sid ko chodunga nahi.  Aakhri baar, haar ke maamble mein maine usse chod diya.  Lekin iss baar, hazaron logon ki jaan ko khatre mein daala hai uss ne.  Usse uss ki kiye ki saza zarur milegi.  

They arrive at the lawyer's office.  Ram explains the whole situation to him and tells him to get Priya out at any cost.  If for whatever reason Sid cannot be held responsible, then he will take the entire blame.  Priya should not, at any cost, be held responsible because she is completely unaware of what's going on in Kapoor Industries.  He transferred the company to her name so that she can be apart of it but she has not yet started to familiarize herself and become an active part of it.  The lawyer makes a few phone calls and then turns to Ram. 

Lawyer: Sorry Mr. Kapoor.  Aaj bahut dehr ho chuki hai.  Aaj bail nahi mil sakti.  Hum kal koshish karsakte hai.  Lekin aaj ki raath Mrs. Kapoor ko jail mein hi bitaana padega.  

Ram: Yeh aap kya keh rahe hai? Aise kaise Priya ko raat jail mein kaat ne doon?  Aap jo bhi paise maange, main dene ke liye tayyar hoon. 

Lawyer: I'm sorry Mr. Kapoor.  Lekin courts aaj ke liye band ho chuke hai.  Kal tak hum kuch bhi nahi kar sakte. 

Rishabh: Bhai aap chinta mat kijiye.  Sab theek ho jayega.  Main Sid ka pata lagane ki koshish karta hu.  Aap ghar jaake araam kijiye, pichle kuch dinon mein aap bahut pareshaan hai.  

Ram: Nahin, mujhe koi araam nahi karna.  Please mujhe kuch dehr ke liye akela chod do Rishabh.  Tum ghar jao.

He stands up and storms out of there.  He gets into his car and drives to the police station.  He parks his car and sits there, thinking, reflecting.  Priya was inside and there was no way he was going to leave her there and go home.  And he couldn't go talk to her because she was still doing her charade with him.  

Ram: Yeh tum ne kya kardiya Priya.. Why? Mujhe aur apne aap ko itni takleef dene ke baad tumne apne aap ko jail mein dilwadiya? Kyun karti ho mujhse itna pyaar aur kyun nahi karti mujhpe vishwaas Priya? Hum dono ne aisa kya kardiya ke itna sab kuch sehna pad raha hai?

Ram doesn't even know what to feel anymore.  He doesn't know if he should be angry or hurt, or upset, or confused, or anything.  He is angry at Priya for not trusting him but at the same time his love for her is overpowering his anger and his hurt.  The thought of her spending the night in jail is hurting him more than what she has said or done in the last few days.  He has all these feelings flooding through him and all that comes out is tears.  Tears flowing freely, he slams his fist on the steering wheel, puts his head down and starts to sob.  Why was destiny playing this cruel game with their lives?  Why was Priya bent on wanting a divorce from him? Who was compelling her to take this drastic step when he knew she loved him more than herself?  Why was she constantly hurting him, even though she didn't mean it? Why couldn't she trust him and tell him what was going on and let him help her?  Why did she take the blame and land herself in jail? Why? 

Meanwhile, Priya is sitting on the ground in a cell.  She hugs her knees and puts her head down, tears silently flowing from her eyes.

Priya, in her thoughts: I'm sorry Ram.  I'm really really sorry ke maine aap ko itni takleef paunchayi yeh sab baatein kar kar.  Maine aap pe vishwaas nahi kiya. Main sirf aap ko woh Maa ka pyaar dilwana chahti thi jiss ke aap hakdaar hai aur jis ke beger aap ne itne saal kaate hain.  Yeh sab maine isiliye kiya.  Main aap ko khona nahi chahti thi.  Nahin chahiye mujhe yeh paisa, yeh property, kuch bhi nahi chahiye.  Mujhe sirf aur sirf aap ka pyaar aur aap ka saath chahiye Ram.  Lekin ab mujhe aisa lag raha hai ke dheere dheere main aap ko khone lagi hoon aap ko itni takleef paunchate hue.  Mujhe woh dard dikh raha hai aapki aankhon mein.  Please mujhe maaf kardijiye Ram.  I really love you Ram.  

The night passes slowly but surely.  Soon its morning, and Ram still has his head down, resting on the steering wheel.  Someone taps the window of his car and he gets up with a jolt.  He sees the lawyer standing there with the papers in his hand.  He immediately jumps out of the car and they both go in together. 

Meanwhile Priya is sitting with her head resting on her knees.  The inspector comes and unlocks the door.  Priya lifts her head up at the sound. 

Inspector: Kisi ne aap ki zamanat karwadi hai.  Aap jaa sakti hai.  

Priya slowly stands up and walks out. 

Ram sees Priya turn the corner and stop in her tracks as she sees him.  Her hair was open and messy, her sindoor was slightly smudged.  Her eyes were red and swollen and she had dried up tear marks on her cheeks.  

She turns the corner to see Ram standing there with a couple of tears still rolling down his cheeks.  His eyes were red and swollen and his hair was messy.  He was wearing the same suit he was wearing last night at the party.  Seeing his state, Priya just couldn't control herself.  Tears flooded her eyes.  Forgetting everything that had happened in the last few days, she ran to him and threw herself on his chest, starting to sob.  Ram automatically wrapped his arms around her and held her tight, tears flowing from his eyes too.  

Priya: I'm sorry Ram.  I'm really really sorry.  Maine aap ko itni takleef, itna dard diya.  Mujhse ab aur nahi ho raha yeh sab.  Mujhse aap ki aankhon mein yeh dard aur nahi dekha jaata.  Main sach mein aap ko khona nahi chahti.  Maine sirf isiliye kiya yeh sab taake aap ko sachaai ka pata chale aur itne saalon se jo Maa pyaar aap ko nahi mila, woh mil sake.

Ram lifts her head off his chest and makes her look into his eyes. 

Ram: Priya, yeh tum kya keh rahi ho? 

Priya, still sobbing: Krishna Kapoor, aap ki asli Maa bekasoor hai Ram.  Niharika ne usse phasaya tha.  Aur Jayesh Karekar uss ka pati tha, aap ke bauji se pehle.  Woh yeh sachaai jaanta tha.  Isiliye main usse milti rahi, ek plan banane ke liye taake yeh sachaai aap ke saamne laa sakun. 

Ram: Priya, tumne mujhe bataya kyun nahi? Mujhpar vishwaas kyun nahi kiya? Aur hamare pyaar ko dosti ka naam kaise de sakti ho Priya?  Kaise keh sakti ho ke tum mujhse pyar nahi karti?  Tum jaanti bhi ho mujhe uss baat se kitni takleef hui thi?  Aisa kya kiya hai maine jo tum mujhpar iss tarah se vishwaas karna band kardi ho?  Kya abhi bhi Kartik ki vaja se.. 

Priya cuts him off: Nahi Ram.  Aisi baat nahi hai.  Main nahi jaanti.  Mujhe laga ek yahi tareeka tha, aur aap ki property ko bhi bachana chahti thi.  Isiliye divorce, natak, woh sab.  (She starts sobbing again).  I'm sorry Ram.  Mera woh sab baatein ka matlab nahi tha.  Main sach mein aap ko khona nahi chahti thi Ram.  Main itna khush thi jab aap ne divorce dene se mana kardiya, lekin phir aap maan gaye, aur sab mere plan ke mutabik jaa raha tha, lekin andar hi andar mera dam ghut raha tha Ram.  Main dar gayi, ke in sab mein sach mein aap ko kho na doon.  Main aap ke beger nahi jee sakti Ram.  (She hugs him again, sobbing) Nahi jee sakti aap ke beger'

Ram is speechless.  He doesn't know what to say or to feel.  Whether he should be happy or still upset that she didn't trust him.  But seeing her in this state, sobbing and crying, and her fears and love screaming out of her eyes, he forgot everything.  After all, Priya was the most important thing in his life and he loved her.  And when you love someone, you forget all your pain seeing theirs.  Whatever happened, happened and there was no point dwelling on the past now.  He would fix this.  He would take care of everything else later but right now, the most important thing was Priya.  He had to take care of her first.  He held her tight.  This was all he had wanted.  For her to be in his arms.  

Ram: Shh Priya, please rhona band karo.  

He continued to hold her tight until she finally stopped sobbing.  She didn't loosen her grip at all.  She held him tight and stood there, with her head on his chest, feeling and listening to his heartbeat, the only thing that could calm her down.  When Ram felt she was composed,  he lifted her head off his chest again.  He tucked her hair behind her ears and made her look into his eyes.  He wiped her tears.

Ram: Priya, I love you.  Bahut pyaar karta hu tumse.  Maine tumse kaha tha na ke chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye, main hoon tumhare saath.  Hamesha.  Aur aaj bhi, tumhare mujhpar vishwaas na karne ke baad bhi, yeh sab baatein jaan kar bhi main hoon tumhare saath Priya.  Mere liye, iss duniya mein tumse, tumhara pyar aur tumhara saath se bad kar kuch bhi nahi.  Tum jaanti ho in kuch dinon mein mera kya haal hua hai Priya.  Tum mujhse door jaati rahi, aur yeh sab natak karne ke bawajud bhi mujhe tumhari aankhon mein sirf dard aur pyaar dekha hai.  Tum chahe mujhse kitna jhoot bolo lekin tumhari aankhen kabhi bhi mujhse jhoot nahi bol sakti.  

Priya, with tears flowing out of her eyes again:  I love you too Ram.  Please mujhe maaf kardijiye.  Bahut badi ghalti ho gayi mujhse. 

Ram shakes his head and wipes her tears again. 

Ram: Priya, tum ne itna bada ilzaam apne sar pe kyun le liya? Why Priya? Why? 

Priya doesn't answer his question.  She hugs him again and Ram holds her tight.  He doesn't bug her about it either.  He knows the answer.  He knows she would be willing to do anything to protect him.  He knows the extent of her love for him. 

Ram: Priya ab main sab jaan gaya hoon.  Ab main sab theek kardunga.  

Priya nods without lifting her head.  Tears still streaming down her cheeks, she holds Ram tight and listens to his heartbeat steady and slow down.  That was all she had wanted to do for the last few days.  She was finally in his arms.  Now, nothing else mattered.  All that mattered was that she was with her Ram.  As long as they were together, they would handle everything. 

Edited by azk92 - 2012-06-06T11:03:14Z
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Posted: 2012-06-06T11:08:22Z
Big smile hey this was totally cool wish something like this happens in the show
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Posted: 2012-06-06T11:20:00Z
Wow very nice... I wish something like this would happen in the show. But even if nothing good happens in the show we still have ur amazing OS's to rely on! Keep up the great work!
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Posted: 2012-06-06T11:21:13Z
AMBY you are the best...Kya likha hai tumne...so touching & beautiful...
you are the best best best...amazing





kaash aise show me hona chayiye...par no expectations from CV's...no expectations no frustrations...

But if this does not happens in show also it will be ok...bcoz now a days im happy reading all in the ff,ss,os in the forum...that's enough for me...




Thanks for the update...Rock on Buddy...Big smile




Edited by kaviya10 - 2012-06-06T11:53:44Z
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Posted: 2012-06-06T11:26:16Z
wow, I so wish aisa hi kutch show mai ho, so lovely.. Superb update.. Love it. you rock gal.Clap
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Posted: 2012-06-06T11:44:38Z
a complete emotional update,...touches ones heart...great job amby...words just flow out...describing each part so beautifully...Thumbs Up
super loved it dear
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Posted: 2012-06-06T11:52:25Z
no words great job...hope it ends the same way in serial too...
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Posted: 2012-06-06T12:00:33Z
Hi amby.

I think someone in Balaji is  stealing your ideas too man!!! they must be poaching all day and taking all the good OSs and FFs  and passing them off as their own to the CVs who pass it on to the director who goes on to make a hash of all that has been given

I love the last lines: as long as they were together they would handle everything...

what more does love want but to be reciprocated... when people realise that loving someone is not just yearning for physical closeness but in actuality is all about spiritual and psychological closeness... only then will they know what true love is... and i sincerely think that no one epitomizes that love than Ram and Priya...
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