FF:Tu dil ki khusi dil ki pyas tuu updated pg 7 - Page 7

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by maris08


Sree
Superb..
I gaze outside my window


And wish upon a star.


I open up my heart


And let my thoughts drift afar.


A tear rolls down my cheek


As I reminisce the past.


I hardly got to love and live.


I will not let Your life leave me so fast.


And all because someone else


I Made a dumb mistake.


I don't understand why it was


Your life I had to stake.


But now there's no way I will let you leave


No matter how hard I had to try.


Because now you're up in heart


As my angel standing by


Loved these lines.. Absolutely touching and fitting to a Tee.




hahah thanks n love for self dear... u know after our cvs startex to shw ruthless trCks to us some how my heart started reactiing for that ghTiya stuff n so internal emotions expressions started to flowin this form...
Posted: 11 years ago
wow sree dii...awesomeee update...you are an amazing writer...👏 👏 👏

Loved it so much...and that POem was like icing on Cake...





Thanks for the update & PM...will be waiting for the next one...😃
and sorry for the late reply...😭


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