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Sharaa
Jay @Sharaa IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautifully written...👏

Awesome epilogue...
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Preet.Kc
Preet @Preet.Kc IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome.
lovely story, heart touching 🤗 ❤️
but sorry to aks i can't undestand the last part, who was the star? And was Khushi safe or the star was Khushi? I'm little bit confused😕
btw I madly loved the first part, Khushi's faith in her husband, lovely.
Great job 👍🏼.

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SrijhaSobti
SrijhaSobti @SrijhaSobti Senior Member
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was soo beautiful! I'm really becoming a fan of your stories! Quick question tho, I didn't understand who the star in the epilogue was... could you clarify that? Thnx
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Omoraboti
Omoraboti @Omoraboti IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Preet & Srijha!
 
Sorry for the conusion, 😳 in the first part Khushi was the star and that is how I intended to end the story. I could not spell out that she is gone.
 
The epilogue was solely written for those who did not want her to die .. so I twisted the plot a bit. There the star was Mitrashakti - to whom I dedicated this OS.
 
Thanks for liking it and all the sweet words! 😊
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Iqraimran
Iqra @Iqraimran IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
by reading i felt heavy and cried a little

after epiloge 
its so cute and so touchy love this one
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Arjuhisis
Arjuhisis @Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh a very emotional one - feeling bad and sad for Anu - didnt know about it
epilogue was very very good -
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kondhili
kondhili @kondhili IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Story... but i kind of liked the first part.
It had a different charm to it all together cant believe i actually said that i liked the 1st part since i am a sucker for Happy endings.😕

Liza
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PoochiePie
PoochiePie @PoochiePie IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was quite a heart-touching story..very very very well written.!⭐️
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cool_tweety
cool_tweety @cool_tweety IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭..good one!! but a very sad one.loved it.
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mayurisb80
mayurisb80 @mayurisb80 Goldie
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Posted: 10 years ago
I somehow loved the sad ending it seemed more perfect,eventhough I am only sucker for happy endings the way you wrote the OS,the sad ending just reminds us how precious life is,how unpredictable,if We love someone show them that why delay those feelings with guilt and sadness...you never know when you have to regret...and live with it...
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