OS: Irony of Time (epilogue on Pg. 7) - Page 7

Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for commenting so late!! But this was <3
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by ArshiRaiguptha


Good One.. 
But the First One was More Touching..
I don't believe in Happily Ever Afters.. 
So I am OK with the First One.. :)

Anyway, 
This one was amazingly written..!!! 
Loved It too..
:D

 
thanks dear! the first one came to me spontaneously :)
Posted: 11 years ago
wow...
nyc...
she left...and he delayed...
Posted: 11 years ago
i wana read more   so plz do pm me da update
Posted: 11 years ago
wow...lovely...

i wondered how u would place the star with the happy ending...but u placed it in so perfectly...just awesome...don't have enough words to describe it...

thank you for writing...please can somebody forward it to the team...we would love them to read it...

it bought tears to my eyes...
Edited by anjs - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by anjs


wow...lovely...

i wondered how u would place the star with the happy ending...but u placed it in so perfectly...just awesome...don't have enough words to describe it...

thank you for writing...please can somebody forward it to the team...we would love them to read it...

it bought tears to my eyes...
 
awwh anjs! thank you so much for your lovely comments .. it really means a lot to me that you liked it this much 😊
Edited by Omoraboti - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
oh wow ...that was...i'm speechless...so sad yet so beautiful...loved the last line...a fitting tribute indeed...
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow its beautiful , superb 
Posted: 11 years ago
Just came across this and I simply loved it, brought tears to my eyes and it was simply breathtaking,
if there is ever a redemption track one of the ways I would have wanted it to be like this, felt right in every way, once again, loved it!
Edited by SaJanLuv14 - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by SaJanLuv14


Just came across this and I simply loved it, brought tears to my eyes and it was simply breathtaking,
if there is ever a redemption track one of the ways I would have wanted it to be like this, felt right in every way, once again, loved it!
 
Thanks dear .. I never wanted Arnav to go down on his knees but I wanted him to realize ..
 
I was just too sad when I wrote it ..

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